Krista
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Or, I just said blue lights, because that's simpler. And wait, it is geographically different? The lights... is this known universal shit? lol I have never once paid attention.
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So this one is the bad ending? The.. "death one.." huh.. I thought I wrote this one as the original ending and the "good ending," as the alternative one. Well then. Maybe I was just born mean.
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And here I'm thinking that 75% of that is likely true.
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lmao.. I did not see this comment.. but damn... predictable is a trending upwards word it seems.
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Have I become predictable? I'm going to have to switch this shit up...
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Well... glad you finally let your filthy hidden talent shine...
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Yeah, sex by the second paragraph is rather standard for Nifty.
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I do wish I knew what the hell you two are talking about. Julie seems like the main character in a story that's supposed to have gay butt stuff in it... I see I may have went amiss with something.
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The Canadian will be a lot gentler with his puck slapping stick than I ever would be. You do not want me doing the dirty work, I get creative.
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Nooo... lmao. I most certainly did not. I barely dated long enough to go to homecoming dances and my proms. I didn't do the sex thing and that was something I didn't compromise on. Guys knew that about me, so my dating was mostly with guys that knew they were in it for movie nights, school chaperoned dances, a one wine-cooler limit for me and an earlier night back home from parties, etc.
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Pop music, flip-phones, Myspace, movie rentals, and a chromed out pink Mitsubishi Eclipse... that was my teenage 2000s.
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Yeah, young me did not give a shit about messing anyone's fictional life right up. I think I tortured people in both of my first two stories.. I'm glad I can't remember most of my early writing. But, I honestly think it was a strong foundation to branch and build from, rough as they are. That's why they're still here. I had zero formal education on creative writing. Well I still don't, aside from one semester in College that focused 1/3 of the writing on creative writing. It is a different animal than what 98% of the rest of my writing had to be during my entire education.
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It sounds like I've really done Charlie in... I vaguely remember the ending to this story... bits and pieces are starting to come back to me. Which is scary, because I know... I know what I did.
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I am very attached to dogs. I couldn't write a dog death in my stories now it would break me. I absolutely without a doubt couldn't. So, if there's a dog in my story now, know that it is safe and sound and a good pupper.
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Sounds like my teenage brain didn't want to research such things. Makes you aware that I was a good girl in my youth and never crossed the lie that had blue lights in my rearview.
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I think you're seeing that I actually don't have a thing for wet butts. As I'm a lady. Also, Gina pops up a lot in my stories too.. I am predictable with my damn names. You're now over halfway through, you've soldiered on... for better or worse.
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Yeah, I'll take your word 100% as the honest truth, the alternative is to force @wildone to reread this story for me and call you a liar when you've lied to me. Could be a fun game. I think he's busy this weekend though, Canadian things probably.
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I did, I killed the dog. The rest I haven't a clue about. She was older though, right? I didn't out of the blue kill off a young dog, did I?
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I KNOW... I laughed, because you commented that the dog was next... and I glanced at the opening line of dialog and there she was... I can't even feel bad as you were warned.
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I do hope Barbie is a nickname and I didn't name a character Barbie, I'll never forgive myself. I think I remember Charlie being a walking punching bag, something I can't stand writing/reading now. Where the protagonist can't catch a break and life keeps dragging him down, punching/kicking while he's down, and he never catches a moment of peace. Is this their first kiss? Right after a funeral.. ouch.
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Carol, Charlie... well the C names are still prominent I see. And cringe on the Doctor leaving something of that nature on the answering machine, my goodness. Sorry if I do what you don't want done with the father figure... how many chapters are in this story, I'll have to look..
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I'd say any depiction of sexy stuff would be rather horrific coming from teenage me... I am scared to imagine such a thing.
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I just noticed that this story still suffers from the hidden formatting thing whenever stories were transitioned from Hosted Sites/the old version and onto Stories. I should probably rectify that and take away all that hidden formatting. I honestly don't know if I still have access to the original documents to these stories though, I'd have to look. I am notoriously bad about not backing up files to things... Derek is homeless? Derek is also the name to one of my main gays in real life... I wonder if he appreciated being named in a story of mine... I think Derek is also a name that is similar to Gavin, I've used it multiple times, I'm thinking.
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I thought this story was depressing? I must not be remembering it correctly...
