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Passing out in an alley
albertnothlit commented on albertnothlit's story chapter in Passing out in an alley
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Passing out in an alley
albertnothlit commented on albertnothlit's story chapter in Passing out in an alley
Thank you very much. I definitely channeled my inner teenager for this one. -
Chapter 2. Passing out in an alley I walk past the bus station, hands in my pockets, walking slowly on purpose. I wonder if the fact that I'm not crying makes me a horrible person in some way. It's like this is one of those moments when you're supposed to cry, except I don't feel like doing it. All I have is a kind of numb emptiness that won't go away, and of course the guilt. I don't know. I feel like I could sort it all out if I had enough time, if I didn't have to go back to my parents
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Indeed. It's a very important bit. As always, thank you for reviewing!
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Indeed. Thanks for the tips as well - I added a link to the Trevor Project in the story description.
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Yeah, we'll learn soon enough... man, I'm starting to second-guess myself for posting this story. I don't want to depress people or anything
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Most stories I write end in at least a happy-for-now tone, but yeah, this one will be sad.
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I'm sorry to hear that, DrPaladin. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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Thank you for the feedback. I'm glad the title was good enough to catch your attention!
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Thanks, Valkyrie. I thought long and hard about whether to publish this story since I wrote it when I wasn't in such a good place myself, but hey, I figured I might give it a try.
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Chapter 1. Filming a cat. I walk down Cypress Avenue since it's the quickest way to the cliffs. It's a Saturday, so there are lots of people walking about, talking and just enjoying the day. I feel separated from them, though, like they’re all in color and I’m in greyscale. For the first time since I came to this town I feel like a complete outsider again. As if I didn’t belong here, not really, even though all my friends are here, and my girlfriend, and I’ve even begun to call this town hom
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Josh.mp4 by Albert Nothlit Prologue I walk into the hospital wondering if I should have come at all. I’m not family and only one person knows I’m visiting. I think about turning back, but it’s already too late to leave without looking stupid, so I go quickly down the hall straight to the reception. I keep my head low and hope not to run into anyone I know. If I do, then they will ask why I'm here, and because everybody knows about Nathan already they’ll guess why I came. I just can't
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Hi, my name's Josh. This is the story of how I met Nathan. He was... well. Weird, I suppose. Not much makes sense now, but maybe writing will help. Or not. Anyway, here goes.
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Yup, more goodness will come as soon as I clear up my schedule a bit!
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Hiya! Thank you for the kind feedback!
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Thank you so much! It means a lot
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Thank you for reading! Feedback from readers is the best thing in the world for writers, as I'm sure you know!
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Thank you so much, Carlos! Leaving the door open for more to tell is a personal weakness of mine
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It was a compromise made in desperation, but the Queen is tough and driven by relentless determination. She will not be idle for too long.
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Thank you for the feedback! I do hope I didn't scare too many people away, lol.
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*tries not to blush* Thank you very much! It was a hard choice for the Queen, but her kind of intelligence works differently from ours. And her emotions are complex and hard to predict.
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Thanks, man! I'm glad I was able to keep your interest, and more goodies will come very soon
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Thank you very much! I really enjoyed writing it.
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Thanks, Kalandor! I'm very glad I'm able to keep you guessing
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Oddly enough, I picture her longer and more sinuous than a spider...
