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  1. jkwsquirrel
    Thanks! Watching the development of the Brett-Dustin feud turning into what it has become is one of the best things about the whole story for me.
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    He's both disturbed and thrilled by the dreams, isn't he?
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    But there are so many jackasses in this story!
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    “Hand me that fucking wrench, you lazy piece of shit,” Dustin’s dad ordered. Dustin quickly grabbed the tool and handed it to his father as he worked under the car. “No, you fucking idiot! Not this wrench! You worthless, useless piece of garbage! How did you get so goddamn stupid?” Frank bellowed angrily. “Sorry,” Dustin replied, taking the wrench back from his father. Then he calmly kicked the jack out from under the car, crushing his father beneath the vehicle
  5. jkwsquirrel
    Well, Luke is an asshat, that's for sure. I think this chapter was the real family reunion.
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    Brett's grief over the loss of his brother is one of the keys to the story. I think we'll get a deeper understanding of Brett in this story than we did in WAR.
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    It's just like old times, only maybe now they're a little wiser and a little less eager to destroy each other. Mr. Taylor's words hit him at the worst possible time. Dustin was already feeling worthless and hopeless. Mr. Taylor just threw gasoline on the fire. We've only just begun exploring the Dustin/Brett relationship.
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    I knew someone who stopped taking their insulin because their problems were too overwhelming. A permanent solution to a temporary problem. Part of that experience has shaped how this story has gone and is going.
  9. jkwsquirrel
    Or if he does understand that someone loves him, he wonders how long it will be before they let him down like everyone else.
  10. jkwsquirrel
    Dustin with a gun has always been a dangerous idea. Even if Luke was lying, it doesn't mean Dustin didn't get something from somewhere.
  11. jkwsquirrel
    A second cousin is almost like being with the person, right?
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    The gentle rain had turned into a downpour by the time Dustin reached the highway after leaving Sarah’s neighborhood. Between the rain and his tears, Dustin was having a terrible time seeing anything. He swerved a few times but managed to keep himself upright for most of his journey. But as the rain fell harder, Dustin’s sense finally convinced him to pull off the road and wait for the rain to dissipate. He parked the bike along a sharp curve in the road and began to bawl. All of the emotions of
  13. jkwsquirrel
    😎 Got to keep my reputation going!
  14. jkwsquirrel
    All of this is spot on, and was even in 2008 when the story takes place, before the PrEP era. But the real key to this isn't that Dustin thinks he's got it (and as the top his chances of getting it from one encounter with no blood are slim anyway.) The real issue for him is this quote: “Why wouldn’t he have told me?” Dustin asked himself.
  15. jkwsquirrel
    And if you haven't read "The Acquittal," you can find it right here on Gay Authors! 😉
  16. jkwsquirrel
    Uh, thanks? We'll earn our happy ending together, but yeah, Dustin's in a real mess at the moment. If only he had some friends to turn to!
  17. jkwsquirrel
    What really twisted the knife was that for just a minute Dustin was beginning to think about the future. What happens now that his hope for the future has been destroyed? After everything he went through, this one broke him. You can just watch him crumble as Mr. Taylor destroys his spirit.
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    That's her! But like John Cena, you can't see her!
  19. jkwsquirrel
    Thank you! What I hope makes Luke such a good character is that he's believable. He's not a card-carrying, moustache-twirling villain like Mr. Taylor. He's just a dumb twenty-something kid whose feelings got hurt and he retaliates in such a petty way. He's more angry that Dustin and Nate are laughing at him behind his back than anything else. He doesn't realize he pulled the pin on a hand grenade.
  20. jkwsquirrel
    The nature of serial writing, unfortunately. Have to leave you hanging for a bit. You've got it regarding Dustin believing Luke. Luke's given him no reason to believe he's lying to him. And yes, Heather McKenzie remains a mystery!
  21. jkwsquirrel
    Thanks for the compliments! I'll be honest, I loved writing this one because there's so much going on and we learn so much about the characters. I'm an "earn your happy ending" kind of guy. But what I really enjoy is knocking down the dominoes that have been set up. You kind of know what's coming in my writing.
  22. jkwsquirrel
    Luke may be my finest villain yet. And there's a connection coming next chapter that may be surprising! Mr. Taylor, back from the past to bring pain and misery once again! River rats should simply be drowned at birth in his world. Mwahahahahahaha!!!!!!!11 That was one of my more clever ideas. We had to go 94 chapters before we pulled out that trick!
  23. jkwsquirrel
    But how do you really feel? lol
  24. jkwsquirrel
    Thank you so much! Getting kicked when he's down is what Dustin does best.
  25. jkwsquirrel
    Brett Reilly parked his car on the street outside of his brother’s apartment and sighed. It had been two days since he’d talked to Joey. At first, Brett didn’t think much of Joey not answering his calls, but two days was a long time to not get back to him. Brett worried he’d find out Joey had been thrown back in rehab or jail and hadn’t had time to call him. But when Joey’s mom called Brett and asked him to go check on Joey, Brett began to get nervous. It had been a long ride from Pittsburgh bac
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