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This is an erotic story, I enjoy writing the sex scenes and yes you're right, I wrote this story only for myself and never thinking about the readers. I wanted to share it but I wrote it without caring about who would read it and at first i didn't write it for Gayauthors but for Nifty where I used to read sex stories when I was younger and then Gaydemon or Literotica where readers actually want to read the sex scenes just like me 😆 Maybe its just not a story for this site, I know I'm not an author, just a guy who attempted to write a story about the characters in my head If you're going to comment on a story, try to find something positive to say please, i spent hours and hours writing this and I love it, readers with only something negative to say just ruin it, I will never write again so I don't care but I really dont need to know about what people didn't like about it

OK that's just mean 🥲😄 plus, this was just a chapter I wrote for fun weeks after concluding the story. Then I wrote more later

@FanLit it was fun writing the sex scenes, less challenging than developing the story, which is the reason why there's sex in every chapter even when they're physically apart 😆 and also the reason why they screwed up a little, so in this chapter, breaking their rule was what made it exciting to write, and hopefully to read as well! about their last name, I'd say they just kept their own last names.

@FanLit it's about time I reply to your post, my apologies, life is so busy. I first wrote this story when I was 18 but stopped abruptly because it had become too challenging, and then gave it another try years later and it has become what it is now so I can understand continuing a story 30 years later... Maybe someday, @ShadowDweller knows there is a good part of it already written so who knows 😄for now it still feels like an overwhelming task tbh

Here after reading Mrsgnomie's story? Don't worry this chapter was first written in 2005 and then reworked in 2017 and after so many years, it's still nice when people leave a comment 😉

You're welcome, I'm glad you had a good time reading about them, doesn't matter if you're late to the party! There are no other characters in my brain, but I had a compulsive need to write about Robbie and Mark. I wish I could tell you I'll write more about them but it's unlikely, it's a bit too late now.

@Ford48 this is cool! Thanks for leaving a comment and telling me you're enjoying the story, always nice to know there are still people reading this!

I haven't logged on in a while, plus I have a stye and my vision is blurred but I still managed to read this chapter and the previous ones, not thoroughly though, but I'll try again later. This chapter was such a feel good chapter, I love that you ve written about their lives now in details, the characters feel like real people and the closeness they now share is awesome. Well done, you really know how to write a story and I'm looking forward to reading the next one

I prefer Nash's point of view too, I liked Penn's pov and I think it'd be nice to read his side of the story again in future chapters (how many left though? 1, 2, 3?) but I'd still prefer reading the next one from Nash's pov, and yes, why not both?

Well the next chapter should be interesting! This one was, as I once called the chapter with Nick in Italy, a very well written edging chapter! Can't wait to see what will happen during the storm, is it a work in progress? Again, I'm glad you're safe.

I'm sorry to hear you live in the area that is on fire, that must so scary, after Australia, now America. 2020 is such a terrible year, it's insane! I hope your house isn't lost, damn, I can't even begin to imagine how devastating it must be. Stay safe.

True! it would've been better. Oh well, whatever, I'm so done editing this story! 😅

@Marty I thought I'd changed that, but apparently I didn't, not here. I still think it's obvious Mark says you and I because it's the band's name.

you'll soon find out! Maybe you have already lol