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After thinking how great the first chapter was, I've gotta say... This one is just as great. The way you right makes it so easy to visually picture all of it.
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Thank you BattleLord
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Thank you Chris
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When we’re growing up, we are usually taught to respect those in authority, be it the police officers that protect us, teachers and school administrators we learn from, elected officials that govern us, all the way to the military that defend us. With a few exceptions I do have respect for the men and women in those professions; well, maybe not politicians. I grew up around the military and had respect for both the military and the police was instilled in me. Living on the streets thoug
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I'm not sure how I didn't see this story sooner, but I'm happy I found it. Talk about one hell of a good first chapter. I'd say you knocked it out of the ballpark with this, but would be more accurate to say it was a clean sweep in the world series Yeah, Robert had to make some hard choices and didn't use a rubber with Mel after getting a previous pregnant, but it sounded like she was trying to get knocked up anyways. Regardless of the decisions he made, he's ended up with two great boys. TJ has a lot to deal with not even counting starting at a new school. I've done that enough times to know how much that sucks. Josh sounds like he will be the anchor for the family. Again, Great Job.
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As always, beautifully done
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Thank you JP Hugz Thanks Freerider. Thank you Parker.
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Thank you JayT. Yeah, a lot of us have had messed up lives. The support people on this site give makes it kind of like group therapy.
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I almost didn't. I've had this one written for a while. Kept pulling it out, looking at it and closing the file. Sat with the finger over the cancel button for about 5 minutes before I actually hit save. Hugz to you tim.
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I stood in the deepest shadows at the mouth of the alley and looked to where the dim outer ring of light from the nearby street lamp cast its illumination onto the cracked and broken sidewalk. I felt much safer in the shadows, out of sight and unnoticed by anyone walking past. It was not like this was my first time walking around in a big city. I had lived in several around the world, but I was still adjusting to the fact that I did not have a home to go back to at the end of the night’s explor
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This is not exactly a continuation of Alone in the Night, but just some memories from that same time period.
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Thank you John Thank you Emu
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Thank you Acid This has been a fun ride for me as well and like with anything I write, I'm happy this site exists so I can share it with all of you. Thank you Defiance
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Thank you Jeugie Thank you JP As I said at the start of this, Chris was just a throw away character who served a small role and was meant to go away at that point. I guess it's obvious that I like him now and can't imagine the RWTP world not having him in it. I'll admit, I was thinking of you when I added the candles and cuffs as well as the collar comment. Thank you Onim Thank you as always CG
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Thank you Tazzle Thank you Mike Thank you Chris
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Thank you Jay Thank you so much Avid All of this book came out of one scene in RWTP where Chris abandons Michael. That was a last minute edition before I posted that chapter, but it gave the spark of change that spurred this. It was fun turning around a character that was just meant to fill a short role and never be heard from again. Thank you Lux for all the support I had thought about extending it since I've been having fun with this, but decided to stick with the original scale. Going where my inspiration takes me is the only way I seem to write. If Aiden and Ethan would decide to get off their tropical honeymoon and talk to me, I'd give them another book
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Thank you Mogwhy Thank you Normischell Thank you Jeff This project was a lot of fun for me, but sharing it with all of you is what I really enjoy.
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Thank you Tad Thank you JayT for all your support. I only kept you waiting since I always get writers block during the winter (when I have the most free time to write), that and I'm just evil that way Thank you as always Centex. This was actually the easiest book I've written. The completed first draft took 4 days and from that point it was just filling in the blanks. Granted, the word count more than doubled from the first draft to the completed, but it still felt easy and never forced. I think that's the reason I was able to put out three chapters a week. Writing dialog between characters sometimes is harder for me.
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Thanks Acid It was there just to monitor his location and that he abides by the conditions of where he could go. While he felt the side effect was a justifiable part of his punishment, no one else did. Thank you Freerider
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Journal entry 28: It’s been a couple months since I last wrote in here. I still meet with my therapist weekly, and we’ve discussed dropping it to biweekly or even monthly which is a good sign. Since meeting Rory, I hadn’t felt the need to write before my sessions. I feel surer of myself and I’m more comfortable talking openly to her no matter the subject. If Rory’s in town, he’ll occasionally go with me if I ask him to. He remains quiet at my side, holding my hand for the most part.
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This was a great intro into this story. Kind of makes me want to backhand both Richard and Nicolas for letting their feud go on for over 100 years, especially with the repeated loss of life. I can't wait to see where this goes.
