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Chapter 100: Final Chapter
Butcher56 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 100: Final Chapter
By the way Will looked at Ryan after he got to know him, he thought he looked familiar. It turns out to be true in that Ryan and Jeff had the same mother. I hope JJ can really start the healing process now that he found out about Shane committing suicide over the crap with the coach molesting them. Brad had the right idea of going to Hawaii for a few days after he & Will attended the funeral, that way Jeff could actually meet his father who happens to live in Hawaii. -
I'm sure enjoying this story it gets better as you get more into it. I love the drama of it then the sex afterwards just makes it more interesting. If it wasn't a story I'd say I want to meet this family. Way to go Matt & Wade, the way you both have come through the adversity you faced and then have great make up sex and then take the next logical step and become true partners in life. Not only has Matt & Wade been put through the wringer and come out stronger than before but I feel like everyone has come through all of the crap that has been thrown at them only to come out stronger than before. Will, Brad, Robbie, Matt, Wade, have all been through some tough times in the last year only to come out stronger. JJ on the other hand has been through some very rough times himself only he hasn't come through it very well. He has a very long road ahead of himself and I believe that he'll come out of it stronger and more aware of his actions with the help of his family.
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First of all I want to say that what JJ's going through should never have happened to him by a person in a position of trust. He's got a long and hard road ahead of him and one way for him to progress is with lots of support from the family. I'm glad that Will is not the bad guy in this mess and that he and everyone else seems to be getting along together. It would appear that Wade and Matt have finally figured out how to make their love life better. You go Matt!
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With everything that's going on Will happens to get a new computer for Christmas and gets it all set up and transfers all of his files from the old one to the new one and comes across the pictures that Michael took. After looking at a couple of the pictures he comes across one that shows JJ having sex with his skating coach and not liking it, when Will saw that he called Brad and Stef so they could see what he was seeing. On another note I have a strong feeling that Robbie might actually be finally starting to get what people have been trying to tell him for a while now. Lets hope that is the case.
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One things for sure Robbie needs to pull his head out of his ass in order to see that people are being truthful with him but he's to blind to see it. I hope for everyone's sake he wakes up soon. Wade's grandmother is a spitfire when she sinks her teeth into something she doesn't let go. She seems to be a very neat woman, with all of her faculties about her. She knew without even asking Wade if he would be her guardian and her second trustee. I hope that this family gets it together soon.
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This has been an interesting chapter to say the least. With all the shot Elizabeth has been throwing at Wade he sees the plot of her scheme only to block it before it could cause him any problems. The way she had the story come out that Wade had made a killing on the land deal in Idaho only to have it come out in open court that the money was being routed through various charities in Idaho for the underprivileged people of that state and it was set up in Oct. That took some of the wind out of her sails, another thing that deflated her more was the fact that her own mother was taking away her war chest, which belonged to her mother to begin with. It'll be very interesting to see what happens to Elizabeth when the courts in Virginia are through with her.
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Brad just doesn't get the fact that because of his actions over the last few months, Will came to the best decision he could think of for himself. Will has always been close to Brad but their relationship has been strained lately partially because Brad has not been around much lately due to business issues, and because of the decisions he made regarding Jeannie and Michael in Norway. Will is trying to make sure that the things that happened in Norway won't happen at home. Brad made an agreement with Will that Jeannie wouldn't be able to have any say so when it came to Will.
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Will seems to be coming to the best decision he can for his situation. I really think that the emancipation is in his best interest, with his mother losing it like she did in Norway and the decision's that were made regarding Michael and the pictures that were taken of Will & JJ without their knowledge, then the decision Brad made about not pressing charges against Michael and giving him the opportunity to resign and get a severance package. With that decision it appears as if Brad is condoning the fact that this employee took nude photos of the boys and is letting Michael get away with what he did. It's going to be an interesting few weeks to say the least.
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I don't think just firing Michael is going to stop his bullshit games. He thinks he has the upper hand over anyone at anytime, when he got put in his place by Will a 14 year old young man he got very mad then he tried to exert his authority again by assigning Will the smallest room in the condo that Stef rented for the family while they were in Norway for the skating competition. If that wasn't enough Michael had taken pictures of Will getting a blowjob from one of the skaters and gave them to the board for the skating group to cause problems. Will has enough problems he doesn't need more from Michael.
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It appears as if Michael is finally getting the message that Will isn't just some dumb kid that is going to be told when and where to do something. Also Will shouldn't have Michael around him if he's supposed to be watching over JJ, Will doesn't need someone reporting back to his dad about how many times a day he goes pee. I think that's what Brad would say as well especially in light of all that's happened. I also believe that this has put the two of them at a better place and opening the lines of communication between them.
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I believe that this ordeal may actually bring the family closer together, it's not going to happen overnight or relatively soon. It's going to take a lot of work on all of their parts. They're going to have to learn to communicate with each other if they want to salvage any kind of respect for each other.
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It's a very good idea for Stef to go with Wade to see how Will was doing with his new guard, they found out Will had runaway and he had good reason to do so. If I was him I would have runaway as well especially after what he went through in Paris then he gets told he had a new guard and then after Brad & Robbie leave the guard comes in and proceeds to spank him on the bare ass and then beats him with a belt leaving big red welts, if that wasn't enough the guy slaps him across the face. Will made a few bad judgments before leaving but a couple of good things he did was one to take pictures of the welts on his ass and two to lock up the guard.
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Will's in for a hell of a battle with Brad & Robbie, it's going to get very ugly around there for the length of the war. I think Will is going to be a bigger pain in the ass now more so because his dad was now trying to be the boss over him even though he hasn't been that way for a long time. As long as Robbie & Brad continue to treat Will like he's a little child things aren't going to get any better for any of them.
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I believe Wades dad will make sure that Elizabeth pays for what she putt Matt and Wade through just to add money to the campaign. Not only that but she won't be involved in his campaign as she was before. Wade has gone through the gambit with his relationship with both Matt and his father, and now it looks like things are going to get a lot brighter. I really like the way Wade has handled this situation with the trusts and everything related to them. He has a good head when it comes to business, he really knows what to look for as well as make sure that he comes out ahead in the end.
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I think Wade got his point across very well even though I think he should have waited to show his hand until later. Wade made sure that Carl knew he wasn't someone to mess with. I hope this helps his relationship with Matt especially after the crap they've gone through with the birth of the babies and everything that they're having to deal with because of Jeannie. Now that Wade has control of his trusts they should be able to do alot more for Reily and Tiffany. I wish them all the best.
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I think that all of the reviews you have on this chapter seem to hit the nail on the proverbial head. I think Wade, Tiffany, and Matt are all going to make some adjustments, as far as the living arrangements go. I think that the information Wade's mother gave him about Tiffany's family will make some interesting reading, as well as the financial packet Wade's parents had drawn up.
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It appears that everyone has issues to deal with. What Will is going through and what Gathan just went through with Kristen is a jolt to his manhood. Will needs to relax and not take every relationship to heart. It was a great story.
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Tony has a lot of emotions to work through and he doesn't know how to do it. It sounds like he's a strong young man he just doesn't let himself be emotional around others. He seems to bear the weight of his fathers death from aids on his shoulders, like he told the others when JP said that he got a letter from Jeff stating that his biggest regret was not being there to watch his son and daughter grow up.
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Gathan just told Kirsten's father that he had no idea who his daughter was, mainly because he has perceived ideals as to whom she went with. As Gathan put it her father thinks in lineage and balance sheets. I really think that if they want a life together they need to get away from her parents.
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It seems that Will put on quite a show at the club. Stef wasn't to thrilled to see the performance that Will put on. I'm not sure if Stef is mad at Berto or not because he asked Will to go against a promise he made about going into the back room at the club even if it was for a good reason. I hope JP's surgery goes well for him.
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Those cops didn't have any idea who they were messing with when they crossed paths with Kristen. Gatan's a very lucky guy to have her at his side.
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Gathan got a brand new truck and Brad has a busted gaydar I wonder what we're going to see from Will and his new bodyguard he's really cute and they don't know if he's gay or straight.
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This experience may make Will stronger, although for now I think he's going to need someone to help him deal with the things that happened to him during the time he was a captive. In the long run I feel like he was really enjoying his time in Paris because he was with family and got to see the city like no one else could that wasn't born there.
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It's nice to see Will and Brad talk things out about rules and the way he's treated by his parents. I know from reading the last chapters first that the repore they have now doesn't last. But I think for now it's a good thing.
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I'll tell you this 420 has been a happy day for me for 55 years now, that's my birthday. Gathan did a good thing putting Harry and Ed together. They seemed to be a couple before that day but they were apparently so shy that neither had ever acted on the feelings that they felt. I hope it lasts for a long time.
