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    Innocence Lost

    Ashdaw commented on Stellar's story chapter in Innocence Lost

    This may sound rather weird but I KNEW you were going to cause Mira's demise?? I do not believe he IS dead although it sure looks that way? There is something about Shay that makes me think he is in his infancy of power? To me, it is that Shay is becoming MORE................ time WILL Ltell.
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    Shield Of Spirit

    Ashdaw commented on Stellar's story chapter in Shield Of Spirit

    Well, I was a little taken back, another person? seemed too fortuitous? I just hope that this doesn't endup taking a life? None can be spared. Ashley D
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    Beautiful Resolve

    Ashdaw commented on Stellar's story chapter in Beautiful Resolve

    What a great friend is Mira. I know it is supposed to be that Mira has an attraction to Shay but so far, it has not been sexual as such.I do like the fact that you are spending a lot of time weaving the friendship and of course, the story.Mira has really become the focal point? I believe so anyway. I thank you for writing this story and it really is a fine tale. Ashley D
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    Perfect Bonds

    Ashdaw commented on Stellar's story chapter in Perfect Bonds

    Chapter 8 and STILL reading. I do so like this story.
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    Latent Revelation

    Ashdaw commented on Stellar's story chapter in Latent Revelation

    Nothing like being a tenneager @200+ years of age? I do like the fact that Mira is having an awaekening of his Human self. This will get better I hope?
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    True Connection

    Ashdaw commented on Stellar's story chapter in True Connection

    SO far it's a kiss right? no SEX. I like this and it appears that Mira is experimenting anyway? I so like this story and I can't wait to see where you are taking it.
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    Scarlet Indemnity

    Ashdaw commented on Stellar's story chapter in Scarlet Indemnity

    Loved this Chapter. I was taken by it and was with Mira as he bit that bastards throat out. I still want to know what Mira IS exactly and is there hope for his/shay's future? Time will tell I guess?
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    Illusive Intent

    Ashdaw commented on Stellar's story chapter in Illusive Intent

    WOW.....
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    Yesterday's Law

    Ashdaw commented on Stellar's story chapter in Yesterday's Law

    Just as well Shay is no dummy, he has been able to keep up with the acquistion of Knowledge.I do hope that nothing happens to any of them.
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    Dreaming No More

    Ashdaw commented on Stellar's story chapter in Dreaming No More

    WOW, this really has me interested. I am guessing that Shay won't be seeing his parents anytime soon? Now he has made another friend? maybe? Shay is getting stronger? So far he hasn't behaved like a 14 yr old who has lost everything and not sure where he is?
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    I must say that this story appears to be VERY interesting. I do like the build up.
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    Chapter 2 Cardiff

    Ashdaw commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 2 Cardiff

    It would appear that some malevolent force is out to get the boys? I am wondering why there would be these people now trying to end the lives of our heroes? The story is good and it keeps my interest. I am glad that you are pursuing the intent and that there will be more interesting events as it goes along. Thanks
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    A happy birthday to you, even a late wish is a good one.
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    Happy Birthday Mark
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    Lot's of birthdays, I hope yours has been a good one.
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    This one is very good and, like the last reviewer, I am glad you have seen fit to befriend Paul in a rather adult way, it's ok though. I look forward even more now to the rest of the story, thank you
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    I have enjoyed this first book and look forward to more. It is a shame that he is not someone who remains in the mind of others but, I expect the "veil" causes this? You write very much like Isaac Asimov in places and I really like that, he was a very prolific writer and your descriptions of inside the ship led me to say that. I can only hope that this will continue in a similar vein? Thank you
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    The reverence of the boys regarding the loss of their comrades was inspiring. I did like that touch and it moved me to think that such young boys could hold that personally.
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    Though I know you not, I do hope that your birthday was a good one.
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    This is different, I do like the story but I am waiting for something to "happen" if you know what I mean?
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    I am surprised that Paul would sit and think about what he was doing? I didn't at that age but, this is different and I guess having psionic abilities changes things.can't wait to see how things progress if Hamish meets Paul.
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    This is going really well and I am sure he will meet up with Paul soon.
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    Boy does this sound like the Catholic church a few centuries ago.? I can only hope that the author is looking at making a change in the status quo?
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    I am seeing a relationship here between Paul and this young Hamish that I am sure will show itself soon?
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    This has taken a sudden left turn? but I guess it is all part of the foundation.
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