kbois
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Yes, Kage was very much aware of the brevity of his life. I'm glad he was able to live it to it's fullest during the short time they had together and that he found love. He needed it.
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I have been steeling myself for months in preparation for the comments on this chapter. Believe me, I've been getting the cold shoulder from @Mrsgnomie since April, I think. @astone2292called me a "monster". @Danilo Syrtis, well, I could feel his sadness across an entire ocean. Kage's dying was far from cold-hearted, even though it may seem that way. My heart stuttered when I wrote the chapter. The Boss is going to make an appearance very soon. So won't Sebastian’s squad.
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The geek is back, geekier than ever.
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I knew this chapter was going to strike a chord. I also think this chapter may cause me to break my no alcohol for a while vow. 🤔
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I'm glad you used the phrase "what if?" That is exactly what I want my readers to be wondering. In my opinion, every good story should make the readers question 'what if'.
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You know me so well. 😘
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You know the saying; You snooze, you lose.
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Elijah is in shock. His reactions are just that... his way of dealing with things. When I wrote the dark to light scene, I could absolutely picture it clearly in my head. I didn't want Kage's death to be all darkness. Elijah always maintained there was goodness within Kage. He was so right. Elijah can't shadow shift, but it wouldn't make a difference anyway. He's committed to seeing things through to the bitter end. He now had too much invested.
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His death, when it comes, shouldn't be a surprise to anyone.
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Kage's death broke my heart. He left behind something for Elijah to take strength from, plain and simple. He's going to need it. I don't see my writing as exceptional so thank you for the compliment.
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The Boss just might be turning up in some way in the not too distant future.
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Elijah really isn't thinking logically ar this point. His compass is missing its North Pole. Adumbration... kbois loves her thesaurus!😉😆
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The possibilities are endless.
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There's a few of the Krew who are running down the street trying to catch up to the bus. 🤣🤣
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Your mind is as warped as mine! 😘
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I guess I should work on it this weekend huh?
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I do have a habit of sending my main characters the long way around to happily ever after, don't I?
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Keep the theories coming.... you never know when one hits paydirt.
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I've learned to take seemingly negative comments with a grain of salt. After all tone of voice can't be conveyed through written words unless specifically indicated. It's why I call @Mrsgnomie a bitch, and not a bitch. She knows the difference. 😉 I agree with you when you say shifterslover passionate reaction shows how invested in the story they are. It's a huge compliment to any writer and should be taken as such. I've said it many times before, I write for the pure enjoyment of it. I want my readers to be angry, to laugh, to be dumbstruck. Even shed more than a few tears. If I can't make them run through a gamut of emotions, I may as well stop writing.
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Stick with it. Elijah will get his happily ever after. He's gotta walk over some hot coals first.
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Where's @drpaladin? He's waaayyyy late to the party? @raven1 is either asleep or has cache issues.
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I think you're right. I have a 20 yr old who is the same way. He has insurance but doesn't think he needs meds. He's too old for me to slip them into his food. Damn.
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It took forever for my phone to learn 'Kage'. Mine tried to make him 'kale'. Auto correct sucks.
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