Vampire Queen

I hope everything works out for our sweethearts. The story is getting so intense, it would be interesting to see their relationship dynamics after the war and just how Midori gains everyone's approval to date the prince.

Pretty satisfied with that b Tina getting some justice brought down on her. I hope that Dom's mom can in time fully accept their relationship. It's nice that she is still showing care for her son's well-being, she is actually taking things better than a lot of mothers would. I love the smexy time with Anikin and Dom. Great chapter, keep the good story going.

Ok so Mike is not really human, but exactly what he is is still a mystery. Anyway the twins clingy girlfriend is annoying. Yes he is your family but stop smothering him and acting all bro-con like. Anyway that hot kiss at the end was great, now they could possibly get some relationship development going.

First chapter and I already hate a character *cough, choke* douche brother. Anyway I am really curious about the supernatural element to this story. I like how forgiving little bro is and it's not nice how the only one with a some sense is Mike. But overall good start. I can't wait for more.

I hope that Daven could be a bit stronger for Kian. But well I do understand that this is a life or death situation.Kian is so set on dying for Daven, it saddens me but I get how his thinking is affected by his childhood growing up. At this point I really just want them to be alive and well.

I have to agree with some of the commenters bellow, Tracy was the overall victim of the situation,he had all of them turn their backs on him and now everything is going to be oh so magically fixed even when he is still the only one trying to make things work in all his relationships with the people he was most closest to. Really I don't like how all three of them knew where he was yet kept ignoring him. They basically were like: " I found my happiness so screw the guy we used to know" I'm sorry but honestly things could have turned out better, if they were as honest as Tracy. I did like how the plot was but after all that drama, it's kind of putting me off reading how just one character suffered and is still suffering because of lack of communication and honesty. I know I'm been a bit mean but honestly I wished they (Alex, Callen and Jess) could be more sympathetic and caring towards him. Callen did have a brief heart to heart with Tracy but even still it did not have as much impact. But good job author-san your grammar and spacing was great, the story pacing was fine until the time gap. Maybe putting a disclaimer e.g) 1 year latter, at the top would make reading the plot transitions better. Overall I still wish to read the next chapter, mostly to find out if the other three do having some saving grace.

Did that crazy hoe just try to kill our main sweetheart?! Psycho b much. Anikin better call the police on her. Anyway good story as usual. I love how Dom is slowly becoming serious and mature about his relationship with Anikin. And Anikin was such a champ to bottom so that Dom could have that experience and explore his sexuality. I do hope everything works out for them. All the drama and new developments are hard work on my tender heart.

I generally love most of not all your previous/current works, but this story... ok it started off really good, sweet and fluffy then at that last chapter... I'm sorry that just completely killed it. I agree with one of the other reviewer "bullish!t". Seriously after so many years and that's the best Shin could come up with