LillyLee

But could you imagine... that little Italian firecracker at military school? Glad you are enjoying it!

Toni was a little oblivious there wasn't he! I'm glad you are liking it so far!

Glad you're liking it so far! don't worry, I did find/replace too. LOL Should be all fixed!

Glad you liked it (even with the formatting and naming issues) ! I've already fixed the next couple so we shouldn't have any problems like that again!

*blush* opps

Apparently you can't post chapters using the mobile site lol You learn something new everyday! Hopefully the updated version makes it easier to read!

OMG I can't believe I did that LMAO Thanks for pointing it out!

Since their day at the convention had been called short Mr. Stark let all the kids pile into one room to hang out and watch movies. As the others started to get comfortable Toni stood next to the bed him and Marc had shared, unsure where to sit. Marc climbed up and sat with his back against the headboard. He reached up and pulled Toni down to sit between his legs. Toni tensed and started to pull away but Marc wound his arms around his waist and pulled him against his chest. “Relax, Toni, it’s o

Lol yea opps! I hit publish now instead of later. Lol

The afternoon went much the same as the last. The younger boy paired up with a kid from his own grade in the weight room. Toni glared at Marc when he tried to approach him after class. And he literally stopped mid stride, turned and walked the other way when he saw Marc waiting for him at his locker at the end of the day. This time when Marc sent him a goodnight text he didn’t get a response. He didn’t realize just how bad things were until he got to Toni’s apartment the next morning. Mrs. Manc

Marc had been wrong about things quieting down, for the rest of the day he could feel eyes and whispers following him. No one said anything directly to him, but the hushed conversations and sly looks were just as bad. Part of him wished he knew what they were saying; part of him prayed he never had to find out. The worst was gym class. He stuck close to Marcin the change room and kept his eyes glued to the floor. He couldn’t help but remember the confrontations he had in the past. None of his cl

When the other boys returned Toni was fast asleep. Marc stood at the end of the bed and looked down on the sleeping boy. He looked peaceful, and much younger. Marc had the urge to snuggle in next to him, pull him close and bury his face in his hair. “Go on Marc, Simon and I will share the other bed.” Alex had come up beside him and gestured towards the bed. “I don’t think that’s a very good idea. He won’t like it.” Marc frowned, Toni would freak if he woke up in bed with Marc. He saw the look

Thank you so much Lisa! Ill for sure look for those posts! Im glad your enjoying the story so far and its great to have constructive critism from a reviewer!

Marc, Alex and Jack were sitting in their usual spot on the stone bench in front of the school. Marc hadn’t slept well last night. Even after easing his frustration in the shower (twice), he still couldn’t stop thinking about Toni. His black sheets and the way those track pants left little to the imagination. He was in zombie mode this morning, barely even noticing his friends around him. So when he felt a gentle hand on his shoulder, he jumped, landing (un)gracefully on his ass in the grass. Al

I don't mind at all! I've been looking for a reliable editor, want a job? Lol.

Thanks so much Im so glad you're enjoying it! It will be an exciting trip that's for sure!

LOL opps! Thanks for pointing it out I'll ix it asap. Im glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for the review

Toni stood in the hall staring at the poster Katie and Breanna had just posted on the bulletin board. “Thinking about who you’re going to ask Toni?” Breanna said, wiggling her eyebrows. “God no. That’s not really my thing. I was just thinking about how cliché it was.” “Cliché? It took us weeks to come up with that!” Katie looked deflated. “Halloween Homecoming? Masquerade Ball? It’s like something out of one of those cheesy teenage romance movies my sister used to watch. But hey that’s just

This was a really cute story. Usually I dispise m-pregs but I really enoyed that you actually took the time to find a reasonable explination on howthe pregnancy was possible and the actual birth happened. Dillion was a little quick to accept that he was preggo but it was seamless enough not to annoy me lol. Great job!

Marc didn’t have much experience avoiding people. Not since the fiasco with Warren two years ago, but he thought he was doing a pretty good job. Or maybe it was just so easy because Toni was avoiding him too. It had been a long week, and he managed to only see the brown-eyed Italian in gym class. Which, of course, was the worst time to see him. Toni looked good in his usual uniform of skinny jeans and leather jacket. He looked even better in gym class. Marc had a hard time not staring when the b

Thanks Lisa! You can't help but feel sorry for he poor kids! Lol

Thanks Lisa, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Teenagers can be fickle creatures lol! And I appriciate the constructive critism. I always had a problem with run on sentances and now it seems I'm pushing too far the other way lol. I'll look out for it in future chapters!

You have for sure given me some things to think about in regards to how I present my charecters, especially Marc. Marc is for sure coming on strong; my thoughts behind this came from "typical high school puppy love". Teenagers become infatuated very easily, this situation was supposed to come off as Marc having this huge crush on a guy he barley knows and assuming that means it's meant to be. Hes the most popular guy in school and he always gets his way. He doesn't understand why Toni isn't falling into his arms. The more Toni resists the more mysterious and attractive he becomes to Marc. Marc's biggest flaw is needing everybody to like him. He thrives off external validation. Teenagers, in my experience, are pushy and awkward and often assume they should get what they want just because they want it. Toni's circle does come off a bit harsh, but they were friends with Marc first. And they are all aware of Marc's crush on Toni. Toni never says "i don't want to hang out" at this point. They are friendly when they meet and Toni goes to this party with him and they have a moment. No one understands that Toni doesn't know Marc has a crush and they forget that just because they think Marc is awesome it doesn't mean everybody will. Things do come easily to Marc and this is the first time he actually has to put some thought into trying to attract someone. These thought and insights should have been evidant in the story but apparently I didn't make it clear enough. I'll see how I can work it in a bit more but hopefully this will help you enjoy the story a bit more and help it make some sense. Thanks for sharing your confusions it definatly gave me some things to work on! I know it's pretty cliche, for my first full lenght posted story I kept it pretty simple lol

Toni groaned as his alarm woke him from a deep sleep. He was having a very good dream. A certain blue-eyed beauty had Toni against a wall, his hands clenched in his hair. His tongue exploring and tasting... Toni groaned again and shook his head. He had to stop thinking about him. He rolled out of bed and headed for the shower. This was going to be a long day, he still hadn’t figured out what he was going to say when Marc asked him why he took off. He managed to avoid him all morning, but it was