Laura S. Fox
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I'm not sure right now if you've read and participated in the comment section on other of my stories, but I can assure you that I'm always up for reading speculations from readers, especially when there's a mystery involved. I am reading them all with much interest, only that I don't comment on them because I live in fear of spoilers, lol. However, when we reach the end, you'll know if your theories were correct, where you got close, and you can tell me then how the story's twists and turns matched them or not. Either way, I know I am repeating myself, I love to read this sort of commentary.
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The laugh emoji is obviously for your last line... as usual, you sent the ball back into @J.El's court right away. Your game of ping-pong/tennis continues to be fascinating and entertaining. Yep, Hudson got in, so to speak. The action will start soon, after a short reprieve given by today's episode.
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That's so very close to the truth.
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It's going to get even crazier, I'm afraid! This is what reading thrillers well into the night has made out of me!
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Yep, a better/worse name couldn't have matched his personality.
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Hudson is a good detective, I like to think. He has a cool head on his shoulders and doesn't act rashly. In this case, keeping his cool really served, and now he's on the inside, so to speak.
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You're evil and funny at the same time. Poor Jackie. Angel is a sociopath, not sure how cute, though, lol. And you're pinning quite the kinks on @Joie J., oh, gawd...
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Chapter Twenty-Four – How to Educate Your Dom The elevator was out of order, so he took the stairs, climbing them two at a time. The exercise did him good, the ache in his muscles once he reached his floor a good indication that there was a lot he needed to work out of his system. After seeing Angel on the screen of Watkins’s phone, his mind had become a nest of snakes. What was Angel’s role in all of this? As he had suspected – one of the versions of truth he had examined on his way to ‘th
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Too Far Away From Home
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Too Far Away From Home
I believe that I might give your heart plenty of reasons to beat faster... and not for the usual ones. Although I like to think and the budding romance between Otis and Hudson will balance the darkness. Your questions are valid. How much Watkins knows? Is he really on board with everything? That's something that will be elucidated later in the story. Hudson should listen to that advice. For real -
Too Far Away From Home
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Too Far Away From Home
Your comments on Keres's behavior are spot on. His soul is as black as the devil, and in synch with his physical appearance. He'll speak about it in his 'villain monologue', I promise! As for Otis... as usual, he's a darling. He's accommodating and gracious, and that really brings Hudson to his knees, without Otis even realizing. -
Too Far Away From Home
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Too Far Away From Home
I am a big fan of thrillers, so I like to think that I'm touching the genre's beats correctly! -
Too Far Away From Home
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Too Far Away From Home
I'm afraid some of the scenes in this story might give readers nightmares! I will use graphic depictions of bad things only when I feel they are warranted and not gratuitous, I promise! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Too Far Away From Home
Ha-ha, I love it how you and @Joie J. never miss the opportunity to spar... a battle for the ages and all in good fun. I won't comment too much on your comment since my fear of spoilers is great, but thank you for considering that I brought a credible antagonist to the scene. -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Too Far Away From Home
A thumbs-up is all my reply -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Too Far Away From Home
I had to laugh at Jackie's butt... well, not at his butt, but at the mention of it! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Too Far Away From Home
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Chapter Twenty-Three – Boiling Frog The screen burned his eyes. Hudson passed one hand over them and stifled a yawn. Sleep could wait; when there were such bad people at work, he couldn’t succumb to the temptation of lying down on his cramped sofa for a nap. The chances were he wouldn’t wake up until morning, and he hoped to get at least some information on what cave Gideon Keres had crawled out of. As expected, searching for the name only led to very few results, and the people who h
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Chapter Twenty-Two – Too Far Away From Home His life was split in two, Hudson mused as he stepped into the new club, if the former industrial building could truly be called that. Unlike the first time when he had visited the place with Jackie, some new furniture had been brought in, mainly long sofas and tables, which meant that the only comforts were reserved for those who would walk in there as clients. Otherwise, the grim look of the place had been kept and, for a second time, Hudson let
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I might surprise you in places! And I hope you'll tell me when that happens! Hudson and Otis are on the path of no return for sure. Axis: Bold as Love.
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If you know me a little... I think you'll guess my answer.
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Snake charmer, he-he... my mind went places, not gonna lie...
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Well, what I can tell you is that this series is a bit wild - in some parts - so expect some crazy scenes (I consider them crazy, maybe they're really mild for others, lol). But I won't spoil it for you Thank you for reading!
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You definitely should consider writing such scripts. And Dallas! Oh, boy, that brings back memories. Even in my very communist country, that show was a major hit. And the powers that be allowed the show to go only to that episode with the body in the pool if I still remember correctly. Then we waited for more than a decade to find out the truth, lol! To think that you have to change the regime just to know how a show actually continued! You really concocted quite the scenario, and now, knowing how my actual scenario goes, I feel ashamed! I should have made it wilder!
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Well said. Otis wasn't chosen by accident to be the main character in this story by yours truly. In the spirit of what I've learned of writing stories over the years, in fiction, nothing should be random, and everything must be used.
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