JayT
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People do not shake their head yes. They nod yes and shake their head for no. Also, I feel nauseated because a nauseous smell made me that way. I'm not nauseous, that would imply that I'm giving off a foul odor and making others nauseated.
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So, I was wondering if anyone else has lost the voice of their characters in their head. I haven't been able to write anything worthwhile for over a year on my story TJ and I don't know what to do. I need to find a way to find TJ's voice again.
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Hey y'all. I don't know I've stayed away from here for so long. I miss my friends from here; the people I would talk to everyday and who helped me through my crap. So, most of y'all know I moved to deep East Texas two and a half years ago. My parents built a house on our family's land. We moved down here from Dallas area to be closer to my grandmother. She passed away on November 30, 2019- two days after Thanksgiving. She was up and talking to all of us on Thanksgiving, woke up and ate breakfast on Friday morning, went back to bed around lunchtime saying she was tired, then never woke up again
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Didn't Mrs. V confront Hunter about his sexual relationship with her son a couple of chapter ago. They were in the car.
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Last night, at around 8:45, my dad passed away. He had covid-19 and his body couldn't handle it. He was on a ventilator for 3 weeks, as well as dialysis.
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I didn't hear any praising of my name. I demand praising of my name. I want to hear "Oh Great, Wonderous, Wise, and Handsome Jay! We praise you and miss you so! Please grace us with your being. How could we ever live this long without you being ever-present," NOW!!!
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I'm sure he's around here somewhere...probably lurking in the corner-in the shadows, doing who knows what? I heard rumors if you leave him offerings and praise him he will bless you with his presence
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Texas has no law requiring breaks...
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good morning y'all...I don't want to go to work today I have to be there at 10:15 this morning and then work till about 10:30 tonight...hopefully I'll get a bit of a break somewhere in the middle, but that's not a given.
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hey Brian....long time since I've commented on one of your stories huh??? me thinks there are secrets hidden in the walls of this old house and once they start tearing them down, they'll discover some truths about his cousin... keep up the good work 😉
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I've been working and not making any money....I'm a bartender not allowed to have any bar guests....
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so.....ummm....hi and stuff.....thought I would drop in and let y'all know I'm still alive and miss the hell out of y'all
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aww babe, you're back! Yay!!! interesting choice in main character there... looking forward to reading more soon... much love, Jay
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I may be making an ass of myself, but I am going to assume you are still editing stories for Aceinthehole. I do not like to nit-pick authors work in the comments section as some authors, get antagonistic over my comments I assume it is because they have creative ownership of the stories they write.. May I assume you have a little bit tougher skin as an editor than an author might have. I do not make suggestions to embarrass, merely to assist them to improve. I have noticed a great improvement in the grammar and pace of Ace's story (The Hidden Ones) in the last couple of months. I assume (damn, there is that word again) these improvements are because of your editing. If that is so, congratulations, you are really doing a great job. Smoothing an author's work without stepping on his story-line is a real art.
Okay, one small comment: a pink elephant in the room, is an expression I have noted several times in this story -- a pink elephant is seen usually by someone who is drunk -- a concept that is in the room seen by sober persons is just 'the elephant in the room', or 'the 500 pond gorilla in the room'.
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Good to see a new story! Are there going to be any guest stars from Chasing the Moon??? (The gods don't count since they're gods and are pretty much omnipresent)
