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I understand your shock. The plantation was hosting Travis's brother's wedding, so maybe Travis decided to come and see his brother get married in the woods. We'll see if we get any answers in the next chapter.
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It seems that way, and considering Sweetheart is labeled as one of the top ten most haunted towns in America, there's definitely more to this small, West Virginia town than meets the eye. At least Cash and Ben got to kiss before a man without a hand approached them haha.
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It definitely is! More will be revealed in the next chapter 😁
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Well, getting Ben to be the photographer of the wedding is really just one step in getting his reputation back in order. But I understand your concerns.
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Sitting at a square table, I waited for Claudia to enter the room that had a warm-color palette and tall windows that displayed the woods the mental institution was located in. The room had a few other patients talking with their family members at different tables, and the overall mood was peaceful. I drummed my fingers on the table’s surface, waiting for my little sister to appear; I wasn’t allowed to have my phone while I was visiting Claudia, so all I could do was wait patiently. Then the doo
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I understand your suspicion. Kevin, the pastor's son, seems to be a normal eighteen-year-old who's comfortable with his sexuality and not some indoctrinated nutcase, so hopefully that's a piece of evidence that Pastor Daniel is not a malevolent person. But we'll see as the story continues.
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Very true. Hopefully that doesn't get Cash in trouble in the future.
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Working on the next chapter right now 😃
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I'm glad this story has captured your attention 😃
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Thank you for commenting on my story, especially since this is the first comment you made, and I'm honored! I also understand your predicament completely, and I hope the rest of the story hooks you in as well 😁
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Thanks for the comment! Hopefully taking the pastor's advice is a big step forward for Cash to befriend Benjamin and help increase his reputation in the town. Also, since Benjamin is a professional when it comes to photography, I'm sure the pictures will come out fine. Lastly, more will be revealed about Claudia in the very next chapter. I promise!
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That is very true! I'm sure Benjamin recreated paintings involving multiple people in various positions, so taking pictures of a wedding shouldn't be too difficult for him. But we'll see when the wedding happens 😃
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After driving my rental car back to my place thanks to my tita, I gathered the rest of my belongings from the trunk into my bedroom. Then I took a shower, a much needed one, and then I helped Tita Jane with making the lumpia for the barbecue by taking the lumpia mixture and wrapping it in the lumpia wrappers. After they were all wrapped, she then started to cook them in oil as I placed some uncooked lumpia in the freezer that would later be given to some of my tita’s friends. It was nice being h
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It really is a shame. We'll see what was going on with Cash before the Claudia incident since we only know that he wasn't a huge fan of law enforcement, and he wasn't always there for Claudia, which probably makes him feel so guilty and adds to his determination to finding the truth about what happened to his sister.
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Maybe Cash has a close connection with Pastor Daniel since he listens to his sermons every Sunday, and he didn't want to betray that by letting his son get away with stealing, but then Benny had to intervene. Or it's very probable that Cash is just looking for an excuse to dislike Benny, considering he still blames him for the incident involving Claudia, while still having less than pure thoughts about Benny that he's trying to suppress. We'll see in the next chapter if things improve between the two of them.
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And thanks for the comment of support! 😁
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Thank you for providing your opinion on that aspect of the story. I'll make sure not to withhold information that is not significant to the main plot as I continue this story, and thanks for saying it has great promise.
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Yeah, after I listened to a cover of the song Take Me Home, Country Roads by John Denver, I knew that West Virginia would be the perfect place to set the small town of Sweetheart in, and I had to include it in the title as well haha.
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Thank you very much! And more will be revealed about Claudia and what happened during prom night as the story progresses. 😀
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Thanks for the comment!
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Last night was certainly eventful. After Benjamin emptied his stomach and probably some his guts in my car, I drove him back to his uncle’s mansion. With his arm slung around my shoulders, I dragged him onto the front porch and through the front door. He gave me directions to where his bedroom was, and after the long trek of going up the staircase, I finally managed to lead him to his bed where he collapsed like a loose-jointed doll. I would’ve left right afterwards, but I was worried if he
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Thank you very much! Yeah, the Snow Queen is cold both figuratively and literally, and she doesn't realize the irony of her trying to kill Zev as the most emotionless thing a person can do. Though, you can still understand her pain, and maybe there's a chance for her to redeem herself. And you can say time's running since Violet wouldn't be calling Lucky for no reason.
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Thank you for the supportive comment! Working on the next chapter right now. 😀
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And don't forget heated since Zev is literally a wolf in heat right now haha! Also, brewing is good word to use since they'll need all the warmth they can get before heading to the Snow Queen's palace.
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Thanks for the comment! I'm looking forward to continuing this story, and hopefully your questions will be answered along the way.
