Ashdaw
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The end is sure taking it's time.
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I am so liking this story. This section appears to be the saving grace of Humankind.
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The last three chapters were immensely good. I so loved the VERY short battle scene and I did feel that Lucifel wasn't going to make things at all easy for anyone that was left. I can see that the future will be very interesting.
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Calm before the storm I guess?
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I agree with the other guys here, I was surprised that it has taken so long for 16yr old Damien to realise that he is a kid, not a saviour. Hopefully, this is not the END of the relationship with Marc.?
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Ooooh, poor Damien and Alan. This is very interesting.
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This was most defintely an interesting Chapter. Shatan the teacher... mmmm
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That was a REAL good chapter Cynus. I do like Alan, he has that wide eyed childish enthusiasm
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This all appeared to be too easy, could it be that this is a lull? You are a sneaky one Cynus.
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Small but illuminating.
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This one was a little of a hiatus for me.. I am sure it is the quiet before the storm though.
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WOW, that was assuredly a shocker. I was taken back by how Damien's Dad NO thought for himself but for the Son he loved. It is a strange thing for the "devil" to be a woman but, I kinda like the idea very much. Shatan I have heard of before and is Arabic? You now have me hooked on this the second book.
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Hey there Pratoo from another Semi-Newbie.
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That was really good and I cried, I don't mind saying that. My birth Mum never really wanted me and disappeared when I was younger. She came back at a late time but still didn't want me or my brother and that last part, where Damien said goodbye to his Mum, was like I did with the idea of mine. I do still think though, that Damien's Dad knows so much more. Looking forward to the Next part. Thanks Cynus.
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I found that the toilet scene was predictable but I still like the idea of Damien being a little ballsy. I knew Marc would save the day but, I still found that predictable as well. The bullies got what those kind deserve but I am now more interested in Verina's supposed change of heart. I think Damiens Dad knows LOTS more than he has shown so far. More to go and like.
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I am very much liking this chapter. I didn't think that Damien would move as fast as he has so far and, I thought he would be more freaked out.
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Very revealing and I am so getting more into your story. The whole thing is as mature as could be hoped for.
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You have sure got me with this Chapter.
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Good start and it makes me want to go on.
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Thanks guys for the warm welcome. I won't be able to add any stories as my ability to do that is less than perfect. I do like reading though and am a rather voracious reader.
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Hi there all. I used to belong to this site a few years ago but it appears I can no longer sign in under the OLD name I know one or two people on here, one being Dabeagle. It's good to come back and see how much it has changed.
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I am enjoying this story so much. I didn't think I would but the SciFi element has got me. It is nice for a change, for there to be a STORY and not just blatant "fuck" me "fuck" me. You have certainly put a lot of effort into your story and I am sure that you have a lot more chapters to keep readers interetsed? That's how I perceive it anyway. Keep them coming. Ashley D
