Ashdaw
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This sounds like a very interesting tale. I must confess, I don't know what a Neko is? I thank you for writing this and placing it Here for us to read
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Beware of Laughing Blondes
Ashdaw commented on dkstories's story chapter in Beware of Laughing Blondes
This IS just a story, albeit a close to reality one. It will be interesting reading more and I am sure that this will be a tale well weaved. Freedom? a construct and not ALL are masters of their "destiny"? To quote Tennyson: Half a league, half a league, Half a league onward, All in the valley of Death Rode the six hundred. “Forward, the Light Brigade! Charge for the guns!” he said. Into the valley of Death Rode the six hundred. -
This is it? 😥
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And so the end is in the details?
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Am loving this story but when are we going to see more of it?
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Zikhrono Livrakha, Shalom.
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That is a terrible shame, even though I didn't know him. May he have peace, Shalom
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Politics and power? This is rather hard to follow sometimes as I am still inthe FIRST story mindset. Don't keep us in suspence for TOO long, I want the 3 musketeers to be back together.
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It appears not much has changed in the 24th century? still terrorists.Sounds like a case of no one is to be trusted? This is really requiring my understanding
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You sure are a good teller of tales and have a great mind. A Kiwi Azimov?
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Not same? but. that's ok. I get the feeling that the "others" are the Sharpelings? seems to be? You write so well and I love your use of English. Ashley D
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Thank you so much fo rwriting this story. I have enjoyed reading it and the emotions it elicited were many. I will look for the next installment, hopefully there is one? Ashley D
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Carlos fulfilled his want to atone for his brother, he loved Mira and Shay and Konstantin and he did what he had to. I so love this chapter and I truly have found your attention to detail refreshing. The last part, "Mira Andersen" Ashley D
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You be setting us up for a fitting end? Ashley D
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Well, I did like the quick fight but, I am sure you have more in store? Mira is ever the fighter and Konstantin sure surprised me Ashley D
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The loss of Lily really got to me, I had not expected that. I am sure that Konstantin will take time to recover mentally. SHay and Mira will be his support and I am looking forward to some payback. Ashley D
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I do so love your articulation. The story causes me to be rapt in the plot and the way it is worded. Thank you for making this tale available. I am looking forward to the next and next etc etc etc...
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All I can say is, James Bond, eat your heart out. Ashley D
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Bloody brilliant Stellar. I so like the way you handled the "BJ" part of the tale. These two, Shay and Mira, are more than sex buddies, they ARE IN Love. Thanks for the story thus far, I am waiting for more. Ashley D
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There is a lot of subtle happenings here. I KNEW that Mira was not gone from the vale. More to come and I am eager to continue. Ashley D
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No hatred from me, but just a tad more interested. You are spinning a good tale.
