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@FanLit I don't say who's responsible in the story, I've left it to your imagination bc I didn't want Mark and Rob to know who it was, but as they say in the interview in chapt 10, it made them realize that they couldn't trust everybody like they thought they could, so they think it's someone from their entourage, maybe working for them who sold the pictures to the Sun. Glad you liked the story enough to want to read it again btw have you read the new chapters I posted, you never said?

Had the same problem with Rob's dad, called him Edward, Ed. How about Bill? Robert? Larry? Andrew? David ? Frank ? Jim? Jeff? Richard ? They all sound like dad names to me lol

@MrsgnomieHope you're not reading my story instead of posting yours 😅😅😅

You're welcome, thanks for reading about them! 👍

@drsawzall It is kind of a cliffhanger, but it's also the end of the story. I wanted to end it but also leave the door open for more. I do have an idea and if I write more, it'll be a flashback and something will happen to Mark. To quote you, do I feel like it needs to come forward, I'm still undecided. Sometimes I do, sometimes I don't... I'll probably miss the guys soon anyway and decide that I want it to come forward after all... we'll see! Thanks for your comment, it's just knowing that there are people reading tbh and interacting with readers is just fun.

I'll try if I get the time during my time off!

I really like your writing style! 😎

hehe I had a look at your stories and now I understand why you were telling me about your French! Nice story, I don't think I've ever read a story set in France before 👍

@Phoenix1977 That's the kind of feedback I'm talking about 👍😅 Really, you would've liked to read more about Nick? Well I might mention him again if I write more. The Nick storyline was all about the threesome hehe and the slow build up was a way to make that threesome really hot and a bit more special than what they'd done before... plus it allowed me to develop Mark and Rob's relationship, their life on tour with their friends and all that, and to show readers that they were happy and still were a strong couple, it was fun. Yep, I guess the time had come for Mark to confront his "not-a-father". I didn't want to write it before and now I know why, it's much better that it happens at the end of the story, which is why I say that the story has come full circle, even I didn't know it'd end like this lol ...and with them becoming parents... I'm sure your French is good, but it's my native tongue, so, easy for me. I know it's a hard language to learn! Thanks again for responding

And I'd really like to know what readers think of the new chapters I've written 😅 All joking aside, I'd like to write more but I don't know when I will. Mentioning that something has happened to Mark leaves the door open and I can go back to the story if/when I feel like it. I still have Coldplay songs to use!! hehe Writing the new chapters was a lot of fun but if I'm honest, posting them... not so much. I enjoy interacting with readers and it's important for me to know what they think and well there were less views, less votes, no comments except for Heifel, thanks again so I'm pretty sure a lot of readers didn't like the Nick storyline, maybe that's just it, I must have lost them, or maybe they can't think of anything to say. Anyway, I guess it shouldn't matter but writing takes a lot of my time so will I write more? probably... when? I don't know. Will you comment please if I do?

"Why d'you stop the car?" Rob asked full of concern. I gripped the steering wheel tightly and didn't speak. He reached over and rubbed my shoulder lightly. "Babe, you've been back before, it's ok." "I know, and I feel exactly the same. I don't know – I don't know what I'm doing here," I sighed and his hand moved to the back of my neck. "You're here because I've asked you to be," he said. "I shouldn't have come, what's the point, it's been three years and nothing's d

haha I keep getting notifications and they're always for you, never for me! how do you do it? 🤣 Drama drama drama (yeah, yours is the only story I follow here) I liked this chapter a lot, Nash is behaving exactly how I thought he'd behave, I knew he'd just assume things and then leave and erase Penn from his life for a few months. I'm still disappointed in Penn, he's not trying very hard... Can't wait to see what's gonna happen when they finally start to communicate!

He-he I didn't see this coming! Good drama! I wonder how Penn's gonna handle the situation and if the baby is even his. i'm a bit surprised that he wouldn't say anything to Nash... kinda upset with him actually, why wouldn't he tell him! (That makes me think you're not gonna believe this, but in the first version I wrote of U-N-I, years ago, it was a bit different from the storyline I wrote this time around) Rach was kinda secretly in love with Mark, who hadn't really noticed it, and after he began dating Rob, they all got drunk one night and Rach made him have sex with her, cause he was drunk, got pregrant... and then you imagine the drama with Rob after that, it was actually a pretty fun version too! lol) Anyway, back to your story 😅 I'm with the others, I'm not sure I understand why Penn would have stayed a virgin. Ok so he was into Nash, got his heart broken... but never have sex with anyone? I don't know, well you're not gonna change this, but if there are hot guys like him that do exist in this world, I'd like to meet them!😅 I do understand what he means when he said that he made bad choices, cause he had sex with Cam... it's not reallt clear in the chapter and maybe it's done on purpose, but when did he have sex with Cam the first time?

oh wait this gif is even better hehe @heifel35

hehe glad you still think that! I guess this chapter does show their dynamic more than others! thanks for commenting, you're the only one so,

“Thank you for an amazing night San Diego! I can't believe this is the last one, you were amazing, we love you and we'll miss you so much! Have a safe journey home and see you again someday!" Those were the words that Robbie had used to end the tour. We’d played the SDCCU Stadium and it had been so sad and emotional to say goodbye to the fans, knowing that it was the last gig of what had turned out to be the most incredible tour we had ever done. Now we were gathering in the dining

It really wasn't meant as a criticism, just a thought to make the story better, cause it's a good story.

Oh no sorry, I wouldn't be a good editor, but because I was so bad at it when I started writing my story, I now know how important it is lol hope you find someone who can give you a few pointers. Think dots and commas.

I enjoyed this first chapter, looking forward to more!👍 (I can't believe i'm going to say this, because I've been there before trust me, but I think the story would be better if you find an editor )

same! Awesome chapter and first kiss, I thought there'd be no sex until the very end, so it was a pleasant surprise lol I'm pretty sure life won't be all cupcakes and rainbows for these two from now on, so let's see what you have in store for them...

So Penn is gonna play hard to get, uh? Of course he will! 👍

wow, these two have amazing self-control! I mean I would have sex with Penn so many times already! lol kidding, this was a really sweet chapter, and when they do finally kiss, there's gonna be fireworks! I'm with @84Mags , loved the line “His expression—I never knew you could smile from your soul." but I think I like this one even more: the way he held me, like he was holding onto something he couldn’t live without 👍👍

Looks like Nash is falling for Penn! 😁 So glad Wayne told everyone that Paul was sleeping with Lee! He got what he deserved! 👍

Another great chapter... to quote you he-he Penn really is a good friend, but that paragraph about his own marriage, intriguing...

So am I, that's what I thought from the beginning but it seems too easy... Well not for Nash considering Penn is straight AND married...but he doesn't have kids so less guilt...