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  1. Laura S. Fox
    Now I'll be blamed for alcohol consumption, too... On the other hand, Brad might've enjoyed a lil' seeing Alexander shut down by Lyn... Alexander is no fool.
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    Glad you thought so
  3. Laura S. Fox
    Oh, yes, that was it. I replied to @weinerdog above before reading your comment, but you captured the essence of it perfectly.
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    Since we remain in Lyn's POV all the time, the readers are limited by what he sees (and chooses to see - and hear).
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    You haven't seen anything yet...
  6. Laura S. Fox
    Chapter Fifty-Five – I Needed to See How It Would End “Why the hell did you do that?” Brad had managed to shake Alexander off and was now determined to give Luke a piece of his mind, too. Lyn took another step back, and then another. His place wasn’t here, his role wasn’t that of a witness to an unfolding drama, drama he didn’t need in his life. He wanted to grab his head and yell, as loudly as he could, until the thoughts whirling there were shocked into silence. Alexander.
  7. Laura S. Fox
    Chapter Seventeen – The Morning After The first thing Theodore noticed when he woke up at the crack of dawn was the lack of any tension whatsoever in his body. The sensation, so unfamiliar to him, triggered a bout of self-examination. It took him a moment to remember what had happened. The events of the night before came rushing back as he pulled himself to a sitting position, his elbows resting on his knees, his legs bent. With one hand, he chased the recent memories away, wiping his face
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    Oh, you guys, you flatter me so much And this isn't even everything that the story must say about Brad. While this chapter was pretty much the climax of the story, I do still have a big twist following. And Brad... oh, Brad. I knew he'd have people up in arms. I like to believe that your opinion of him in the end will be complex.
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    Just his one time, Maestro, allow me not to comment much on your analysis... A lot of true things in here, especially about the avoidance of using the word love by Brad. I wonder how you will look at this commentary you made here once you know the whole truth about Brad. Childish? Yes. But me thinks there is a little more.
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    Yes, I am drama... and you guys must love drama since you're here, reading my stories... And yeah, Alexander is pretty intense...
  11. Laura S. Fox
    Thank you!
  12. Laura S. Fox
    Yeah, Alexander was quite manipulative here... in the past, I mean. I know people read him as perfect, and I knew he wasn't, so I can't say that I didn't worry a little about how his actions from the past will reflect on people's opinion of him. However, my hope is that it made him human, and actually in line with his personality to a degree. Lyn did a lot of ignoring, yes. There is still a bit until it all comes back the him, the right angle for seeing things right. I like to believe that it will be emotional - I sniffled when I wrote those chapters, to be honest. Luke won't be explained because we'll remain in Lyn's POV until the end. But his regrets, hopefully, could be read on his face.
  13. Laura S. Fox
    I knew a confirmation of Alexander's feelings was in the cards... Lyn will be Lyn, and then we'll have more drama. Also, not all questions related to side characters will have complete answers. The whole story is and will remain Lyn's POV.
  14. Laura S. Fox
    Indeed! Couldn't have left a drop... Yet I still have more drama...
  15. Laura S. Fox
    Oh, I love this so much. Thank you.
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    Just my usual MO...
  17. Laura S. Fox
    Yet they are friends... and I so know how everything looks for Brad right now. You haven't seen the last of him, soul-related.
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    As kids would say today, that's literally me.
  19. Laura S. Fox
    It looks like you were right! No, not in cahoots, oh, lol, that would be so evil...
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    We only have Lyn's POV... just as a reminder.
  21. Laura S. Fox
    Oh, me like it...
  22. Laura S. Fox
    There are questions... and they will soon be answered. If you know me by now, you must expect more drama before the resolution. But it's in sight, not that long left.
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    You can say that.
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  25. Laura S. Fox
    Chapter Fifty-Four – [Memory, Senior Year, April] – Secrets Between Us There was just so much to do. Lyn navigated between textbooks with the highest speed he could achieve on land, but if felt like they would swamp him soon. He only needed to stay ahead by gulping down large portions of text without even worrying if he could digest them or not. Across from him, Brad lounged with one arm thrown across the table, his head resting against his shoulder. Lyn snuck a glance at his friend.
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