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Awesome chapter, I hope that the Italy trip is great to complete what they started years ago
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Well I that was a bit if a curve ball, so the missed matched family is together sort of , I hope that the drama is more or less over for now at least , young Tristan is certainly going to give a lot more drama before everything settles I think
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Wow intense and explosive, I see young Tristan is remarkable and wow he certainly can control things which most people cannot, he seems to be the perfect assassin, pre-emptive strike before more damage , at least he does not keep it a secret.
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Great chapter, some time for fun and games and hopefully time to relax
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Awesome chapter, his senses are really sharp, he is still learning and getting frustrated is not helping much but as the saying goes"all in good time", the tower seems to be really important to Chris he still has a vast knowledge to learn and the tower is clever to impart only as much as he can absorb and put to use
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Wow talk about bouncing from one crap pile to another, it just never seems to end for old TJ, I hope that things settle down a bit soon
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Brilliant chapter, and he is getting his family close again, what better deal is there than that , plus the Colonel certainly found out that no secrets leave the compound better than "don't ask, don't tell"
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Awesome chapter, it seems that he is expecting trouble some time , however one can never be too slack about security for loved ones ,
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Great chapter, it seems that things we going well for now, I wonder when the next axe will fall
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Great chapter, a nice and easy time, it is almost too good to last , I wonder what awaits them
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Awesome chapter, we are definitely in for much more drama I think that his mother needs to be put on a truth serum and then put away , she is extremely toxic to one and all.
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Awesome chapter, so the family expands along with the others In Their own particular family on the estate.
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Wow, explosive chapter, what a curve ball, interesting developments, I really am beginning to have an intense dislike for his mother, she acts nonchalantly like a how,
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Awesome chapter, interesting fight , he is very good, he just needs some control, which he no doubt will get with training and time, he certainly is a PR in the making , on his own he can make it seem that he is approachable,
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Awesome chapter, things have definitely moved along, interesting times when the grandparents arrive
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Awesome chapter, and a great start to the new chapter of their lives , big families are are great but oh boy do they bring drama along with them at every gathering, definitely interesting times ahead
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Great chapter, what a way to gain a child , it seems that the home is going to be some sort of children's home very soon
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Great meeting with the women , no doubt there will be more than a few bumps in the road ahead
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Great chapter, crazy when you can sense trouble, it saves lives but it can be rather brutal, let's hope that they get to Guam unscathed
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Awesome chapter, amazing story, inspiring and what a roller coaster ride, it as a definitely brilliant, experience, I cannot wait for the next book , to continue this journey with TJ , JC and the crowd
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Great chapter, I also wonder what awaits them when they get to the registrar
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Great chapter, so we have moved on about 10 years , interesting times, the threat will never be gone diminished but never gone
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Awesome 👍 chapter, some normality for a short time, Tristan is certainly a tough character, the 2T's could make a formidable team , between them nobody could get to them or people who matter
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Excellent chapter, I hope that both by their courses sorted the guards are in for bit of a ride
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Great chapter , short and sweet but the adventure has begun (sorry added a quote block by accident)
