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    @Bard Simpson thank you so much for your feedback. 🤩 This story, you'll see if you keep reading it, follows the guys for the next ten years of the lives, through their ups and downs! I had already attempted to write about Rob and Mark's story over ten years ago, so I just started out again with what I already had, but then to be honest, their story sort of wrote itself!
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    @Bard Simpsonwow, thanks for your awesome comments on the beginning of the story! I love getting some feedback so I think I'm going to love you! 🤩 I knew about the story behind the song yellow and now I'm jealous! The first time I wrote this story was over ten years ago. I remember I had written the lyrics to a U-N-I song myself... when I started writing the story again in 2017, using Coldplay songs just became so obvious to me... plus it happens to be one of my favourite bands.
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    Thanks for always commenting, that's awesome to know what readers think ☺️
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    Hehe thanks, I'm glad you liked it! You did read it super fast, impressive! 👍
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    Haha I almost made Rob say this to the crowd in this chapter 😅 Thanks for telling me that you've enjoyed reading the story, I love it!
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    Thanks for telling me! That made my day We're under quarantine here in France and I have to work from home so I might spend some time with Rob and Mark!
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    👍Thank you for reading and for commenting 👍
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    Chapter 25 - The big day

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    “How’re you doing?” Rachel hissed under her breath. “Um, ask me when it’s all over,” I chuckled, “I'm actually more relaxed than I thought I'd be," I told her, "I'm pretty sure this is gonna run smoothly. I've rehearsed the song three times this morning without any hiccups." "And Rob will love it," she told me confidently again. I breathed, suddenly feeling nervous. "What if he doesn't though?" I asked and she stared at me sympathetically. "How many times do we all
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    "Thank you so much for coming out and being with us tonight. We hope you had an amazing night. We love you all," Rob said to the crowd before we walked off stage, ending yet another amazing gig. We were in Seoul, South Korea, playing the fourth show of a tour that had kicked off in Singapore two weeks earlier. Tokyo was next, and we were still buzzing from the incredible reception we’d been getting across Asia. Every gig was incredible. We were finally doing the mind-blowing gigs we h
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    PART 4 - Chapter 22

    unilive commented on unilive's story chapter in PART 4 - Chapter 22

    yes I think it's a french saying that's why!
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    PART 4 - Chapter 22

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    Here we were in Singapore, ready to kick off the tour on the following night. We were so excited we could hardly contain ourselves, so since we had landed in Singapore four days before, we had barely had any sleep. We were aware that we had to rest before the first gig but there were still so many things to do, including enjoying this amazing city. Since we had landed, we had slept a maximum of four to five hours a night. It was eleven am local time and we were being interviewed for a loca
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    PART 4 - Chapter 22

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    “Hey,” Rob called. I turned around with a smile and he snapped a picture with his phone before quickly catching up with me. He wrapped an arm around my shoulder and pecked my cheek. We were in Turks and Caicos again. We had spent a month here in January to start looking at villas for sale. We were in no hurry to buy a house of our own, but it was something we both really wanted to do so we were back again to spend a bit more time exploring the market, but more especially, to be alone t
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    Nah, he'll come back and crash their wedding!!!! 😱 mouahaha just kidding 🤣🤣 although in the new chapter I'm writing, Rob says something like "we don't need another fucking Damien in our lives!" 😅
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    Great! Always nice to see a new reader
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    I woke on my left side, my eyes not quite ready to open. I rolled onto my back and realised Rob wasn’t in bed anymore. I listened for any sound from the living room, but there was nothing, everything was completely quiet and dark. It was still the middle of the night. For a few minutes, I tried to fall back asleep, hoping Rob would soon join me in bed again… but he didn’t. I knew he had to be in the living room, and I had been awake alone for far too long. I wanted him right next to me, to
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    aww really? thanks so much, I really appreciate your feedback. To be honest, I'm pretty insecure about my writing, you know because I'm French and this is my first and only story. I know there are readers out there who like the story but it's even better to know what people think of each chapter. So it means a lot to know I've managed to make you feel the love between them in this one. The story on the page and the story in my head are two different things and what I've chosen to write are to me the most important aspects of their story. Thanks again. Hope you'll enjoy the next few chapters!
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    Call him and tell him exactly that. It’ll be fun,” Jordan said. I laughed and pulled my phone from my pocket with a mischievous grin. “Put him on speaker,” he urged. “Hey… Mark, uh, how are you?” Damon stammered, insisting on my name, which made it so obvious that he was with Rachel and he was subtly telling her that I was calling. “I’m good,” I replied. “Still in Dublin with Jord. He’s flying back tomorrow.” “Yeah, yeah, he told me. Look, I’m sorry I didn’t call yo
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    Chapter 19 - redemption

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    Robbie's point of view. About three weeks later, a receptionist came to get me while I was sitting by the pool. She explained that there had been a commotion at the front desk because a security guard had stopped someone who was not on my visitor list and asked to see me. “Would you mind coming with me to let us know if you want to see this person?” she asked. “Sure,” I said, following her willingly. When we reached the lobby, I couldn’t help but smile as I recognized Sam, al
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    Chapter 18 - mistakes

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    Robbie's point of view “Claire will go with you,” Tom said as he sat in my living room, tapping away at his laptop, almost certainly typing emails about me. I’d called him that morning to tell him I’d decided to leave. “Your flight’s tomorrow evening. That gives you time to pack,” he added. I was slumped comfortably in an armchair, absentmindedly picking out a melody I’d come up with on one of our bass guitars. Dylan, who’d been hanging out with me all afternoon was scrol
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    Chapter 17 - seduced

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    After a month without seeing my friends, having Jordan around was refreshing. I had missed hanging out with him, I had missed the laughter. I had missed goofing around and making jokes. I had missed being able to talk freely and without restraint about any topic. He wasn’t Rob, but still, he was my best friend and his presence was making Rob's absence easier to endure. As soon as he got to New York, time began to go by quickly. We had decided to leave and go back to Dublin just after Jimmy'
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    yes, Coldplay's lyrics are absolutely perfect for this story and it continues to fit the story until the end, I could always find lyrics that just worked... and I think realizing that is what made me want to write the story again in the first place! Even now that i've finished writing it, there are still many Coldplay songs that I want to use for U-N-I's fifth album... if I ever write more!
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    Yeah, he does, probably cause he wanted this more than he was willing to admit and had fantasized about it happening. Thanks for your feedback, hopefully you're still enjoying the story
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    Thank you! I'm taking the time to answer your comments tonight; Hopefully you still enjoy reading the story.
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