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  1. ObicanDecko

    Roadmap

    Thank you for all the love. I think we could all learn from responses like yours. I look forward to sharing the next chapter with all of you. ❤️
  2. ObicanDecko

    Roadmap

    Thank you! You're completely right - without knowing it, Jeremy is inspiring Alex to do better. Unfortunately, we see that Jeremy's life isn't perfect either, so we'll see how that goes. And yeah, Nat needs to find a straight guy to lust over. Thanks for the comment!
  3. ObicanDecko

    Roadmap

    I'm sorry you seemed to have completely missed the point of this chapter. I suggest reading other people's comments here to see why this was an important chapter to include. As for its length, it is on par with the other chapters in this story.
  4. ObicanDecko

    Roadmap

    Ooh Apple knows what they're doing. That's how they get all those kids to spend their parents' money on video games.
  5. ObicanDecko

    Roadmap

    Yup, Alex is slowly trying to make amends with others and get his life in order. Thanks for the comments!
  6. ObicanDecko

    Roadmap

    It was a little past five when Alex and his dad arrived home from work. Alex went straight upstairs, where he took his dirty work uniform to the bathroom and threw it into the laundry basket. “Hey sweetie,” his mom greeted him as she passed by on her way to the kitchen. “Do you need that for tomorrow?” “Hey! No, I’m good, I’ll wear my spare one,” Alex told her. He was just glad to finally be back home and take off his shoes so his feet can breathe. The day was long and exhausting, and he
  7. ObicanDecko

    Chapter 8

    This is going to be a difficult assignment for Logan's team. I wonder if any of the 13 people working in the castle could be the perpetrator...
  8. ObicanDecko

    Chapter 16

    I hope it's not like Doctor Who, where they all speak their own language and the Tardis translates it to English, but their mouths inexplicably move as if they were speaking English.
  9. ObicanDecko

    Chapter 16

    Loved it! Louie speaking English is everything I needed!
  10. ObicanDecko

    Going places

    That was a lovely trip for Geoff and Tony, and the talk of a potential wedding in the future was a nice touch! Wes is an idiot and Stuart needs some kind of therapy. Or at least one good backhand across the jaw from 'the Hulk' .
  11. ObicanDecko

    Pretty Poison

    Wow that was intense! You could feel the tension in the room and Salem's vulnerability at that moment. I feel for the poor guy, I hope his dad is taking him to a psychologist or something. Looking forward to more!!
  12. ObicanDecko

    Chapter 7

    Does Leon know about his grandma's suspicions regarding Prince Isaak? It doesn't seem like it. I don't know what to make of GIa's visit. Is she plotting against Leon or trying to keep him out of trouble?
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    Bruno

    Yeah, the grandparents left a mixed first impression, so we'll see how things go on that front. As for going back to the city, I'm not sure yet. Who knows what they'll decide in the future. Thanks for all the reacts and comments!
  14. Thank you! Tell that to him! Thank you! This chapter was something I had in mind almost since the beginning of the story, so I couldn't wait to finally write it (along with ch. 14)! I'm glad it turned out good!
  15. ObicanDecko

    Heads Up

    Ahh I love the dynamics between Seth and Chip. They're both tough cookies to crack but the attraction is there and they know it! So is Glenn's daddy participating in the tournament as well or are they just there to have fun?
  16. “Bio-alchemy: Once forbidden and outlawed, this discipline entails experimenting with human blood with the end goal of turning an ordinary human into a shifter. It was Count Divinus from the western Kingdom of Amaret who drew attention to this occult practice, causing it to become banned throughout all of Escaria. In his underground laboratories deep beneath his castle, Divinus experimented on many of his subjects, injecting them with various substances in an attempt to turn them into shifte
  17. ObicanDecko

    Skin Deep

    Ok I liked this chapter a lot! You know I have a soft spot for Charlie and this chapter revealed a lot about him. His pillow is not only a comfort thing, but also a convenient tool for hiding stolen cookies. So he's actually a lot smarter than it seemed. And it's so nice to see that Tyson cares about him, even though he only approached him because Vlady wasn't there to keep him company. Maybe after this they'll have more regular 'tutoring' sessions. Edith's absence seems ominous, she must be on to something.
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    Kiss

    I agree, Charlie ain't got it half bad!
  19. I just decided to check out this story and so far I'm liking it a lot! The character of Salem is super intriguing and your writing is excellent! Looking forward to more!
  20. ObicanDecko

    Rain

    Heh, that was definitely a big silver lining! Thanks for checking out the story and all the comments!
  21. ObicanDecko

    Chapter 6

    Poor Leon, losing his parents, being forced to give up Logan and burdened with all kinds of royal duties. I wonder why the Queen doesn't do anything about Prince Isaak since she already has witnesses about him killing his first wife? Also, what did Petr mean when he told Logan he'd have to join their club? Are the five of Leon's friends hiding something? P. S. Somehow, I didn't get a notification for this chapter.
  22. ObicanDecko

    Chapter 5

    Sadly, Petr has a point and Logan knows it. I wonder if Leon's family even knows he is gay. Regardless, they probably expect him to marry a woman and continue the royal line. Still, it was a beautiful ending to the chapter!
  23. ObicanDecko

    Bruno

    It's definitely a cloud, but we'll see just how big. Thank you for the kind words! We'll have to wait and see.
  24. ObicanDecko

    Chapter 4

    Sweet, so they finally decided to take the plunge! However, we know this is only the start, as real troubles await then when they return - especially if Leon's parents somehow learn of the boys' change of route. And I love your style of writing in this story, very smooth.
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    Kiss

    Haha yeah, Tom is definitely inexperienced when it comes to relationships so he doesn't have a good sense of how things should progress. He is also afraid of disappointing Charlie in bed even tho he won't admit it. Thank you for the comment!
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