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  1. Bft

    Chapter 14

    I am pleased that the Chevy is running
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    Chapter 12

    Charle is going to be Tony’s partner
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    Chapter 10

    We just need to find Tony a partner
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    Chapter 6

    Thanks for sharing @Kev
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    Chapter 2

    Great chapter apart from marlene’s little visit, but that’s already been commented on.
  6. Loving this new story
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    Chapter 7

    A great story I do wonder if any of the British royal family are gay, I have always suspected Eddie might be, and got married as a cover up.
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    Chapter 7

    I think that our writing improves as we get older and write a lot more
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    Chapter 5

    The Church of England came into existence because king Henry VIII wanted a divorce, as he was catholic he could not divorce so he created his own church, it’s also why the Monarch is the head of the Church of England.
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    Chapter 3

    The bit about the blood on a sheet is typical way of a Muslim man finding out if his wife is a virgin, if she is not he can demand a divorce, all he has to do is say I want a divorce and in Islamic law if he hasn’t retracted that statement within 7 days they are divorced, but they still have to follow all of the legal requirements of the country that they live in, in the meantime she has to move back to her parents home. A divorced Muslim woman is considered damaged goods and it’s hard for her to find a man that is ok with this more often than not he is also divorced. it’s a horrible situation for her to be in, it’s a horrible religion and way of life. This has happened to my sister in law
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    Chapter 2

    Interesting story so far, but is Alexandra willing to have children with David?
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    Chapter 8

    No need to be sorry, we all have errors in our writing particularly emails, I always reread it first before sending just to be sure what I have written makes sense
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    Chapter 10

    My neighbours have a dappled brown dachshund they call her Udon because she looks like a noodle
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    Chapter 10

    Loved the end of the story, I knew that the Turner’s would sell the farm to our guys
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    Chapter 10

    Yes you did maybe you and Cal can work on it together
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    Chapter 9

    Loved this chapter and so happy that our young men have a welcoming place to call home at the end of the day.
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    Chapter 8

    I thought that you had notes of a storyline to work from? Message @Parker Owensor @Carlos Hazdayand ask them if they will help edit your stories
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    Chapter 7

    I think that Mrs Chase said something to Matts mother about what happened but she wanted to see what Dave had said happened. It’s always difficult with girls if they have a brother they think that he can get away with more, parents can be more protective of their daughter as they don’t want to see their little girl grow up to fast
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    Chapter 6

    A really nice chapter
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    Chapter 5

    They seem like a nice little group of friends
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    Chapter 4

    I liked Matt’s comment about eye candy.
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    Chapter 3

    The boys showering together was really 🥵
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    Chapter 26

    A nice little wrap up to a great story, strange things happen in Holland 🇳🇱
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    Chapter 26

    Did you pick a winner😂😁
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    Chapter 18

    I can imagine the queens that uncle jackass hangs around they are just a bunch of bitchy old sourpusses who ogled over a hot young teen guy.
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