I really like this one.
However... my brain immediately wanted to change it to;
Where the mind goes, the body will follow. . So keep your thoughts away from the cookies.
Still good advice I guess.
Congratulations Grand Master Scribe!
I'm trying to knock out as much as I can and still cover what I wanted to. Unfortunately my brain decides to complicate things at the worst possible time. Which will probably translate to not tying up as many loose ends as I wanted.
So if you could all do me a favor and list ONE loose end you think needs attending to in this story I'll see what I can do.
Aaaaaaannnddd this is why I love your comments! Thanks for the clarification. I was in a hurry and didn't really have time to do the mire thorough research I usually do when I want a character to have a name with a meaning. Figures my beta would throw me under the bus.
Don't forget, she's young. She may not have good control or she may have been afraid for some reason. If she was indeed being tortured like Trevor led Cassiel and Kage to believe, she might have been traumatized. Lot's of possibilities.
About Saturday.....
I'm not done with the rewrite yet and we're in storm prep mode again. Hopefully it'll amount to nothing but some rain and breezy conditions. So far it looks like we'll avoid the flooding. I also have a shit ton of stuff going on at work. Worse case scenario, I think I can have it ready by Sunday, Monday at the latest. 🤞
I never know when Lucifer is going to visit the part of my brain that controls literary inspiration. He's usually busy wreaking havoc in the rest of my head.