kbois
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I have been steeling myself for months in preparation for the comments on this chapter. Believe me, I've been getting the cold shoulder from @Mrsgnomie since April, I think. @astone2292called me a "monster". @Danilo Syrtis, well, I could feel his sadness across an entire ocean. Kage's dying was far from cold-hearted, even though it may seem that way. My heart stuttered when I wrote the chapter. The Boss is going to make an appearance very soon. So won't Sebastian’s squad.
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The geek is back, geekier than ever.
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I knew this chapter was going to strike a chord. I also think this chapter may cause me to break my no alcohol for a while vow. 🤔
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I'm glad you used the phrase "what if?" That is exactly what I want my readers to be wondering. In my opinion, every good story should make the readers question 'what if'.
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You know me so well. 😘
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You know the saying; You snooze, you lose.
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Elijah is in shock. His reactions are just that... his way of dealing with things. When I wrote the dark to light scene, I could absolutely picture it clearly in my head. I didn't want Kage's death to be all darkness. Elijah always maintained there was goodness within Kage. He was so right. Elijah can't shadow shift, but it wouldn't make a difference anyway. He's committed to seeing things through to the bitter end. He now had too much invested.
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His death, when it comes, shouldn't be a surprise to anyone.
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Kage's death broke my heart. He left behind something for Elijah to take strength from, plain and simple. He's going to need it. I don't see my writing as exceptional so thank you for the compliment.
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The Boss just might be turning up in some way in the not too distant future.
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Elijah really isn't thinking logically ar this point. His compass is missing its North Pole. Adumbration... kbois loves her thesaurus!😉😆
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The possibilities are endless.
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There's a few of the Krew who are running down the street trying to catch up to the bus. 🤣🤣
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Your mind is as warped as mine! 😘
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I guess I should work on it this weekend huh?
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I do have a habit of sending my main characters the long way around to happily ever after, don't I?
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Keep the theories coming.... you never know when one hits paydirt.
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I've learned to take seemingly negative comments with a grain of salt. After all tone of voice can't be conveyed through written words unless specifically indicated. It's why I call @Mrsgnomie a bitch, and not a bitch. She knows the difference. 😉 I agree with you when you say shifterslover passionate reaction shows how invested in the story they are. It's a huge compliment to any writer and should be taken as such. I've said it many times before, I write for the pure enjoyment of it. I want my readers to be angry, to laugh, to be dumbstruck. Even shed more than a few tears. If I can't make them run through a gamut of emotions, I may as well stop writing.
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Stick with it. Elijah will get his happily ever after. He's gotta walk over some hot coals first.
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Where's @drpaladin? He's waaayyyy late to the party? @raven1 is either asleep or has cache issues.
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I think you're right. I have a 20 yr old who is the same way. He has insurance but doesn't think he needs meds. He's too old for me to slip them into his food. Damn.
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It took forever for my phone to learn 'Kage'. Mine tried to make him 'kale'. Auto correct sucks.
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Or something like that.
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It's just not going to happen. 😪
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