Laura S. Fox
-
Posts
7,732 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by Laura S. Fox
-
Great! I hope you'll continue to like it!
-
Thank you! I really like making people laugh!
-
That would lead us to an Attack of the Clones scenario, and I'm afraid Aidan couldn't resist two Heathcliffs, lol! But nice noticing the spark & stone allusion! That's the whole point!
-
And now I'm seeing my characters roaming around like Sims, lol! Oh, Heath will do a lot of yanking, that's for sure! But rest assured that he's a guy who knows exactly what he wants, only that, as we all may well know, that kind of certainty and self-confidence is not always a good thing. At the same time, Aidan will try to do his best, because he was programmed that way, lol! Thanks a lot for the funny comment! Also, maybe you should register the pornographic tea party idea! You never know when becomes a hit, and you don't get the credit you deserve!
-
Thank you Wes! And I'm glad you're with me on this one too!
-
Thank you, chérie! I'm glad you're enjoying the story already. Oh, yes, Heathcliff can't wait to tease Aidan more. As for Aidan, ha-ha, don't worry. Appearances may fool anyone, but he might not be able to hold up with those for too long. Hugs!
-
Well, I think you're on to something Thank you for commenting, as for the fun factor, I'll surely do my best!
-
Thank you for the vote of confidence! And knowing that readers have an easy time imagining the characters can only make me happy!
-
Hey, glad I made you laugh! And thanks a lot for all the work you did to edit this chapter!
-
Thanks for the tip, Lisa! Now that's something I'll remember from now on
-
Full summary: The last thing fitness guru Heathcliff Stone needs is a babysitter, mainly because the one thing he hates more than his name - courtesy of his mom who, to this day, continues to be a Brontë obsessed reader - is for someone to try to control him. When the most important company endorsing him sends over a preppy looking guy to keep him on a tight leash, his knee jerk reaction is to send the yuppie packing. Yet, there is something that stops him from putting the figurative
- 31 comments
-
- 88
-
-
-
-
-
The last thing fitness guru Heathcliff Stone needs is a babysitter, mainly because the one thing he hates more than his name - courtesy of his mom who, to this day, continues to be a Brontë obsessed reader - is for someone to try to control him. When the most important company endorsing him sends over a preppy looking guy to keep him on a tight leash, his knee jerk reaction is to send the yuppie packing. Yet, there is something that stops him from putting the figurative boot in the guy’s ass. Aidan Spark is exactly what the doctor ordered. (Full summary inside because there's a character limit)
-
Wow, this is one hard to read chapter, but of course this doesn't mean that it wasn't good, but quite the opposite As difficult as it may be, Danny might be better off without his mom at this point. When he grows up, maybe he can reunite with her, and maybe she'll learn something from this, too. It's so sad when someone loses themselves like that. And we all have to admire Danny for being so strong, especially given all the hardships in his life. At least he's not taken from his mom and sent who knows where. He found himself a family, a home, and a gorgeous boyfriend, so all must be good in his world, the little cinnamon roll.
-
From the very start, I wanted this to be a funny story, so the fact that you tell me I made you laugh is the greatest reward. As for the Aaron Carter thing ... so funny that it hadn't crossed my mind until some readers pointed it out, lol! Thank you for not finding my English awkward or anything! I know I have still plenty to learn, but it's so good to be appreciated! Thank you again for reading and commenting!
-
Hey Lisa, thanks a lot for all the praise! I'm glad that I could keep up with all your expectations And now I'll go to reply to your comment on Box Shaped Heart, as well!
-
Phew, I did it. I read the whole chapter, and it was intense and it was sad and, while I cannot say, hand on heart, it's enough for Loz, at the same time, I can say that it was admirable that you pulled it through. When the perpetrator is someone this young, I can't say that the legal system would be able to reform him. It could make him worse, though, and that means that the whole point is lost. So this is better
-
All caught up! Thank you for the story!
-
And the truth is out ... Loz is in trouble, sigh. There's no easy way out now. I will look forward to see how you're going to solve this situation. (I have trust in you!)
-
Yeah, that one. Haven't watched it, but there were small movies and trailers, and watched those.
-
And here comes the pain ... Sigh (don't worry, I'm just exaggerating). But it's good to see progress in Loz.
-
The 'ha ha' reaction is for the block of cheese ... So many sweet and nice chapters ... So good ... Oh, look, the next chapter comes Loz! Damn!
-
Let's call it female intuition, ha, ha.
-
Ha, ha, the dads put the foot down! (And all I can think of is that movie with the emotions and the father getting the inner thingy telling him to put the foot down!)
-
And now it's time for me to say ... I knew it! About Amy and Julie, of course!
-
So happy for Daniel! And I think this new family will be great for him!
