Azorf

Hmm, nice chapter. #trekkie 😁

This was a good story until the ending, not just because of the sudden change in direction but I feel if the author has suddenly realised he is having a deadline to meet and rushed things at the end, leaving many loose ends.

I remember this piece from the old story. Devon acts like a jerk and becomes GOM (grumpy old man!)

I am waiting for the tsunami to sweep in! We have had earth (quake), air (cyclone) and fire, just left for water to come!

More Rothenia, hooray!!!!

A 1/2" pipe from an artesian well? I think the fire will have burnt out before the plane is filled! 😃

This story is familiar. is this a rewrite of one of yours which disappeared a few years ago?

By accident? Or design??

I get thefeeling this will not end well......

22 acres? I think a bit small for a resort. Perhaps a private island.

Golf course, army base, airport, this wildlife sanctuary is starting to become crowded! With the earthquakes I would be worried the whole island will disappear under the ocean like Atlantis! I wonder what is the helicopter they are using to lift all the containers as most will not lift the weight?

I am wondering if Rory wanted that relationship if he cut all contacts? I also am wondering if Grant is ready as he sounds like a very cold person who does not seem to have developed friends in the six years he is living in Scotland. I hope he finds a relationship as his life is looking lonely at the present.

Like wow! Maybe there's a chance for them both. Can't wait for the next one.

As others have said the Anton character seems to have some serious issues which I would be concerned if I was relying on him as an employer or skipper. I have noticed with this and others of Quokkas main characters in other stories that they react to something going against them by running away and hiding. I am surprised how quickly Anton seems to change personality and I would think that in the time scale of this story somebody would have mentioned it to him and suggest he seeks professional help. Or are they all scared of him? A very confusing person.

A fairy story with real fairies! Well I had to get that in! All rainbows and fluffy bunnies in the end with lots of helpings of 'lurve' spread throughout. A nice one to finish off a tiring week. More please!