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  1. kbois

    Chapter 38

    While it's a good thought.... Huntington doesn't need to track Kaya. He knows exactly where Sebastian’s pack lives. He just wanted to prove he could strike where it mattered.
  2. kbois

    Chapter 38

    The next couple of chapters have to have a lot going on. They're the last 2.
  3. kbois

    Chapter 38

    Huntington wasn't in the gray car. Just his minion or minions. He thinks he's above getting his hands dirty. This ride is almost over. But I have a feeling most of you will hop off and then run to get in line again!
  4. kbois

    Chapter 56

    Will is 17. Will is 17. Will is 17. Maybe if I keep reminding myself I'll realize that Will is only 17. At that age no one has the emotional maturity to properly handle everything Will has been through in the past two and a half years of his life. JP and Stef are his people. They are the the ones he can count on when he really needs it. I don't think any relationship at his age will last. It's rare under normal circumstances. Impossible in the world Will lives in. That being said, once he gets past this fiasco with Zach I think he'll be able to look back and remember the good times they had. You never really forget your first love. It will take years before Zach comes close to the maturity level he needs to be at to be in any sort of relationship. 15-20 years down the road they might be able to reconnect on some level, even if it's just as friends, provided Zach grows up, comes out of the closet and learns from his mistakes. Great chapter.
  5. kbois

    Chapter 38

    Just realized that I never responded. My biggest take from your comment is pointing out my biggest mistake of this entire series: Mama not greeting Austin and Ashton with food. Dammit!
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    Chapter 38

  7. kbois

    Chapter 38

    Huntington is most likely up to no good. Some of my brothers still act like Ashton and Austin. I'll see what I can do to get you tickets to the big event when it happens. Lol
  8. You might just need to clear your attachments. Go to <profile> then <attachments> then delete any old ones. That should clear up enough space.
  9. kbois

    Chapter 38

    I think you're the closest to being spot-on-dead-right.
  10. Been there. Done that. You have to make sure your editor is cleared. Otherwise it's double post city. Lol
  11. You're not wrong. If you were parked in the boonies of the parking lot then shame on him. I still would've called the police, gotten a report and then taken the truck to get it checked. When I was 16 and had had my permit for 10 days I got rear-ended. The guy took off. Cocky 16 year old me took off after him. (Mom and my BFF were in the car with me). Long story short, the guy stopped, mom goes to find a pay phone (1984 peeps) the guy threatens to take off, I tell him I'd like to see him try. (BFF is mortified, horrified and terrified). Police (and Dad) show up. Guy was drunk, had a warrant and we had $1500 worth of undercarriage damage) His insurance had to cover the damage. Some people are just idiots.
  12. kbois

    Chapter 38

    Hardly... she's like 14 or 15 years younger than me. Lucky bitch.
  13. kbois

    Chapter 38

    Four pages and we haven't even hot 100 comments yet....hmmm.... you guys are slacking. Va-jay-jays, Jay? Moobs aside, I think you might be milking this estrogen angle.
  14. kbois

    Chapter 38

    What happens Monday?
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    Chapter 38

    See response to travlbug Double
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    Chapter 38

    Kaya, you said there was a truck. Can you remember anything about it?” Sebastian asked. “It was big, like the ones on the highway. The ones we go like this to.” Kaya pumped her little arm up and down, mimicking the gesture kids across the country used when passing a big rig, trying to entice the driver to blow his horn. “One more question, Sweetie. Can you tell us why you asked if we could change into wolves?” “The lion man told me you could be a wolfie.” Elijah pulled up a picture of Kasar Huntington on his phone. “Was this him?” Kaya nodded. Huntington was in the truck. The striker was in the car.
  17. kbois

    Chapter 38

    Sometimes subtle is the way to go. Just my way of checking to see who's paying attention. 🤭
  18. kbois

    Chapter 38

    My inner mom comes out at weird times.
  19. kbois

    Chapter 38

    Huntington didn't need to flush out Sebastian. It's not a secret that he's in Montana. He got to Kaya because he could. The gray sedan was the bad guys car.... they were sooooo close to nabbing him! The entire Montana pack is already on high alert and will remain so for the foreseeable future.
  20. kbois

    Chapter 38

    Or I could be really evil and delay the showdown until the next story......
  21. kbois

    Chapter 38

    He must be a cat person.
  22. kbois

    Chapter 38

    Why are you making my life complicated????? Never did I say Huntington was the one who took Kaya. This is what was said; Besides tall, brown hair, poopy brown eyes, not fat, and smelled like onions, the six-year-old hadn’t added any additional details. It could’ve been anyone. Most likely, he was one of Huntington’s strikers. Another reader pointed out to me in a pm that Huntington's description was blond with tawny eyes and a feral look. It's in the little details. 😁
  23. kbois

    Chapter 38

    I vote two angry moms. This.
  24. kbois

    Chapter 38

    Drama surrounding the big reveal?
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