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Things will go on a fast lane soon... I still have surprises for you regarding Bella and Brad. And Lyn will be very, very surprised, too.
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He-he... someone reads me so closely... and the shock will come from someplace else. Still holding my cards close to my chest. Remember, guys, you only know what Lyn knows, since this is a single character POV story.
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Hmm... nope That won't happen!
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Some things of what you said are very close to the truth... But I won't say which!
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It's not Lyn's job to understand Luke... though he might try. As for Bella and Lyn... who knows? They might still become friends
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Chapter Fifty-Two – [Memory, Senior Year, March] – You’ll Never Be Alone “Man, you’re always up to the craziest things,” Lyn scolded Brad, watching his friend pushing the swing to go higher. This short break at Brad’s home was supposed to be a welcome respite from all the studying the boys were putting in with finals and their graduation getting closer and closer. However, Lyn hadn’t expected Brad’s parents to be away from home, leaving ‘the realm’ all to themselves. Only, instead
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[Memory, Senior Year, November] – Death by a Thousand Cuts
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, November] – Death by a Thousand Cuts
Please do keep the HEA in mind I know that I make my readers sad on occasion - maybe even angry! - but that's the challenge I live for (when writing, not in real life): to have the people in love overcome all the obstacles, whether they are external or self-inflicted, and emerge victorious at the end. Lyn sees a lot of Alexander. He doesn't allow himself to dwell on what he feels, as you know by now. And Alexander understands. Brad is just... Brad. He doesn't bring up the girlfriend out of malice. Evil he is not. I'll let the revelations that will come later speak for him. -
[Memory, Senior Year, November] – Death by a Thousand Cuts
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, November] – Death by a Thousand Cuts
Of course! -
[Memory, Senior Year, November] – Death by a Thousand Cuts
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, November] – Death by a Thousand Cuts
Maybe... -
[Memory, Senior Year, November] – Death by a Thousand Cuts
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, November] – Death by a Thousand Cuts
Hmm, stirring up trouble is not exactly what's going on... -
[Memory, Senior Year, November] – Death by a Thousand Cuts
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, November] – Death by a Thousand Cuts
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Chapter Fifty-One – Truth over Comfort Inside the beach cottage he shared with Alexander he was allowed to feel happy. But outside of it, the weight of his moral dilemma continued to press down on him. Something told Lyn, a little bird in his ear, that if he insisted hard enough, Alexander would help him, one way or another. But he didn’t want that help. It would feel like cheating. Would Brad hate him if Lyn told on him? Without a doubt. That wasn’t even a question to consider. W
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He is so all that... yet Jack can't help drooling, lol. But his backstory... well, I won't say anything just yet.
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That's the spirit, yes!
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Vince and Jack need to be pretty convincing!
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Totally legit reaction!
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Jack came too soon or too late... ha-ha...
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Oh, yes, he was
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Chapter Fifteen – The Alpha Who Smelled Too Good “Seriously,” Jack mumbled under his breath, “just leave the hard work to the small guy.” After his little tantrum from earlier when he had almost caught Theodore and Vince in the act trying to have fun without him – probably – the tough CEO-slash-alpha had warned him that the nights were chilly and if he didn’t move his ass to carry enough firewood inside, Jack would be on his own when it came to getting warm at night. Two log chunks. Th
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Alexander truly grasps at any straws here... he needs so much reassurance, I want to hug him (even though I'm the one writing Lyn being so cruel without intention). Ah, I can so barely wait for your reactions when Alexander will start spilling all the beans... as for Lyn's reactions to it all... well, he's not the easiest character to write on one side, and understand on the other. But I trust you, guys, since you keep blowing me away with such in-depth observations. Yes, Lyn is choosing Alexander! But there will be some drama - I can't help it, it must be in my DNA.
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Alexander doesn't cut him any slack as far as these negotiations go. Lyn doesn't name his feelings yet, but he will, once it becomes inevitable Intense will... cover it just fine
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Same back at you! And yes, he is
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Oh, wow, Maestro, what a beautiful line you left there at the end... Alexander and Lyn are coming together only now, and that's the truth. The obstacles from the past are only now removed - or in the course of being removed. This was a chapter dedicated to negotiations. Alexander knows Lyn, which is why he insists on details, as much as they can talk about such things now. They are getting closer to an alignment, for sure. Years gone by, wasted years, you name it, but even Alexander knows things weren't possible back then. His motivations are also complex - or maybe simple when observed from a certain angle. He will speak up, and he will let Lyn in on his secrets, but, you know me, not a moment too soon!
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That says it all!
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Complications are on the horizon... But I will take readers through, I promise!
