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Geron Kees

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  1. Geron Kees

    Chapter 3

    Kiri's eye of the world talent is an 'other side of the coin' one, just like Charlie's second presence, yes. I mean, Charlie can't have all the fun, right?
  2. Geron Kees

    Chapter 3

    Oh, everyone has an orflor. And they're different sizes, and different colors, too!
  3. Geron Kees

    Chapter 3

    Geez, I hope not! Those guys are so 1990!
  4. Geron Kees

    Chapter 3

    Thank you. And I'll be doing the 'goodnight' part here very soon!
  5. Geron Kees

    Chapter 3

    If I could bottle Twombly and give it away everywhere, I would!
  6. Geron Kees

    Chapter 3

    And a Happy Holiday to you, and to all of you. It's the night before Skwishmas! You don't think you guys get ALL the fun with the plays on words, do you?
  7. Kiley said he felt most relaxed in his own house, so that's where they decided to perform the experiment. The mayor was out making his evening rounds, but Cawra Snorkum gave them a quiet place in the living room of their home to sit, and left them alone. The twin's mother seemed interested in what they wanted to attempt, but also felt that her presence might be a distraction to her children. So, she left them, claiming the Christmas cake in her oven needed to be watched carefully. The Snor
  8. Geron Kees

    Chapter 2

    See what I mean?
  9. Geron Kees

    Chapter 2

    Sigh. I really should read ahead in the comments.
  10. Geron Kees

    Chapter 2

    Wait until Sundown, and ask them if they ever heard of The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald. If they say yes, ask If You Could read My Mind, would you be Talking in Your Sleep? By that point, if they don't have a clue, it's pretty obvious they're on the Carefree Highway, and it just doesn't matter!
  11. Geron Kees

    Chapter 2

    Huh? Did I miss yet another good plot device?
  12. Geron Kees

    Chapter 2

    "Hey, Kip? Why didn't you just line-of-sight teleport in front of these guys?" Tsk. "Well, duh! We might have caught them, and it's way too early in the story for that!"
  13. Geron Kees

    Chapter 2

    Does your momma know you only speak in puns, little boy?
  14. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    I find the idea of a restaurant that seats 1200 people appalling. The clink of utensils against plates would be horrifying all by itself, WITHOUT the din of all those people talking and laughing. And I pity the staff that had to cross all that acreage just to get food to a table. Was it still hot when it got there, even? Of course they reduced the seating capacity to 300 people. And what did they do with the leftover space? Installed soundproofing probably! The cast of this story is basically all in place already. Don't expect any surprise walk-ons from the wings! 😁
  15. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    I don't use THAT word lightly!
  16. The others returned with the luggage, and they took the bags to their rooms. They had been given four rooms, two-and-two across from each other, the doors aligned. Charlie and Kip shared a room, as did Rick and Adrian, and Horace and Amy. Uncle Bob was odd man out, so invited Browbeat to bunk with him. Charlie turned on one of the lights by the king-sized bed, and smiled at the colorful Native American motif of the the huge down comforter that covered it. He patted Castor through his shirt
  17. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    You just did. One comment is worth a lot to writer. Writing is fun. Sharing what you write, even better.
  18. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    Geez, guys. I just write down what Charlie and the others tell me happened!
  19. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    Sacred duty people often don't grin as much as you do!
  20. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    Talk to Kippy. He does the holiday decorums at their house!
  21. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    Seriously?
  22. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    Robin is not in this one, I'm sorry to tell you. After the cast size in the last one at Halloween, I went for 'can all fit in one restaurant' for this one!
  23. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    Powerful, or maybe just different?
  24. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    And follow them? I have to admit, even Charlie didn't think of that!
  25. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    Betcha can't guess WHO for at least a coupla chapters!
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