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Aww thanks! I have to admit I'm getting more attached to the furry guys myself, lol.
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The Furballs have spent a long time essentially on their own, without having found another species with psionic potential.
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Yup. The Furballs aren't really capable of designing things like Temples and so. They are more preoccupied with eating and finding nice places to rest.
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Chapter 15 Jim and I held on tight to each other’s hands as we sprinted away through the ancient dimly-lit corridor. Furballs were ahead of us, urging us forward with high-pitched keening and its mental equivalent. I tried to ask the aliens where we were going, but only received an echo of the earlier exhaustion I had felt. The greater Mind had done too much too soon and it was having trouble recovering. All I could glean in exchange for my question was an image which made no sense. It was a
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Thank you very much, Cannd! to answer just one of your awesome questions, the only animals that were changed by the ancient inhabitants of Tantalus were the Furballs. You'll get to learn a little more about these people very, very soon. I've also started a post in the story discussion forum where I will be adding fun facts about the world of Tantalus, which you might want to check out!
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Feedback greatly appreciated, as always!
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Thank you! That is her in a nutshell. Also, your review reads almost like a juicy blurb for the chapter!
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Lol I know! Sometimes I wish I didn't have to go to my daytime job in order to dedicate every possible moment to writing, but alas, one must still pay the bills…
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Thank you very much! It's awesome when I get nice feedback like this, because it makes all the effort worth it.
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The poor furry guys aren't very good fighters, unfortunately.
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Thanks for reviewing! It's going to be action-packed from here on out!
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Chapter 14. Confrontation Rocks snapped and delicate glowing ornaments crumbled under the savage onslaught of the surface Destroyer. I recognized the model. It was a P-13, a planetary assault weapon suit reserved for action in the most hostile environments. Its destructive capability was unparalleled, and there was no pilot inside the transparent canopy that housed the robot's high-definition visual sensors. Its exterior was a burnished shade of dull gray, a titanium-derived alloy that was n
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Thanks for reviewing! It's awesome to hear you enjoyed it The sequel is indeed coming up - I just have to finish Tantalus first, lol.
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Yeah, a lot is riding on Jim's shoulders right now!
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some action-packed chapters are definitely coming!
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I would love to be able to explore an alien planet. I guess it kind of shows, huh?
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We'll get to see just how he uses his new abilities in the near future!
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Thanks, I think the chapter came out that way on its own.
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The next chapter will hopefully give a better idea of their fighting capability!
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Ouais!
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Lol I know, such is the life of story protagonists.
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Thanks! I decided against padding the chapter unnecessarily with extra stuff, although it did come out a bit short. There's more in store, though, that much I can promise!
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Chapter 13. Friends The first thing I noticed was that I could breathe. I opened my eyes, remembering everything instantly. I had been trapped in a nightmare water-filled tube. I hadn't been able to move, or speak. And my body… I sat up as if jolted by a live wire, heart hammering in my chest. I caught fleeting glimpses of a Furball-covered floor, of tall walls around me and of Jim lying nearby, naked like I was, but I blocked everything out. Gingerly, trembling, I brought my hands up to
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I think if I woke up to that I'd freak out even more.
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A furry, fluffy carpet thanks!
