Ashdaw

This sounds like a very interesting tale. I must confess, I don't know what a Neko is? I thank you for writing this and placing it Here for us to read

This IS just a story, albeit a close to reality one. It will be interesting reading more and I am sure that this will be a tale well weaved. Freedom? a construct and not ALL are masters of their "destiny"? To quote Tennyson: Half a league, half a league, Half a league onward, All in the valley of Death Rode the six hundred. “Forward, the Light Brigade! Charge for the guns!” he said. Into the valley of Death Rode the six hundred.

This is it? 😥

And so the end is in the details?

WOW, sex huh?

Interesting turn of events? he leaves one cadre, joins a different one and then falls in love with someone he has JUST met and forgets the reason he left the other? Good one.

Issac Asimov WOULD be proud of this tale. I look forward to more.

So far, I am intrigued.

Am loving this story but when are we going to see more of it?

Zikhrono Livrakha, Shalom.

That is a terrible shame, even though I didn't know him. May he have peace, Shalom

Politics and power? This is rather hard to follow sometimes as I am still inthe FIRST story mindset. Don't keep us in suspence for TOO long, I want the 3 musketeers to be back together.

It appears not much has changed in the 24th century? still terrorists.Sounds like a case of no one is to be trusted? This is really requiring my understanding

You sure are a good teller of tales and have a great mind. A Kiwi Azimov?

Not same? but. that's ok. I get the feeling that the "others" are the Sharpelings? seems to be? You write so well and I love your use of English. Ashley D