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In my opinion Robbie & Brad have some things to work on, although they're still in their infancy when it comes to their relationship. I believe Brad will keep his word when he said that they would be exclusive in the relationship between them. It seems that they are having typical relationship issues between young lovers whether straight or gay it doesn't matter because I believe all young lovers go through a trial period when the relationship is just starting to get serious.
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I think Robbie has some issues to work through. Brad needs to loosen up some before he has a stroke at a young age. I know they're together later on so apparently they work through the issues of the moment. It seems like Brad is being awfully hard on Robbie right now. He has to remember that Robbies had something's happen to him at home and it hasn't been really dealt with.
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The issue with Sam and Jake is that it should of never happened in the first place. On the other hand I think Robbie likes Brad as much as Brad likes him. I think this will turn out to be a great relationship between them. I have a feeling that Jake is going to be on the outside looking in wishing he was still on the inside. The story gets better with each chapter, on to the next one to see what happens then.
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Brad seems to be enjoying himself as he learns more about his sexuality. He just found out that a guy that was supposed to be with his sister was actually gay like he was.
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It was good to see Tonto was back. It seems that Brad is learning more about sex as this chapter progresses it'll be interesting to see if he winds up doing more with Doug next week when they go to Malibu to see Stephen and hang out with the celebrities that come and go from Greg's place. I can't wait to see what happens next week and beyond, especially since Brad is 17 now.
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Leave it to JP to cause a big stink at the hospital just to make sure that Greg and Stephen got to be together. I feel that Brad did everything he could think of to get his blood brother to wake up to be there for him. Steph made the right choice with Ned in order to show him that just because he was gay that was no reason to think that he was anything but a decent human being. I'm sure he enjoyed the sex with Greg as the only thing he'd had in a month was a quick blow job from Greg in the hospital the night before his discharge.
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Steph has his hands full now, with Armond living with him and Greg then there's Scott who is Alice's nephew staying there as well. Steph had trusted Jackie to be a good caretaker for Armond and that turned out to be a very bad idea. Steph is really stepping into the role of a housewife of sorts.
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I'm very happy for Stephen as it looks like he's fallen in love again. He deserves to be happy and with Greg he doesn't have to be something he's not. His business is doing good and for once in quite a while he can relax and enjoy himself without having to call J.P. for help with a problem. I'm really enjoying this series and your style of writing.
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I think things are going to get a whole lot livelier with Tonto moving in with the group already there. It's great that Roger now has the winery all to himself, and doesn't have to have anyone trying to get their hands on it or his inheritance from his grandfather. I think the money market account was a great idea so the family has to come to an agreement on how it'll be divided up.
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I really like the way that Stephen goes to JP when he has a problem that he needs help with. JP always seems to figure out what to do to help straighten it out. Stephen has a lot going for him and invariably winds up with something that requires outside help. I like the way that you take the reader on a journey with the story, sometimes you can tell what's going to happen and you keep reading just to see if you're right or not. I'm enjoying the series very much, I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
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This whole story has been a great read. I felt that I was actually a part of it at times. This chapter brought out a lot of emotional turmoil for JP and he had a lot of soul searching to do, in the end he said that the best thing for all of them was right there around the table. He said that without family you wouldn't have anything.
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I think that JP is having a lot of stress about the way things are going for everyone he cares about in his life. He's had a lot of death to deal with in recent years of family members and a partner he cared about quite a bit. He goes to New York early so he could see Sammy and got the cold shoulder and told to leave before he got hurt because of the riots that were going on at the time. I hope that he can find some peace very soon.
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I'll say that it seems like JP has been through quite a bit as of late. Just finishing the memorial service for his cousin and then coming home to find out that his condo had been ransacked and the television taken, his roommate attacked and left for dead then if that wasn't bad enough he gets arrested for the attack on Jason. He still has more to deal with as the lady that Andre had been with in Paris recently became a mother and JP asked her to come live in the United States and he would help with the baby. I'm going to get back to the story so I can see what else happens, it's been a great story so far.
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I really liked the way that all of the boys got closer to each other over the course of the summer. They all have their strengths and weakness's that just adds to the cohesiveness of the group. I look forward to more of the story in the future as well as other stories if you write more. Thanks for the great stories so far.
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I really liked this chapter because Ben has now found a boyfriend and has met new friends that share their memories of Graham and Francis, and also teach him a few things about Graham he didn't know. As the chapter progressed the love between Ben and Graham grew quite a bit, they're learning more about each other all the time and their not letting things get in the way of their time together.
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This story gets better with each chapter I read. I love how the characters of Brian and Pete are sticking around so that there's more interaction between them and the characters of Keith, Preston, Drew, Corey, Mike and Derrick. Keep up the good work. I'm very tempted to go back and start reading from the 1st chapter of the first book just to familiarize myself with how it all started, even though it tells at different times in this story.
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I'm enjoying this story as much as I did the first one. This chapter was an interesting one, I like how all of the guys are getting along and how they're all thinking about themselves, their partners, families and each other as well as taking the time to help others with problems such as Corey with his anorexia and Ben learning how to swim learning guitar as well as taking care of his mom.
