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    Chapter 12 - Ian

    Okay so that word needs to go into the dictionary. I.LOVE.IT!!!!
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    Chapter 12 - Ian

    “James, I spoke with Bill and John. They’ve told me to be open to this opportunity to get to know Adam. I hope you’d approve of him. I think you’d approve. Anyway, I’d better finish getting ready he’ll be here any minute.” I looked at James' picture, that was sitting beside my bed as always. I didn’t feel bad about going on this date. It’s a relief, there's no guilt, no panic like there had been in the past. It’s as if James is giving me a push to help me along. Okay Ian, stop procrastinating, i
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    Sorry Jeffrey if it's confusing. It's because they were written after the fact. I hope Ian and Adam can stand alone a little better than Seb and Beau. If it helps, the timing of this chapter is about when the boys are about to be moving into their new house with Kat and Ollie for the first time. If you take off the mushroom it's a Hamburger with the Lot at any take away or fish and chip shop where I come from in Australia. It is a lot of hamburger though, you're right.
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    Okay, Okay it's coming, it's coming, There certainly does seem to be a lot more to Stephen's story than any of us knew. It doesn't excuse Stephens behaviour, but it certainly does explain how terrified he is in his own surroundings which should be safe and comforting. I can't imagine having to live like that. Wade does come across as someone that Adam and Payne could turn their duo into a trio adding to their dynamic rather than them adjusting to have him fit.
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    I'm sorry about that, ick. Dear God, that's awful, it could put you off food for life.
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    Hey Glennish, it's nice to get a little more personal with Stephen, show that he's really just a poor scared kid doing the best he can. Wade could become of Adam and Payne's world, we'll see.
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    I've never read Circumnavigation, and have no idea what a pie floater is. But beetroot is normal on any burger from a take away or fish and chip shop. Pineapple usually comes on a burger with the lot. Unless you request differently. BBQ sauce is also the regular sauce served on a burger too. As far as I'm concerned BBQ sauce and Mayonnaise are made in factories sitting side by side in hell. Yuck! LOL.
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    Sounds like a gravitational pull, I hope. Maybe. I don't know. Um... The closet came open and they all fell out??? Probably.
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    It's way before the Aussie's got there, but it's one of my favourites when I allowed to have a burger.
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    Hey, Hey, don't go reading ahead now. Stay focused.
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    Try Denny's just alter one of their burgers and taste it. I used to get one every time I made it off of the island and went to town. Which was about once every six weeks. The Denny's on the way always made it for me. It's massive but delicious. And definitely take the pink drink with you. LOL
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    I'm glad you're enjoying the ride with Adam and Ian. Potts does seem like a nice guy, I hope Adam and Payne let him in. I think his quiet compassionate nature would complement the two.
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    Chapter 11 - Adam

    Thanks Butcher56, I have a feeling Ian and Adam might have a few obstacles in their path.
  14. “UMC-134 requested for Assistance, MDP asking for DET-331195 Cnr Lexington and Market.” “Damn it, every time,” I looked over at a cackling Payne, “Every time,” “I know, but Marshall seems to like you, and when you're there he appears to calm down. Think about the other officers involved,” Payne said grinning. Marshall is Marshall Carter, the local mentally ill person, to whom we get weekly call outs. He’s not dangerous, but he does seem to cause havoc. “Fine,” I flicked the light
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    Chapter 41

    Once the boys take a break at the end of summer, more Seb and Beau.
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    Chapter 41

    That's a big compliment, thank you Rndmrunner. I'm trying to slow down and get more down on the page. I've been good, trying to listen. I hope I'm slowly getting better at it.
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    Chapter 41

    Ha! You're funny, patiently?? I don't think any of us on this site know what that actually means, I'm guilty myself when I want someone to write their next chapter. Just like you I want to stand next to them screaming, Mush!! Faster!! More!! I think I went to the gutter somewhere there. LOL.
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    Chapter 41

    Thanks Sassypie, I'm glad you're enjoying the stories. And sleep, what is this word you speak of??
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    Chapter 41

    LOL. You really know how to put the pressure on huh? I've put an order in for some extra fingers so I can type faster. I hope that will help yeah?
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    Chapter 41

    I got the picture, and said so politely. It seems the vote is unanimous, you are on the winning team. So more right?
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    Chapter 41

    Thanks I'll check it out. And no I've never been one for Monty Python, I don't know why, I love all british comedy usually. For some reason it never appealed to me.
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    Chapter 41

    These boys seem to have figured out more than most adults. It's nice. I'm sure Oliver will return to normal as soon as Uncle Luke and Scott stop giving him lessons on how to confuse Will and Liam. But Ollie is a big kid just like Liam so I guess until he's bored with it.
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    Chapter 41

    You made me hungry, maybe you should eat too. LOL. On the other hand, learning to deal with that kind of loss is a critical life lesson best learned early. This is a good lesson to learn but sometimes good comes from bad. If Liam does accept his fate of not being able to play, I'd like to believe he'll focus on something else and be just as determined.
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    Chapter 41

    There'll be one from Adam in the next couple of.... shouldn't be much of a wait.
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    Chapter 41

    It will be item number one to address, sought of. But it will be revealing Odies pissy attitude.
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