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Hi Com, been a while since I commented. Loved this chapter, cant wait for chapter 50. Chapter 50 always has some crazy stuff going on!
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Great Story. This is relatively new too. I like it. Nice one Com!
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Hope everything goes well for everyone. Been awhile since they were all happy. Cool chapter Com.
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Uhhh, what the? Are you sure the twist wasnt just some lazy writing? XD. No offense Com hehe, the clues were just all so backwards hehe. On the other hand, the Stevie thing is starting to bother me as well, you keep mentioning it so there's probably more to it than it really is... Anyway, loved it, but also bothered by Stevie :P.
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Chapter 24 - Warming Up To Paradise
MasterM commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 24 - Warming Up To Paradise
Is it weird that I get jealous for Tristan? Lol. Cool update, things are heading in a great direction. Never expected you to incorporate "Jukeboc Jimmy" ahem... I mean, "Jimmy Jukebox" into this story hehe. Cool. I weirdly got jealous lol. But love it -
There's still something weird about this Brandon-Monday thing to be honest. Likw the build-ups not finished... Hmm. So, anyway, it was great that Sam got a chapter of screen-time, this series wouldn't be itself if it didnt have Sam hehe. Poor Ian and Bobby, I guess one of them has to be the source of conflict. Great Chapter Com! Love it! :) <3
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Chapter 23 - Broken Restraints
MasterM commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Broken Restraints
This is great, didn't expect a new update so soon! Well, it's cool that Tristan is growing up and moving on, and uh getting "eager" as well. But who could blame him? Hehehe. Great chapter -
There are these possibilities, either this is a sort of mind trick by The Jeweller, possibly a some sort of imitating extra. Or this is part of his training regimen. Or most dangerously, the Jeweller is working for someone against Justin. If it's the last... God help them. Cool twist Com!
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Well THIS was a pleasant surprise hehehe. The suspense is really something in this story. I'd never had guessed this was the next update lol. Love it!
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So he's finally opening up eh? Hehe that's good, maybe it wasn't necessary but it was a long time coming :p. The job might be both good news and bad news, good because of the money bad because she might be busier than her current job (if that's possible), less time with Derrick. Love it Com!
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Truth be told I don't really have much experience about these types of issues so... Poor Billy. Poor Billy's mom.
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Chapter 59 - "A Little Field Trip"
MasterM commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 59 - "A Little Field Trip"
Woah, its either Chicago is small or Ryan has a fast car... The beach that fast? Lol... Well I can't say I like Sean now but... The little sh*t needs to back off with the compliments XD. I do understand Ryan's reactions a bit, subtle flirtatious comments done the right way can very much make someone feel good. But I do think Ryan won't get further than the giggly part with Sean, and that's awesome. Oh and Cody's falling for Randy fast, poor kid :P. Geez I guess Randy is THAT beautiful. Love it Com. -
Wow the poems are great. "Venus as a man" actually works as a line, also sounds so cool and romantic, hehehe. Love it Com, and thanks 'Charlie'.
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Hehehe, I guess the directors are ruder than Evan thought. This chapter has a longer feel to it, thats great!
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I can't say that I know how Billy feels right now, atleast not everything, but there IS something very frustrating about having another male "trampling" all over your territory. I'm not surprised Billy reacted like that at all, God knows I would have done the same. Using their words against them is a very clever and satisfying tactic. You can look smug right after, daring them to either retract or go against their statement. And all they can do is get mad. >:) Things aren't looking good for Garret's infatuation either. Good on him to be finally coming out of his shell, but oh boy, a rejection can really shut him in his shell for a loooong time. Nice developments Com.
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I just KNEW Tristan was a bottom! *Ahem* Loved this Chapter Com. Looks like Artie's gonna have a sweetheart of his own :). It's always hilarious how you word the playfull jealousy between your characters.
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Wait... TIM is an elder?! Wow! That kinda explains a lot of things. This Navius character seems interesting as well, was there a past between Romero and him or is Navius just that hated by the other elders? So many questions. Gonna be reading the next chap
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Oooh, sounds like trouble, not for a vampire though hehe. Excellent chapter Coms.
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Good story Com. But hmm... I might be just being weird but I can't help but get a feeling that there's something hidden in this story hehe That's just me though. There might be or there might not be but cool story nonetheless.
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Hehe, I thought vincent was the doorman and not Bernie. Love it Com
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Hehe, dude, I'll be honest. A lotta stuff is going on and I can't seem to understand the dialogue without the proper context, especially around the first halfish part of the story. I'll keep reading tho.
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Woah, I was actually *MAD* the at the first paragraphs of this story hehe. I never knew you had it in you Com. This one just became my favorite spin-off of GFD
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This chap is great! Thing's are getting "hot and heavy" tho. If you know what I mean XD. Love it Com <3
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Hehehe, that game is a little too suspicious for my taste. Jared's the same I'll bet, he just found a good excuse. Straight guys don't accidentally just have boners from kissing another guy.
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Chapter 10 - "Who's My Enemy"
MasterM commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 10 - "Who's My Enemy"
I have to say... I was quite annoyed with the kids who did the prank. I don't condone violence or anything but the soldiers were definitely quite right in their hysteric reactions.
