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I am LIVING for this story! Firstly, Dorothy's wedding scene was so good, it revealed so much about her character. Such irony that a person like her is in charge of making sure fairytales get their happy endings. The twist with Bjorn and Blanche was just the cherry on top! I definitely didn't see it coming.

Don't mind me, just rereading 🤩

I'm not sure if I'm supposed to sympathise with Dorothy, but I don't. Burnham's not an angel either, but he can definitely do better than her. I wonder what happens when Cinderella ends? Do they start the whole thing all over again - with only Bjorn and Ryan retaining their memories?

Could Dorothy be any more clueless? Has she never met any gay people? Probably not because the fairytales don't contain any. (at least until now) 😛

I agree. I personally had no problems understanding the chapter. I really enjoy these snapshots from the characters' past, they are well woven into the story, and I'm really curious to find out who Bjorn's accomplice is!

If kids were to actually read this story, it would ruin ordinary fairytales for them for good! Bjorn is going to cause Dorothy to have an aneurism!

Well that took an unexpected turn! I'm not even going to try and predict what will happen next because I have no clue!

Come through, Dave! Let's see what he can do - if anything. The kids reading Cinderella better be ready for some LGBT content. 😛

Ooh the plot thickens! I am really liking all of the characters and the way the story jumps between the present and the past, never a dull moment! I wonder who the Dragon is?

"What a bad time not to be a cross-dresser." XD This book is giving me life. I am really curious to see where all of this is going!

Love it! Just when I was starting to root for Ryan and Dave - BAM! No first kiss for them. Now that I think about it, Cinderella doesn't have a lot of male characters. Ryan is out of luck again. I do wonder where Prince Charming disappeared and whether we'll see him at all?

I'm enjoying this a lot, you have a very interesting writing style! Can't wait to see where this goes.

Omg this took me out! I'm enjoying the story already! On to read the rest of the chapter! Edit: Yeah, I love it. The coming out scene was so unique, unlike any other I've ever read. And Ryan and Doug seem to have a great dynamic. Looking forward to reading more!

Thank you for reading & commenting! I'm glad you liked it! Aww thank you, I knew you'd enjoy reading about your Jeremy!

Thank you, it's good to be back! Thanks for the comment! Yes, after everything they've been through, it's about time these guys catch a break. I am glad to hear that I didn't fumble the session segment, since I don't have any experience in it. Oof sugar and internet are my two addictions, but hopefully I can keep them in check! Haha Carly is indeed overdue for a makeover! Maybe I was too harsh on her. 😮 Jeremy is very kind by nature, and he wants to see his bf get better. Alex needed quite some time to see the light, but he is now fully committed to changing. Thanks!

Thank you, I missed you too! And yes, Alex is finally turning his life around!

The silence in the living room of the Hartley home was deafening, tension thick enough to be cut with a knife. Carefully choosing his words, Alex had just recounted his recent conversation with Jeremy to his parents, telling them that he had decided to go and see a counsellor for gambling addiction. Rendered speechless for a moment, the middle-aged couple briefly glanced at each other before looking back at their son. Alex eyed them nervously, awaiting their reaction. He regretted not asking

As much as I like him, Seth is very cocky and I would enjoy seeing someone bring him down a notch! Bring on the next stage of the tournament pronto!

Omg thanks for this, it was such a welcome surprise! I didn't realize how much I missed these boys until now! I loved the mystery part, and the friendship between the guys is so sweet. Even our favorite loveable jerk Tyson is there! <3 Thank you frend!

Woooo loved it! I swear every chapter is better than the last! On-screen, I love that Michelle managed to come up with a plan to salvage the situation and keep Ez and Jack in the game. No reason for Jack to suffer because of his partner's injury. And Sean IS a great wrestler and he definitely deserved his moment of glory! I loved how the chapter ended with him winning the belt! Off-screen, I feel bad for Ez and Lance, they're both in such terrible places now! Hopefully this experience will make them stronger. Jack is an amazing friend/big brother to Ez, we love him! And Sean is being a vindictive little bitch whenever he's not wrestling or feeding his animals. Just when I think he can be a good boi, he fucks it up! Ugh, he's making it so hard to love him All in all, a great rollercoaster of a chapter, I loved every moment of it! ❤️

Ohhhh that ending! How did that happen?! Write the next chapter right now! Poor Ezzy, he should take Lance's advice and not read media reviews. They will not be good for his mental health and self-esteem, especially at such an early stage in his career! I was also wondering what happened with Beau, so I'm glad we got some information on him. LOVED the chapter, please sir can I have some more? edit: OMG and that scene where Ezra asks Lance out! It was so cute! It could've been really awkward for both of them, but somehow it wasn't - Lance acted really considerately. And of course clueless and naive Ez has no idea that Lance is talking about Diego.

If I were Seth, I'd be pissed too. Then again, they both like to play games so maybe they've actually met their match. I'm keen to see what happens at the tournament - is Chip bluffing or not? I think he could be a big distraction for Seth.

Wooo happy birthday Ezra! I enjoyed this chapter so much! The first segment was so lovely, I was transported to that river with Sean and Ez. It was beautiful how they connected and talked about their histories. And the birthday party - I did not expect that at all! It was so wholesome and cute to the max! (I wanna do laser tag too.) I love this line! Thank you for this amazing chapter!

We'll see more of Brandon for sure. And yeah, Alex thinks Brandon is bad news, but we've seen Alex is wrong a lot of the times.

It took a big scare for Zara to realize her son being gay might not be that important, since she could lose him at any moment. As we've seen, Jeremy has spent years being afraid to come out, so to finally do it and have his fears come through was horrible for him. Now he wants to make sure he doesn't get hurt again. And yes, Alex seemed to have needed an extra push, and both Liz and Jeremy provided it. Thank you for your insight!