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Thank you, Albert. I greatly appreciate your compliments.
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Thank you, Albert. Your reaction, and that of the other readers, to this chapter is more than I could have hoped for when I first wrote it.
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Thank you for the continued compliments, Albert. Ethan's a lit cannon at this point and they just need to make sure he stays pointed in the right direction.
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Thank you, Albert. At least they had a pleasant evening before the nightmare, so it balances out.
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Thank you, Albert. I'd thought about dragging the spy out a little longer or having him and Darius in a major fight. At the time I couldn't get it to work how I wanted in the short amount of time from start of writing to posting the chapter. While some of my other ideas might have been more exciting, I'm generally happy with the outcome.
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Thank you, Albert. The more he does it, the better he understands how not to use all his energy at once.
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Thank you, Albert. From the moment I started writing the book, this was one of the major moments I was aiming for.
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Thank you again, Albert.
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Thank you, Albert. I had a lot of fun writing the party. Especially Darius letting Casey know he wouldn't be a top if they hooked up.
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With each use, his understanding grows. Being mated finally could also be helping with his control.
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Thank you, Albert. In a way, it was fun to bring Michael to this level of insanity. With Ethan, during the edit/write I was able to give the dramatic effect I originally wanted. If it wouldn't have meant completely changing the order of the chapters following this one, I would have found a way to end it with Ethan's heart stopping.
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Thank you, Albert. I owe that improvement to the man who asked to work with me on editing this book, @Carlos Hazday. If you haven't read his books yet, I think you'd enjoy them. Chapters 1 through probably 15, there was so much he was trying to teach me without overwhelming me and chasing me from the edit process didn't get as heavily corrected. I had gone back once the editing was completed and tried to bring them closer to the standard we finished with. I know I'll always see errors when I read this, but the reaction to the improvement is most appreciated.
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I finally remembered who Randy is, but what does CJ's cousin have to do with a group of lycan? Since he's married to Ty Scott, are you throwing out there he could be a blood relation to an Elemental? Maybe I'm way off with this.
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I'm glad you found it too, Albert. I greatly enjoy seeing your reactions to the chapters. Aiden would have quickly ended Michael's life if the challenge would have been allowed. I had originally thought about going that route. I'm kind of glad I didn't.
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Thank you. Well, you do have another thirty plus chapters to go, plus three full books and one that's being posted to weekly to continue the adventures.
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Thank you, Albert. Maybe when he comes to terms with what happened he can accept his ability to protect people. He killed something more than a small animal for the first time, and a wolf at that. It kind of sucked when I was writing this, because trying to find what best fit name-wise for what I wanted hi to be was difficult. Still, as John said, Elemental seems to cover it and work the best.
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I greatly appreciate your continued compliments on the story, Albert. It's too bad Ethan didn't really get to see what he was causing, but at least Aiden did.
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Thank you, Albert. Some people don't learn. Others have reach the breaking point before they lean how to get away from an abuser.
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Thank you, Albert. After all that, I had to let Ethan punch Michael. If he was going down, he was going to make damn sure the instigator was in pain too.
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Just gonna sit here and smile
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Not the smartest to pick a fight with someone who's survived on the streets. They can be as unpredictable as a wild animal.
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Yeah, baby. He's a randy one. (tries his best Austin Powers impression)
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