LillyLee
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The next day was Friday, and Antonio didn’t show up at school. By Lunch Marc was so worried he laid his head on the table to stare at his phone. “Still haven’t heard from him?” Jack asked, rubbing his blue-eyed friend’s back. “No. Not a word.” Marc mumbled, voice dripping in misery. His friends exchanged worried glances. They weren’t really sure what happened but they knew there was a fight between the two boys. Just when it looked like things were working out Antonio took off. “Maybe, you
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Thanks Rob, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I have a special place in my heart for creep Erik LOL Ive been posting everything through the queue/ schedualed posting feature and have had a few issues lol I hope it hasn't messed things up too much.
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Apparently i somehow missed ch14 but it should be up now!
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Apparently i somehow missed ch14 but it should be up now!
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Aparently so! Thanks for pointing that out, 14 should be up now
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Toni smiled to himself as he stashed his books in his locker. He was at Marc’s last night again, and there was no awkward freezing or fumbling. The spent an hour in his bed kissing and cuddling and Toni didn’t even flinch when the older boy brushed his fingers along Toni’s olive skin when his shirt had bunched up. He fought a shiver at the memory of Marc’s hands gripping his hips. “Good morning, Toni.” A sickly sweet voice brought him out of his memories. “Good morning, Erik.” Toni didn’t ev
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Toni sat in history class tapping his pencil and staring at the clock. Lunch couldn’t come soon enough. He wanted to see Marc. It had been a full week since his confrontation with Warren and so far things were going well. Warren had kept his word about keeping things civil and Toni had kept his word about keeping Warren’s secret. Their friends knew Marc and Toni were together. Much to Toni’s relief Marc agreed to keep the PDA out of the public. He still wasn’t 100% ready to come out. He knew Ma
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Im really glad you're liking it! That insecurity is important to making him human. Iv'e written so far a head sometimes I forget which chaptet you guys are on lol. His charecter is finally coming together!
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Hmmmm... true. But if I was planning a twisty Marc bugging out it wouldn't be very much fun if you didn't like him.
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I know triangles are 'cliche' but they are cliche for a reason. Lol They are lots of fun
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Thank Lux! Im glad you enjoyed it We're not done yet, this is just the begining!
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Than you so much for the review! I'm glad you're liking it
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Monday I had to swat a spider web out of my face as I pushed the door open. Halloween was one week away. My kind didn't actually celebrate Halloween, it was nothing but bad publicity for vampires. At least in most places it was taboo as a costume, politically incorrect. But there was always someone who thought it was funny to put in fake fangs and call themselves Dracula. I had only seen one or two in my life. I remember the first time. I was only 13 and almost punched the guy out because I wa
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With Halloween approaching Nikki and Keirnan compete against each other in the first annual Halloween Scare War
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Thursday during lunch Toni sat with Warren, Jenny, Simon and Isabelle. He had a container of fries in front of him but he really didn't feel like eating. He only saw Marc briefly this morning, a small nod was all the greeting he got. His stomach had been turning all day worrying about what was going on with Marc. He was being unreasonable, he was the one who had told Marc to be careful and keep his distance. Toni had no right to be bothered Marc had listened. He hoped sitting with his friends wo
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Thanks for reviewing! Im glad you are enjoying it!
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Im so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the review
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Yea, Toni is a scardy-cat. Hang in there! Thanks for reviewing
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Thanks for sharing your point of view, you have given me some things to think about when it comes to how I portray my characters. Its obvious hes not coming off how I was hoping he would. I tried to play on the ability teens seem to have on making seemingly deep bonds quickly. The drama of the weekend is a major bonding experience and teens have a habit of clicking quick. But the way Marc is coming off is messing with that. Thanks for sharing and I hope you can still enjoy tje story (even though you don't like Marc lol). I think you may like a certain situation that comes up)
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Thanks so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it
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"So today we start with the not so fun part of physical education. Here I have your first project." The class groaned. "We'll be splitting into pairs, one from each grade to make my life easier. Each pair will choose one of the topics off the list I will be handing out and prepare a 30-45 minute presentation for the class. Presentations start next week, the longer it is the more likely to get a better grade. We will have three periods in the library for research the rest you have to do on your o
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"Remind me again...why are we here?" "Because you skipped the homecoming dance." Toni and Matt stood in Brittany Bates's driveway looking up at her large house. The sounds of the after party drifting through the night towards them. Toni had called Matt Tuesday night. They met up for coffee again Wednesday at lunch and Matt came over for two hours after school. Thursday they sat in the hall together at lunch, and Matt was at Toni’s house that night till 10:00. Matt tried to convince Toni to jo
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