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  1. FlyOnTheWall
    Glad you liked the chapter Benji!! As far as Ian's parents, in the last chapter Ian had started referring to his aunt and uncle as his parents, since for all intents and purposes, they are. Sorry for the confusion!
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    Glad you like the chapter, Sweetlion! Cam has taken over his father's tailor shop. We'll see more of the work environment as well as a couple of new characters from that location!
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    Actually, Janet's father will become a much larger part of the story in the next chapters, as will a couple of new characters. We'll also be hearing from Liz, which should prove to be a bit more than interesting.
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    Oh, fuck me! It’s 3:00 a.m., and the little man is screaming his lungs off. I drag my ass out of bed and walk over to the crib. Damn! Baby boy’s a stinky little fucker! I pick Eli up and carry the little shit machine over to the changing table. It's funny how, when he knows he's going to be taken care of, the tears instantly stop. At least I don't gag anymore when I change his shitty diapers. Once he's cleaned and changed, I scoop him up in my arms and take him downstairs to the kit
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    We just kept kissing and holding each other. I pulled away as the tears kept falling down my face. “I’m sorry, Ian. I didn’t mean to make you cry!” “But you’re crying, too! Why? Did I fuck things up for you?” I shook my head no. “Good, ‘cause what started tonight is the first good thing to happen to me in a long, long time. And I completely hope this is just the start.” “Me too, Ian.” I explored his beautiful face with my fingers and wiped away his tears. “You’ve shown me things
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    I’m on sensory overload here! The hot water from the shower is finally warming me up. The kiss is like nothing I’ve ever felt before. My hand is stroking a throbbing, hard cock. Wait! That’s not my cock! My cock is surrounded by an incredibly muscular ass that is flexing and massaging Cam Jr. Holy shit! This must be what actual fucking feels like! Ian breaks away from the kiss and steps away from me. Cam Jr. is not happy, and I let out this moan that seemed to come from all the way down to
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    Thanks, Mike! I'm kind of eagerly anticipating what comes out of my brain, too! haha!
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    Thanks, Benji! I wanted to try a little more than the usual first person... I've been wanting to write a story where it's first person, but you also get a view of the character's actual thoughts by having him speak more directly to the reader. So far, it seems to be working, let's see what happens!
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    Ha! That's an awesome comment! I hope you like what I have planned for Cam. There's going to be a lot of fun, some tragedy, a lot of happiness, and some sadness.
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    Stitcher

    FlyOnTheWall posted a story in Fiction

    Eighteen year-old Cam Franklin's life changed when he went to lifeguard orientation for the community pool. That's when he met Ian Greenely, the boy who would actually change his life. Little did he know, he had a few more life-changing events in the year to follow.
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    It’s funny how when you think your life is totally fucked up, something beautiful comes out of it. That something beautiful would be this three-month-old bundle of love named Eli Cameron Franklin. Yeah, I’m Eli’s daddy. I’m just nineteen, and I have a baby boy. It wasn’t supposed to happen this way. It was Senior Prom. I didn’t want to take her. I wanted to go with Ian. Funny, just thinking about him still makes my heart skip a beat. But I guess I should take you back to the summer before
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    New Brothers

    FlyOnTheWall commented on skinnydragon's story chapter in New Brothers

    I can't tell you enough how happy this had made me!
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    I haven't reviewed the last few chapters mainly because David's downward spiral had me reeling! However, you have way outdone yourself as you wrap up this amazing story! I can't tell you enough how happy I was the it was Alex who saved the day! We all need an Alex in our lives. I'm hoping David has one more visit with Danny as I think it would be most gratifying. you are an amazing author, Skinny... An inspiration to us not-so-amazing authors!
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    Chapter 50

    FlyOnTheWall commented on WolfM's story chapter in Chapter 50

    I just read all 50 chapters in 2 weeks. Wow! I've never really been into this genre but you hooked me in from the first chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next (Please hurry!!!)
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    You've done it again, Skinny! An amazing chapter. I truly felt David's anguish and helplessness as he began figuring more things out about his mental health and the clini... erm... hospital. I'm still putting a lot of faith in Ginny and her mother-instincts to rescue Twoey from the clutches of Eric. I can't wait to get to Syracuse for what appears to be a rather memorable confrontation! Someone (or more than one) will be hurt emotionally... someone might very well be hurt physically... and I can only hope that ends up being Eric! You do realize I now check daily for an update from you... I'm sooooo completely addicted to your story!
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    Wow! Another amazing chapter, Skinny! I hope that the SLAP combined with Ginny now becoming aware of what's going on with her son might be the beginning of the end of Eric. I had a manipulative bf once and it was very difficult when that relationship ended, although it was the best thing that could have happened to me. I'm hoping that the end of Eric will bring David back into the home and care of Ginny and Twoey. It won't be easy, but David seemed to be happiest when he was there. Thanks for a wonderful chapter. Can't wait to see how this turns out... this is one story that I'm hoping for a happy ending for most of the characters!
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    Alex is cool. Erik is scarier each chapter. Twoey is in trouble. Ginny is probably going to confront the couple and lay down some ground rules. I think David knows exactly what he wants and has no idea what to do about it. The shrink better be a miracle worker! I think the key players to create the right changes are Mike, Ginny, Alex, and even Danny. I love how you make me check the site two or three times a day for a new chapter! LOL
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    Man, I feel for David! I went through a very similar feeling when I was in high school. I lived in the mountains of NC and can't even begin to count the number of times I would try to seriously date a girl because "I just can't be gay!" It terrified me. I wish I had a Randy to help me through those feelings back then. I can't decide if I want Randy to be a mentor, a friend, or a lover... perhaps David will visit all three of those relationships?
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    God, I'm loving this story! I'm glad David is beginning to acknowledge his feelings towards Twoey. I really can't wait for the right people to be together again! Okay, I'm hoping beyond all hope, perhaps. David needs to see a therapist for so many things, to sort out all of the blocked memories he's carrying around... and to understand his feelings towards his angel!
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    I totally agree with David... something's just not right about Erik and Twoey! I'm glad Alex gave him his first blowjob... because when Twoey gives him one he'll be blown away (pun kinda intended LOL)!! Everyone knows a guy gives MUCH more pleasure to a guy than a girl can! Right?!? It's a fact, isn't it? Right?!?
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    Simmer to a Boil

    FlyOnTheWall commented on QuinnDK's story chapter in Simmer to a Boil

    Awesome beginning! I totally love the way you started off with your disdain of stories starting the character waking up. Very clever. I also enjoyed the off-the-cuff reference to "my last day without you" and was thinking it might be fun if the two stories slightly "bump" into each other along the way. Anyway.... a great beginning to what looks to be a great story!
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    Great Chapter! Everyone seems relatively happy and that's always a good thing... well, at least in the moment. I'm still gonna push for David and Twoey. They are so meant for each other! On the other hand, Alex does seem to be a bit of a plotter. Hmmm. Looking forward to the next chapter, of course!
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    Another great chapter, skinny! I can so relate to David. That was me in high school. I was totally in love with a boy in my creative writing class and couldn't handle it. So I tried my damndest to fall in love with a girl. Thank God it didn't work out... now I'm hoping things don't work our for Twoey and Erik, and that David wakes up and fights for what he really wants!
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    So I've been here a couple of weeks and I'm just blown away! I think what I like the absolute best is the interaction! I've met some of my favorite authors and even more importantly, some of the nicest people! Thank you to everyone who has read and liked my story, to those who have written reviews... Well, you just rock my world!
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    I'm liking Alex less and less. Randy is a trip although his vicious streak is more than entertaining. I can't wait for David to get out of the hospital so Twoey can "properly" care for him! Keep up the great work Skinny! I completely love this story!
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