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    Chapter 43

    Thanks Onim, I'm finding it really hard. One subset I have 3 100% come back, the other not so great 85, 80, and a ?? scared of that one with the marks keep going down. I refuse to give up, I'm adamant that I want to become a better writer so I will persevere. I guess it's not like I'm relying on it to get a job or anything. Absolutely dreading the poetry unit. lol I'll torture you all and have Ollie write poems to read at family dinner every chapter for practice.
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    Chapter 43

    Soccer isn't a sport. Please no one throw anything at me but I would rather watch a 27 inning baseball game than 10 minutes of soccer.
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    Chapter 1

    Great chapter, can't wait to see the story unfold.
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    Chapter 43

    That's how I feel about soccer.
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    Chapter 43

    Whoops!
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    Chapter 43

    Thanks Jeffrey, there's still some to go
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    Chapter 43

    I can if you want. I'll do whatever everybody wants.
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    Chapter 43

    Thanks Glennish, I hope it balances out soon. I do love these boys, and the family they've created.
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    Chapter 43

    Thank Butcher56, sorry for the delays, school is a lot harder than I thought it was going to be. Hang in there, I'm positive it will almost get back to normal posting.
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    Chapter 13 - Adam

    I am sorry about the delay Onim, there will be a new chapter hopefully by Saturday. I am happy you are enjoying it so far, it tickles me pink.
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    Chapter 13 - Adam

    Thanks for the compliment Charlie, I also like how Pat keeps finding them in "situations" that amuse him.
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    Chapter 13 - Adam

    Thanks Glennish, it was fun to see Ian flustered. It's good they are finally moving things along - for now.
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    Chapter 13 - Adam

    It's about time they started coming together right? There's more coming up, I hope you enjoy every moment.
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    Chapter 13 - Adam

    Thanks Tesao, I'm glad you like it.
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    Chapter 43

    Honeymoon This trip has been like a dream so far, and we’ve only pulled up at the hotel. The Fairmont, San Francisco, can you believe it. Liam had us fly business class, we had a short stop-over in Detroit. The airline had overbooked their business class seats. The choices we had were; We delay our flight and catch the next one this afternoon or economy now. Liam politely apologized to the lady behind the counter, explaining he knew it wasn’t her fault then asked for the Manager. She
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    Life's Cruel

    I hope not, @Dahawk promised no more killing sprees
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    Chapter 13 - Adam

    I think it's funny that Pat keeps catching them in compromising situations. Thank you for the compliment.
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    Chapter 13 - Adam

    Thanks for your patience ColumbusGuy, school really is kicking my ass. I've had a few want to give it up moments but I really want to become a better writer, comments like this is what makes me stick with it. I want to write better for you guys. I don't think I'd regret going to Ian's bedroom school either.
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    Chapter 13 - Adam

    Thanks Jeffrey, I like their dynamic. It's as if they know they are in love but don't want to be the first to really, really show it.
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    Chapter 13 - Adam

    Who doesn't like soup from scratch. I think he's embarrassed because it's not the first time he's been caught mauling the kids Dad.
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    Chapter 13 - Adam

    Thanks Wesley, I'm glad you liked the chapter. It took me two weeks to get that where I could live with the result.
  22. Okay, Adam, you can do this. He wasn’t mad when he left you last night. Everything will be fine. I blew out a breath, lifting my hand nervously and… Knock, knock, knock. A few seconds later the door flew open, there stood Ian’s son, shirtless, and in a pair of long plaid pajama bottoms. At first, his face was contorted in confusion, then softened into recognition. “Hi Detective, how’s your partner and her Dad,” He tilted his head. “Hanging in there, for now at least. Thank you for
  23. LOL shut up, don't pick on me. I'm only partially fragile. Do you not like my little community??
  24. You leave my little community alone, ya bully.
  25. I know I am, my heart can't handle the carnage. Great chapter, I hope everyone starts to heal and Aaron is able to find Dustin before he finds himself in danger.
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