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    Chapter 4

    I was doing it as you were posting this. I got interrupted though. I'm mom-sitting for the weekend and she got up right after I started. Coffee might be able to wait, but she can't.
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    Chapter 5

    Elijah sat unmoving, staring straight ahead as the service coordinator spoke glowingly about his parents. Tyler sat next to him, their fingers entwined, anchoring him. Soft cries and louder sobs were like white noise in the background, occasionally broken by the sound of someone blowing their nose. The overwhelming scent of dozens of floral arrangements might have contributed to some of the sniffling. The urge to sneeze became too much, so he tucked his nose into the crook of his arm as he let o
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    Chapter 4

    Your "late tonight" is my "late afternoon", plenty of time to join the comment party!
  4. 🤣🤣🤣 She'd just use it to answer the phone!
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    Chapter 4

    He probably got tired out trying to sing along.
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    Chapter 6

    How did you guess I've taught him a thing or two? 🤣🤣
  7. I think the first three are completely subjective and not always something we have control over, whereas kindness, giving and respect are acts which can be carried out. Whatever the case may be, it's food for thought. Thanks for sharing tim 🙂 Happy Canada Day!
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    Chapter 6

    Looks like Twists and Turns has taken the lead, Intrigue less than a length away. Unanswered Questions has fallen back and Drama is coming on strong! Great chapter Tim!
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    Chapter 4

    I'm taking care of my mom this weekend so no alcohol induced bonus chapters on the horizon. Editing is on the agenda. Plus I've got to get cracking on @Mrsgnomie's boyfriend's story. She's getting pushy cuz she's jonesing for her Caleb fix.
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    Chapter 4

    Elijah has a lot of mixed emotions when it comes to Kage (and vice versa) Things will eventually sort themselves out (but not necessarily how everyone thinks!)
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    Chapter 2

    And it's just the beginning!
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    Chapter 4

    He won't rat us out.
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    Chapter 4

    This will be us tryin' ta hide the bodies.
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    Chapter 4

    You got that right!
  15. kbois

    Chapter 4

    Stop poking holes in the theory!!
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    Chapter 4

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    Chapter 4

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    Chapter 4

    Have you been collaborating with @chris191070?
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    Chapter 4

    Chris ... you OWN the corner!
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    Chapter 4

    The beginning of a story is always the easiest part for me to write because I have a pretty clear idea of how the first 10 or so chapters should go. Building up the plot and creating scenarios and making the readers think is fun. Coming up with red herrings and blind alleys and throwing in a cliffie or two makes writing enjoyable. The theories are always interesting. Some are way off base, some are close, and occasionally a few hit the mark. You'll just have to wait and see how this whole search for the laptop pans out. Great observations Anton!
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    Chapter 4

    And no longer live......
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    Chapter 4

    Hopefully they find it soon (?)
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    Chapter 4

    The next installment has been through editing and beta-ing and just needs a final once over, during which I always find something to tweak. Saturday is only 2 days away.
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    Chapter 4

    That is freaking hysterical!
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    Chapter 4

    My favorite part of commenting!
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