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  1. mastershakeme

    Chapter 31

    Ehem, made by the fae 👼
  2. mastershakeme

    Chapter 31

    I've fudged so much, this is the thing 😂
  3. mastershakeme

    Chapter 31

    He totally made Zereth act sooner. It's Sev's fault. He was being a little jelly. Was probably rubbing it in a little bit. He's 17 like Trillion
  4. mastershakeme

    Chapter 31

    The council room had never felt this full. Ember sat at the long oak table between Trillion and Ash and watched the adults do the thing adults did when the world was ending, which was organize. Maps spread across the table. Elion's leather bound volumes open to specific pages, weighted down with cups and candlesticks. A detailed sketch of the sacred lake and its surrounding terrain that Ewan had drawn from memory and Croft had annotated with troop positions in a handwriting so aggressive it
  5. mastershakeme

    Chapter 30

    I'm glad 😊
  6. mastershakeme

    Chapter 30

    You didn't say that before 😏
  7. mastershakeme

    Chapter 30

    Yeah. Idk what I'd do with just a "No" 😂
  8. mastershakeme

    Chapter 30

    He did okay 😊
  9. mastershakeme

    Chapter 30

    The practice yard behind Arcum Castle was the same yard Sev had trained in for six years and it felt like a different country. Same stone walls. Same packed earth floor. Same racks of practice weapons along the north wall and same wooden dummies at the east end that Sev had spent a thousand hours putting his sword into while Trillion did the same thing beside him and Ewan shouted corrections from the center line. The geography was identical. Every stone was where Sev remembered it. But
  10. mastershakeme

    Chapter 29

    Mossmere said goodbye the way Mossmere did everything. Quietly. There was no crowd at the valley entrance. No speeches. No ceremony. Just a handful of villagers standing in the morning light beside the stream, watching seven riders and a packhorse file toward the narrow gap in the rock walls. A few raised hands. A few murmured words. The baker’s wife pressed a cloth wrapped bundle of bread into Elion’s hands as he passed and Elion thanked her with the specific grateful embarrassment of a ma
  11. mastershakeme

    Chapter 28

    That it is 😂
  12. mastershakeme

    Chapter 28

    OK. I tried to come back and delete this about 40 minutes after posting because... Idk I'm just seeing so many fuck ups! But there's no option to delete so... It's still up. I reluctantly committed. I worried about this all day and tired to put it out of my mind... I know this is really imperfect. I see lots of problems. I think I'm almost done so I'm going to try to finish. Thanks for struggling through this with me 😂
  13. mastershakeme

    Chapter 28

    They almost missed the valley. Caelo had been riding for eighteen hours and his body had stopped being a body about six hours ago and had become a collection of pain signals loosely organized around a saddle. The bond damage in his chest was a constant grinding ache that pulsed with every hoofbeat. His arms were shaking from the sustained effort of holding Solace's lead rope while simultaneously keeping himself upright on Mira. His vision was doing the thing where the edges went gray and th
  14. mastershakeme

    Chapter 27

    I will say, this is a hugely stupid problem 😂😂😂 I should probably throw the story out now
  15. mastershakeme

    Chapter 27

    He... Forgot 😂
  16. mastershakeme

    Chapter 27

    Ok, you can leave 😂
  17. mastershakeme

    Chapter 27

    Cian help them 🙏
  18. mastershakeme

    Chapter 27

    My point exactly
  19. mastershakeme

    Chapter 27

    I mean, honestly, good thing Zereth didn't just squash them. They're all hurt and sad crawling away like little bugs 😂 He's so sure he's gonna win
  20. mastershakeme

    Chapter 27

    The drainage channel smelled like his childhood. That was the thing Sev hadn’t been prepared for. Not the dark. Not the tight walls. Not the corrupted water running ankle deep over the stone beneath them. The smell. Wet rock and cold metal and the faint organic sweetness of whatever grew in the cracks between the stones, the same mineral dampness that had been in every tunnel and corridor and hallway of Noxcarra when Sev was a boy running through them alone because his sister was already de
  21. mastershakeme

    Chapter 26

    Even cooler 😎
  22. mastershakeme

    Chapter 26

    That looks wicked thou!
  23. mastershakeme

    Chapter 26

    I like to jump the gun myself 😂
  24. mastershakeme

    Chapter 26

    Truely, not to him
  25. mastershakeme

    Chapter 26

    Do you want me to speed it up and end it faster? 🫠 C'mon
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