Mikiesboy

yeah, well you suffer as i do, so the first would touch you .. and yes Shards is related to Forevermore, as you noted.

Traitorous Mind What to do with a broken mind? How do you get through a day? People look and see nothing wrong Yep, just faking it, I say Take a nap, and you’ll feel better Pop a pill, write a book Stop whining, won’t you please? In the mirror I dare not look. For in there I see what you do not the melting face and screaming fear I hide my pounding heart and I gasp for missing air Mirrors reflect the monster; me How do you get through a day? I laugh and say, pills are a p

i'd stay hidden if i were you... they may be a some readers with pitchforks... LOL

if that's why.. he's a dick.

cops are good to have around ...i married one, though He decided to become an ex-cop. Nice chapter ... i likeses it.

good chapter, C.

hope you feel better soon ..

and you call yourself Norwegian!! LOL..

no..lol.. bacon and egg sandwich then mmmmmm ... i love them .. even when they are cold and made for grab and go breakfast .. ok.. going now

Right? i don't know. anyway ..time for coffee #2 and some food ... fried egg sandwich i think. shame there's no bacon... oh well.

I got a very weird PM this morning. Last week i got notifications about someone liking each chapter of Changes. So i sent a PM saying thanks for reading it. Reply this morning: Mmm, i dont remember reading that story. But this is a very sneaky way of getting me to. i replied, i do not ask people to read my work.. however why would you like things you didn't read? just wondering. have a nice day. is this a 'thing' i dont know about.. liking chapters you didnt and have no intention of reading? Why would you do that?

i figured it was deliberate, i didn't think you tripped over it by accident..lol. no, it's a good piece as i said. this has been done before.. just like most everything we write today has in some form or other. i figured this was an experiment and i think showing the same scene in other POV would be interesting parts of that... as i said, if you're willing. I was not suggesting you change anything, sorry if i wasn't clear. I just think it would be interesting to see it done in other POV as companions to this piece.

O M G ... THIS IS LIKE MY MOST FAV WORD EVER ... I heard it as a kid, always directed to my brother, of course.. LOL gormless adjective | GORM-lus Definition chiefly British : lacking intelligence : stupid Gormless began life as the English dialect word gaumless, which was altered to the modern spelling when it expanded into wider use in the late 19th century. The origins of gaumless are easy to understand; the word derives from a combination of the dialect noun gaum, meaning "attention" or "understanding," and the suffix -less. This gaum has a related verb, also limited to dialect use, meaning "to pay attention to" and "to understand." Perhaps surprisingly, the four-letter gaum has multiple additional dialectal uses that are etymologically unrelated to these. Also noun-and-verb pairs, gaum means "a sticky or greasy mess" and "to smudge or smear especially with something sticky or greasy," as well as "a stupid doltish person" and "to behave in a stupid or awkward manner." Use of all of these pales in comparison to that of gormless, however, which is most frequently seen in British English.

Nicely written ... since it is written, are we to assume he stopped before ending it all? I think that's the only choice here. That is the thing about first person POV ... the dead (so far as we know) cannot write. If you're willing, please write this again in 3rd. It's compelling writing and a very strong short piece.

k, i've had enough.. good night all

nite molly xo

night Thorn...

yes, Sir ...

yay!!! hehee

writing? i dont know what that is.. nothing to read at the moment.. i'm okay..

bored to death

Lays down in the corner and watches his brain dribble out .......