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    Chapter 6

    Absolutely true ,I did not expect it , but what you say is so very true , here in South Africa, looting around covid 19 is unsurprisingly rampant , with party officials helping themselves to whatever they want and to hell with the people who need it.
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    Chapter 6

    Oh crap I hope that he recovers well , but congratulations are definitely in order, exciting times ahead
  3. Wow intense chapter, great start to this story, lots drama and underhand dealings,by the authorities,
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    Chapter 15

    Awesome chapter, so they seem to be settling in well, no harm in having his mom nearby for cooking, school soon.
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    Chapter 24

    Great chapter, I don't know if I would drop everything to go to his mother, she obviously has not learnt anything or saw that she was in the wrong, but I hope that he has a bit of a forgiving heart, interesting chapter ahead
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    Chapter 5

    Awesome chapter, time has certainly flown by, it would seem that new adventures are ahead, let's hope that they are still on the same ship
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    Chapter 14

    Awesome chapter, great meeting and everything seems to be going well, interesting if the parents get together
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    Chapter 23

    Crazy good chapter, I think that he now is in a position to kick some butts , but firstly I think that they need to come clean about everything, the meeting with his mother is definitely going to be tough but needed
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    Chapter 4

    Interesting chapter, time has certainly flown by, now onto the next chapter of their lives , I hope that they are not seperated but time will tell
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    Chapter 22

    Intense chapter, I agree the security was not very good for him to escape so easily, however they are still keeping secrets from him ,he has every right to be upset and angry
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    Chapter 3

    Awesome chapter, so the parents are ok with the relationship, they seem to be very proud of their son.
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    Chapter 21

    Oh Sh*t so much absolute drama, some people are really dogs that deserve to be thrown under the proverbial train, intense times ahead
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    Chapter 13

    Brilliant absolutely brilliant, one major hurdle has been crossed, now to the first day of school
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    Chapter 2

    Great chapter, I think that they will become closer, new adventure back on land
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    Chapter 20

    Wow Great chapter, and you leave us with another curve ball,
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    Chapter 12

    Great chapter and another bigot bites the dust, I think that the road trip back home is going to be a lot fun of and hopefully no drama
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    Chapter 1

    Interesting chapter, it would seem that exciting times are ahead
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    Prologue

    Interesting story, sounds a bit totalitarian, we will see how it developments
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    Chapter 19

    Great chapter, some fun and a bit of drama, soon everyone will be in New York,
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    Chapter 11

    Awesome 😊 chapter, yip I agree there will be some hiccups Along the way
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    Chapter 13

    Thanks for this really awesome and entertaining story, I was much appreciated, I look forward to reading your next story
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    Chapter 18

    Awesome chapter, I am surprised that he took the reason for taking out Sebastian and Dylan, so well, I expected a but of a meltdown, but I am glad that he moved on and just seemed to accept it, I think that soon the next nature family will be in New York
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    Chapter 12

    Great chapter, so they all learn to captain the boat, Great stuff so they can all pitch in , fun ahead in a big way at the resorts
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    Chapter 15

    Wow he is seriously disturbed, driving himself to murder I think the Gemini will need to be unlocked to protect both of them
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    Chapter 17

    Wow intense chapter, decisions finally made, I wonder how this meeting is going to go, either to help him or send over the edge again, I also can't wait for the next chapter
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