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You're welcome and thank you for the comment! It's definitely getting crazy, but hopefully the wands will reveal some answers to the mystery behind prom night.
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“I got the mangoes for you, Tita Jane.” I walked into the kitchen and placed the bagged fruit onto the kitchen. “Tita Jane?” “I’m here,” my tita called out as she walked down the stairs and entered the kitchen in her nurse uniform. “Thank you, Benny. You came back just in time.” Placing two mangoes into her lunchbox, she then said, “Well, I’m heading to work now. There’s plenty of leftovers in the refrigerator when you get hungry, and I’ll be back right before midnight, okay?” I nodded.
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Yes, witnessing your own family member doing what Travis did is not something that someone can recover from easily. And I agree that Ben wasn't thinking when going to the woods and into the abandoned mines, but at least he has that wand-like object that could answer his questions.
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You're welcome! And thank you for the comment. 😁
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Thank you! And I'm listening to a cover of "Take Me Home, Country Roads" as I write this comment haha.
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Yeah, I'm back 😋
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Sleeping was the least of my concerns as I spent half the night looking back at the all the evidence that I have accumulated since I became an official police officer for the town of Sweetheart. My study room was an organized mess if that made sense with so many papers spread everywhere in the room, but all were place strategically, so I could refer to them when needed. I was examining all the information, so I could construct the right questions that I thought would be useful to ask Travis sinc
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Thank you for the comment! Yeah, I really need to address some of the questions soon, which will hopefully be answered in the next chapter. Thank you for addressing that as well. 😀
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I'll try my best to post frequently, and thanks for the comment! 😀
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That definitely was something. Hopefully we'll get some answers with Travis finally found.
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Thank you!
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I couldn’t believe who I was seeing. The man himself, Travis freaking Nolan, was standing only a few feet away from us…or was that really him? The blank stare he was giving us was haunting, and when Cash took a step forward as he called the name of Travis, I immediately grabbed his hand and pulled him back. I didn’t completely trust my eyes at first, but when I looked at the missing left hand, and I knew we were dealing with the person who disappeared during prom night five years with only his l
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Thank you for the comment! Hopefully the second part is just as exciting to read 😃
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We get to see the raw power of both Chris and Ryan. Also, the memories of the locket and who it once belonged to are indeed more significant to Ryan than the object itself. And more will be told about the famous Christian Shepherd and his capabilities as the story continues. Thank you so much for commenting on this story since it really gives me much insight. 😃
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Yes, Chris is definitely sending mixing signals towards Ryan, from attacking Ryan back at his penthouse before kissing him to kissing him again in a crowded club...wow.
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Chris must be still heartbroken by Travis's death, seeing illusion of the man he loved is not normal, especially since he is equipped with nooks.
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The mystery behind the nooks and Travis will definitely be explained further into the story. All we know now is that kiss was not like any other that Ryan had before, that's for sure.
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A romance is already blooming, at least for Ryan. We also get to see who Christopher Shepherd is, at least what his strength is since he is able to defeat a simulation with his just his bare fists. I wonder what else he can do with that hand when it's in a fist haha.
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His collectibles really show that he's still the same Ryan before he inherited the nodes, which is very nice. And we'll see if Ryan gets respect or ridicule for who he is in terms of being the former president's other son.
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Ryan's also inherited Rory's abilities as well, and hopefully Ryan's humble nature remains intact since with great power, comes great responsibility. I believe that giving a person power would really show their true nature, and I'm sure Ryan will be the good person with power and not the villain.
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Yes, node technology is very powerful, able to heal wounds of extreme degrees, even able to regenerate missing appendages from fingers to even limbs. And there was definitely someone watching over Ryan when the shooting took place and dealt with the robbers personally. Who that person was is a mystery though. Ryan basically inherited not only his half-brother's nodes, but also his body that was sculpted to be Champion; I guess it's like waking up in a chicken costume for him haha.
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Everyone has a threshold, including Ryan when the robber took his mother's locket, the only substantial item that remains of her. This shows how much he loved her, and taking away that locket must've been like ripping off an arm to him. And hopefully Ryan's father heard the commotion through the phone and is sending help.
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Yeah, a person committing suicide always has a toll, mostly on the family members and other loved ones of the victim, Ryan is no exception. And the gift that Ryan supposedly has will be explained further into the story.
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Yes, the whole family situation is really complicated with a deceased mother who has been ostracized by her family and a presidential father who was absent for all of his son's life, until now of course. I'm happy the sequel got you to read the first part of the story and hopefully the rest will be just as enticing. 😀
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Thanks for another comment! It definitely is a twist with the fathers, and we'll see how their relationships further develop as the story continues in Japan. And at least the battle between Champions is authorized and not an internal war that would spell doom for the future of humanity.
