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Laura S. Fox

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  1. Thank you!
  2. Danny and Ryder are on the right path, the only problem is their inability to see the big picture... yet. When all will be revealed, Danny will have to muster all the courage he has no idea he possesses! Pembroke won't be a no-show forever. When he will show... well, expect some real showdown!
  3. He-he, Rock Hudson, what a man...
  4. Thank you! All the best to you, as well. Jack is my favorite secondary character, and he will also be instrumental in the plot from now on. His 'neurosis' might take other shapes, just saying!
  5. Just posted the new chapter, in which we follow the guys. Danny gets Ryder, and Vince gets Jack, so all that will be quite interesting to see, I reckon.
  6. Yes, you are correct, thank you for noticing! Petty theft is not that big a deal, which is why the police won't bother too much... unless prompted by the big man in charge aka Theodore. Definitely, the bigger threat is the other wolf in the city.
  7. Chapter Nine – Inextinguishable Fire Seeing a giant like Ryder maneuvering himself through the city maze from that distance should have seemed at least a bit odd to Danny, but that would have required having certain prerequisites such as a sound mind. He had nothing like that left, apparently, if he was so bent on going home with a possible criminal in tow and sleeping with him under the same roof, while the police were searching for the aforementioned criminal. But all those worries a
  8. Once they do that, sure, they must strategize
  9. I think that the amount of craziness in the world at this hour doesn't exclude certain characters doing shamelessly the same thing without caring for consequences. I know, I just see the LiveFeed guys I invented as that sort of sociopaths.
  10. So well said about Jamie's real name. It will play an instrumental role in the reveal of the whole plot toward the end.
  11. Let's hope that happens, Chris!
  12. Hearst has his own hang-ups, that's true. Jamie tends to be a hothead, but he would do better by strategizing...
  13. Jamie needs to fight this - these assholes. I'm afraid too many people in general fear a confrontation to put assholes like that in their places. One honorable way is to prove himself as a musician. But sometimes, other ways should be considered.
  14. Laura S. Fox

    Partners

    Chapter Thirty-Six – Partners Cottontail still managed to act shy, even if he had Jamie assuring him over and over that it was his cock he wanted to suck, and no one else’s. It only challenged him to do better, go further, and even annoyed him enough to want to prove himself. He would prove himself by showing what a great cocksucker he was. Jamie took pride in that. It was, after all, a skill he had cultivated over the years, from the moment he had understood how much he enjoyed giving
  15. Excellent. Readers are catching on...
  16. Jack will learn sooo much on the go, but he's a natural, so he'll be fine!
  17. That sounds like really something, lol!
  18. I didn't comment until now about Cassandra, because I wanted the readers to start having their own suspicions. And now, I can confirm them. Kat won't be reappearing until toward the end... so that was one missed chance for me for creating more drama!
  19. As it's intended!
  20. Jack is definitely more than he believes he is. Ryder is good with his muscles, but he didn't waste time with overthinking his plans for sure.
  21. Things will start happening really fast... Who gets to Ryder first? We'll see
  22. You're welcome and yep, Jack is here to stay!
  23. Oh, lol, so true! Ryder is chaos just by walking around casually. Danny is going to make some big decisions, and yes, Jack will tag along!
  24. Chapter Eight – Partners in Crime “If he’s on the run, he might very well hide somewhere that is not your place,” Vince suggested. Danny shook his head. “I don’t think he’s a criminal. I refuse to think that. He’s honest and direct, and he has a firm handshake--” “And he’s very good looking, which would explain your temporary madness,” Vince interrupted him promptly. “What temporary madness?” Danny asked, stopping for a moment to take a good long look at his friend. “Yo
  25. Chapter Thirty-Five – Against all Odds Jamie woke up with a throbbing head. The world had come crashing down on him the night before. How could he have let himself be used so shamelessly? Even that stupid gossip rag Xpress was having a field day on his account. His calls to Angus had gone unanswered. Calling Arthur to tell on Angus about making him into a clown and insinuating that he didn’t even play the drums, as the LiveFeed platform cheerfully showed, wasn’t a solution. Both Arthur and
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