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Laura S. Fox

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  1. Hmm... elaborate?
  2. Excellent point!
  3. Great! Someone paid attention! (And I'm glad that I did leave the right clue, after all)
  4. Don't worry! I usually have my stories planned out (not in detail, but the main points are jotted down), so when readers guess my intentions, I'm happy because personally I don't like it when authors seems to pull certain things out of a magical hat only for the sake of a twist to shock those reading. I'm hoping to leave plenty of breadcrumbs, and please feel free to speculate! I won't reply to your comments in a way that will give spoilers, but you will know when you guessed right, and I hope that will make you happy!
  5. This is so... (insert what you want) - Alexa, play Despacito!
  6. We will see! At the moment, Danny is just a city boy, and Ryder is... well, for Danny, he's just a country boy!
  7. Yep, Danny also lives on the top floor - well noticed! Ryder is very focused, so he might - I'm just saying! - miss some clues... But that happens with driven people. As for Cassandra, she truly guided Ryder to Theodore Pembroke. It looks like I didn't make it clear enough, although I thought all the info was there.
  8. Ah, thank you. I explained this to the previous commenters, as it seems like it was a small detail easy to overlook.
  9. He would definitely use that lucky break. I apologize for confusing people - in the first chapter, it's mentioned briefly that Ryder went to the Pembroke building, guided by a clairvoyant called Cassandra.
  10. There are certain options... but the 'single bed' trope does get me every time, lol!
  11. It's because of a clairvoyant called Cassandra, who sent him to the city in search of Theodore Pembroke. I apologize if that wasn't clear enough from the first chapter.
  12. Ryder doesn't know about the ways of the city and, right now, he doesn't want to learn them anyway. He's thinking of a quick in and out - I promise, no pun intended - and getting back to his pack.
  13. Danny really, really, really tries to be a good guy. Unless he's tempted more than he can handle!
  14. Ryder is a man with a mission, and his mission doesn't involve... Average Joe! Yes, that misunderstanding about the name will be cleared, but it will come with its fair share of consequences. Rest assured that when sex happens, Danny will be stunned, indeed!
  15. Okay, that's one good example, lol. The story will have around 55-ish chapters, and since I post once a week, you can calculate an approximative date for its end.
  16. Having more sex will definitely contribute to their developing feelings. Although some people might be good at keeping things separated, I personally don't believe that two people can have sex for a long time, without developing any sort of attachment. Unless they hate-fuck! But that hate should be really, really strong to last...
  17. When the going will get rough... Jamie won't be able to fully admit to being surprised. The red flags were there.
  18. You're so right. Jamie tends to be a bit naïve in the sense that he believes he can beat the odds just by being himself. Chasing fame never ends well.
  19. Relationships take time to build, imho. Of course, in fantasies, we can imagine people falling instantly in love, but I also like to explore relationships where feelings develop in time.
  20. Chapter Thirty – Many Other Boys Jamie wiped Cottontail’s mouth with his fingers over and over, even though there was nothing left to brush away. He just had no other idea how to express how wonderfully rewarded he felt for being able to do something like that with somebody. As a staunch supporter and promoter of safe sex, he had made it a habit a long time ago not to come in anyone’s ass or mouth. Since his so-called relationships – no, he really couldn’t call them that, since they were so
  21. There is quite a story behind it, indeed!
  22. HEA is my middle name (besides S., of course!)
  23. Thank you so much for the encouragement! I'll do my best!
  24. Hmm... and now the question is - he is there for his own safety, or is it the other way around?
  25. I'll do my best, Al!
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