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Wow, I love everything about this. The atmosphere is so magical. So many things said and such an interesting story told in so few words.
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You'd like to know, wouldn't you... We shall see very soon. Thanks for the comments
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It was only nine in the morning, but Ash had been in the studio for hours. He woke up that morning before the crack of dawn, wanting to get in some practice on his electric guitar – a very generous gift from Cliff Sanders, the CEO of Pinnacle Records. A savvy but eccentric businessman, Sanders rose through the ranks in the record label from the position of assistant manager for sales and advertising to executive officer in just three short years. His ambition and fearlessness had rarely stee
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Thank you, glad to see you're up for some music drama! Oh did I? I don't remember when was the first time, maybe in Do You Remember? Anyway, yeah, I love some kpop bands like Apink, BTS and GOT7.
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Far above the noise of the bustling city below, the luxurious apartment on the top floor of the modern Ryder Tower building was peaceful and quiet. Early 2000s chill pop music could barely be heard coming from the speakers, while a beautiful Siamese cat slept curled up on the soft, peach-colored sofa. The cat’s owner sat beside it, gently stroking the animal’s back. “Are you really going to sleep all day, Cheops?” Samson Flynn asked. “You’re going to miss one hell of a party, you know.”
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Young singers Ash and Samson are already established in the music business. Ash is still in the closet, caught between his label’s demands and the desire to be with his lover Marcus. Meanwhile, Samson is a proudly out gay singer who strives to be taken more seriously. When Tyler, a rising star with a powerful voice, breaks out onto the scene, the competition becomes fiercer than ever. Even though he becomes an overnight success, he quickly learns the fame has its price. How will the three guys balance their personal lives with their music aspirations and growing demands from their record labels?
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Thanks, so nice to hear you liked it! I won't promise anything, but if the inspiration strikes, who knows...
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Thank you both for the comments, I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I do apologize for not putting out new chapters for a while - I put the story on hold while I decide whether to rewrite some parts of it before I continue writing new chapters. I do intend to finish it, but it may take some time.
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Phew, that's good to hear! Yeah, maybe I should've posted Chapter 1 as the Prologue, that way it would've been more separate from the rest of the story. Anyway, I'm glad it works this way too.
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I just wanted to thank you for reading and commenting! It's nice to see your thoughts as you go through the chapters, tho it's a bit scary as well - I'm not sure how the story feels when you binge-read it, since I wrote it with weeks/months between chapters. I hope you enjoy it!
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Hehe I am happy to hear my story made your quarantine a little more bearable. I think we've all been using fiction to escape reality for a while and forget about this pandemic and everything else going on. I see you mention Niall and Richie - while I love them, they were never meant to have more than just brief cameos, so I hope it wasn't too disappointing that they didn't appear more. And yeah, I wrote this story over a period of about one year (with some breaks here and there), so I'll definitely have to go through it again and hunt down those errors! (Plus, I'm not a native English speaker, so apologies if anything sounded weird.) As for a sequel, I'm not planning one because I feel the story is complete, but you never know. Thanks for the kind words and I hope to see you in future stories!
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Oof, thank you for those lovely words, they made my day! I enjoyed writing about Alex and Jeremy, so I'm glad to see you've had fun reading about them. Alex was definitely interesting and challenging to write since I've never really done a character like him before, so I'm glad he turned out well!
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Thank you for all the support, I'm glad you enjoyed the characters and their story!
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Thank you! Let me tell you, Jeremy has a lot of fans! As for the Brandon situation, Alex was feeling guilty and since he was turning over a new page, he didn't want anything from his past to drag him down. That's why he decided to give Brandon the benefit of the doubt, but I can understand why you feel differently. Brandon was definitely a controversial character. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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Weekends were always slow at the Appleton Bakery. With fewer people stopping by to get croissants, bagels or some other pastry for breakfast on their way to work, Jeremy had more time for other things. These usually included trying out new recipes, redecorating the bakery or tending to the flowers planted outside. More and more often, these activities included Alex as well. When not working at the car wash, the older guy was usually found at his boyfriend’s bakery, helping him out or just hangin
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Oh snap, I did not see that coming! 😮 That was such a tense scene! So Lucifer has failed him, now what? Is the curse gone or will Jake find a way to haunt Kyle from beyond?
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I have a feeling Jake could easily kill one of his bandmates if they annoy him too much. He probably wouldn't change his mind so easily like he does with Kyle.
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Oh wow so it actually is Jesse! I wanted to believe he was just a harmless friend with a crush, but nope. And yes, Kyle, do not go jumping off a freaking cliff, better go and see Marie! Jake is gonna be pissed after this...
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Wait, is Jake actually Jesse? 😮 I'm so intrigued now
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Oooh a Ouija board session! I love how Kyle compares Kim's theatrics to Marie's ordinary manner of speaking since she doesn't need to be theatrical. It seems to me that Jesse may have a crush on Kyle. And looks like Jake has moved from Belial to Lilith. He's been playing too much Diablo.
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Idk about Anton LaVey, but I do know about Zeena LaVey "satanist" from that pic of her that became a meme because of her resemblance to Taylor Swift. Anyways, everything about Jake is making me uncomfortable, so well done! A really intriguing character. Kyle better watch his back.
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I don't know why, but I love stories involving psychics. It's not that I believe in them, but the whole idea sounds intriguing. It would be fun to come across someone who's the real deal. Kim certainly thinks that Marie is. I like Kyle and can relate in some aspects. I can appreciate how he hasn't resorted to drugs, violence or alcohol despite all the bad luck and depression. And the detail about Kim's miscarriage was very sad, poor girl. I am really enjoying the story so far!
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Omg I accidentally read this chapter first. Oh well, I better go back to the beginning. Still, a great first impression, I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
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Realistically Ever After
ObicanDecko commented on Richie Tennyson's story chapter in Realistically Ever After
Aww what will I read now? Sad to see the story end, but I loved every word of it. The ending was perfect - and by that I mean realistic! One thing tho - I still don't get why Patricia and Bjorn messed with Cinderella in the first place? Was Bjorn's motivation that was revealed in an earlier chapter actually true, and Patricia was helping him because she liked him (enough to risk her company's business for him)? -
Whatever Your Heart Desires
ObicanDecko commented on Richie Tennyson's story chapter in Whatever Your Heart Desires
... And that is how the French invented motorboats. The end. That was a hell of a journey! Curious to see what happens next!
