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Yup - hopefully the bleakness isn't too off-putting, but I did want to convey the seriousness of their situation.
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Chapter 9 The first night I spent in the bunker with Jim was horrible. The storm still raged outside, and Jim hadn't been joking when he'd said that even the domes had a hard time withstanding the fury of the elements on Tantalus. Our own dome had been dashed to pieces by the bombs, and I got to hear every groaning wrench, snap, and rumble as the debris outside was bent and twisted by the storm. The lights were off to conserve power, and as the incredibly long night progressed, I found my
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You're welcome! Thanks for the support!
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We'll find out soon enough
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thank you for the compliment, Isaac!
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yay! the panic attack was a success!
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Thanks a lot for the review, and the like!
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ditto on the claustrophobia - I think it shows!
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ditto on the claustrophobia - I think it shows!
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Thanks for the compliment! As for the fight explanation, it's coming very soon
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Chapter 8 BOOM. "What the hell was that?" I asked, as the echoes of what sounded like thunder on steroids faded away. "I don't know. Let me check," Jim asked. I heard him stand up but I couldn't see anything. There was a sound of Jim's boots on the floor, a chair being scraped back, then the tapping of keys. I tried to go sit on the nearest bunk bed but ended up tripping and falling on my face. "Ow." "You okay, Kyle?" "Fine," I said, rubbing my chin. For some reason, not being able to see
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An in-depth, thought-provoking analysis as always. Thanks!
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Cool! Can't wait to read more of your awesome furballs
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Hmmm, time alone you say? Next chapter might bring a little surprise!
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Thank you, Robert. I like using description in challenging environments, like when there's no light, because it forces you to reevaluate how much your perception of the world can come through other senses.
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It's great to read how everyone is siding with the Furballs ^^
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Thanks - coming next Monday!
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Thank you! Glad you found it exciting
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hopefully this will redeem Jim in the eyes of readers - or not
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lol - guilty as charged on the cliffies
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An Irish story of magic for St Patrick's Day - Shamrock Lite
albertnothlit commented on albertnothlit's blog entry in Albert Nothlit's Blog
Hey Valk! No worries, since you're the 1st one asking, PM me your email and you get a free copy anyway! -
Chapter 7 "O'Brien to orbital, come in! Hello? Hello!" I heard the sound of Jim furiously hitting different consoles over the laboratory. He tripped once and swore loudly. In the meantime, I managed to stand up and groped blindly about until I found what appeared to be a wall. The lab was pitch black; I could see nothing, but I could feel. The ground was still shaking. "Anybody out there? Lisa? Donald? Dammit, anybody from the other stations!" Nobody answered. The tremors were dying down,
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An Irish story of magic for St Patrick's Day - Shamrock Lite
albertnothlit commented on albertnothlit's blog entry in Albert Nothlit's Blog
Well, St. Patrick's Day is here! To celebrate, I will be giving away free copies of this e-book to anyone interested in submitting an honest, unbiased review of it on Amazon once they have read it. Let me know if you would like a copy today! -
Thank you for all your reviews, EagleIsaac! It was very helpful for me to read your impressions as you were going from chapter to chapter. I'd love to hear your opinion once the new chapters come out!
