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Coming up as fast as I can get it to you, I promise. More Aussie slang from Oliver to come too. You aren't wrong about the way justice works, not always great for the innocent. Let's hope the interviews help with that.

I heard you singing just as loud as they were at the campfire and your costume was amazing. LOL.

Thanks droughtquake, and I'm glad you think so. I do know the character are a little too syrupy sweet. But we do only see them in their comfort zone mostly, and surrounded by the people they love. I hope they don't always come across so one dimentional.

Hey Butcher56, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I'm kinda jealous I wasn't there for the superhero sleepover. Sounds like it might have been fun. I'm also happy Will had a bit of support, with Cal, but the fact Detective Price or Adam insisted on being there was nice.

There has always been a bit of friction between Will and Adam. Although Will finds Adam good looking, Tracy had told him at Benny's birthday he was straight. Now he finds him pursuing his Uncle Ian so there is a little trust issue. Same goes for Adam, after meeting Will at the hospital, he thought Will was a trust fund baby that only cared about himself. There's also the difference between, POV. Adam is dealing with Will as a detective mostly, but Ian he's infatuated with. Benny is the cutest little guy ever. But we only get to see the fun side to the four-year-old, I bet he'd be as typical as any other four-year-old. Good news for us we get him at his best. LOL. Aussie slang is funny, and I'm pretty sure I use all of those, but not in one sentence. When you sling them altogether like that, it sounds hilarious. I've chucked a couple more in the next chapter, because their fun and it suits Ollie's personality to use them I think. And thank you for the compliment.

You're very welcome JeffreyL. I hope you keep enjoying it.

Thanks Glennish, it's been hard, trying to slow down William's Love, so Ian's Heart can catch up a bit, without it ruining either story or upsetting anyone. None of us are the most patient bunch, LOL, so I'll take the knocks until they do.

Ah, so it would be, thank you.

To answer your first question, that is just my bad language, I picked up on it a chapter or two ago. And trying to be mindful that it's drawers. Sorry just bad spelling on my account. An Angel Egg? LOL.

How'd you like them apples, young Wesley!! I hope it made your day.

BBQ, Baseball, and Bedtime “I’m here to take over Will, it’s too hot for anyone to stay in that get up all day,” Oliver put his hand up pointing to the home plate umpire gear I was sweating through. “From your mouth to my sweaty arm pits?” I laughed, “TIME,” I yelled for everyone to hear as I took off the gear and started handing it over to Ollie. Oliver screwed up his face, “I never thought about that, gross,” He held it with his thumb and forefinger like I’d passed him som

We'll just have to wait and find out, I guess. Probably not as hard as you'd think, even though she's not smart she is a cockroach. They are hard to kill.

I guess people can be deceiving, she had Adam pegged as one thing in her mind and he didn't turn out to be that. I think that thing was money, she seems a self indulgent bitch, her behaviour doesn't surprise me.

You're more than welcome, not that I'm doing much at all. I enjoy working with you too, and I look forward to see where you are taking this story. Hopefully we can get better at this together and have some fun along the way. ;-)

Thanks Charlie, I hope you continue to like it as it goes on. I'm not sure how much a verbal slap would help someone that bitter. Certainly would be fun to watch though.

I think when it all comes to a head it will be a little on the explosive side.

Thanks Onim, some people are just ugly on the inside doesn't matter what they look like. It is good that Patrick almost trusts Ian completely, and I think with the Grandparents being so accepting of him straight away will go a long way to bridge the gap. The poor kid's head is probably spinning, for the first time in his life he can relax and be a kid with a family.

Thank Butcher56, Happy you're still enjoying the story. Williams Love should be posted today or tomorrow.

Probably because I'm used to it in real life. It's always there lurking behind the curtain.

I almost got to feel special and then Wham! hit by a bus.

Swoon, you're always my first comment. I have a little pressie for you in the next chapter of Williams' Love.

I like the new style the story definitely reads better. It's hard to imagine so much loss in such a short amount of time, the one good thing going for Aaron is he still has his three boys to keep him going. It doesn't sound like he's going to give up on life, where some people might. Good job. Great chapter and @Wesley8890 is right about the mascara.

“Paddy, are you okay? Why didn’t you say felt sick?” Dad said looking at me through the mirror, in the airport restroom. I washed my face and rinsed my mouth out, to see if I could get rid of the foul taste in my mouth. Dad opened my carry on luggage and found my toiletries kit and handed it to me. “Here brush your teeth, you’ll feel better.” “Sorry Dad, I’m not sick, I’m just so nervous.” I felt another bout of nausea heading my way. “What if they don’t like me?” “I don’t think you n

I'll crash it with you although my costume will probably be the big chick from the Drew Carey Show. LOL Just think the woman who shall not be named is about to get hers, so that will be fun. So we should be able to follow her name with a suck it *itch!

I couldn't agree with you more about Celine and Justin, double ICK!. I was around in the seventies, I still can't stand Olivia Newtown-John, although I do feel bad she's ill because I'm sure she's a lovely person. I just don't like her singing.