kbois
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Hmmmm, interesting theory.
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I always though Pennsylvania Ave in Washington DC was pretty sketch.
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Don't know how I missed this earlier. I'll blame @Mrsgnomie for distracting me with IMs. Lots of good points you brought up. Next couple of chapters will answer a few of the questions.
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It remains to be seen how well the cover up worked.
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Butt stink pills crack me up too! I still see the look on Brad's face when Sandi reamed him out..lol. "Grimalkin" was one of those fun finds. You have a good weekend too!
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Two chapters are on my inbox. You'll have them soon. I've come to think of Ralph Loren as Loe's alter ego.
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Evil can most certainly be wrapped up in a beautiful exterior as evidenced by Huntington. I don't think he's capable of turning off his predatory instincts. San Francisco is going to be nail biting for our boys. 'Nuff said.
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Well, I don't believe in God. Nor do I believe in being perfect, but neither do I like mistakes or incorrect spellings. It's a writer's due diligence to make sure their work is as close to perfect as it can be at least from a grammatical point of view. Content wise, it's all subjective. We all have our quirks... one of mine is wanting to post when I think the chapter is ready. It's savvy readers like yourself that makes me strive to be a better writer.
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You're not going to convince me to schedule it. 🤣🤣
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Nope... chapter was written on a laptop. Edited on a laptop. Edited and beta-ed on laptops (pretty sure), re-edited on a laptop and given two final read throughs on a laptop. This is why I don't schedule postings! I always find something as I do my final scan of each chapter. Even then things get missed. Oh well.
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Nervousness might be warranted. But you'll have to wait until Wed.
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I did take a little artistic license as I've never been there. They aren't there to sightsee anyway.
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I'm sure the boss has schematics and employee info on the office. Let's just get there. Lol.
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Dammit! Two editors and a beta and everyone missed it..... fixing now!
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Kage isn't going to waltz in during the day. It's established that Huntington stays late most nights alone. Sure the building has security, but realistically they aren't probably not stationed outside his office. He has controlled access for regular people and only those with the right fingerprints and optics can get beyond the first reception area. A shadow can enter stealthily by a variety of access points. Should be an interesting next chapter.
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Thanks. The San Francisco chapters were hard to write for a variety of reasons. I've never been there so I had to do a lot of Googling. Trying to create the right mix of tension and anxiety while balancing these two coming to grips with how much they mean to each other was like trying to write while doing flips on a balance beam. I'm happy with how it panned out. Fingers crossed for the next couple of chapters.
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Your concerns about the demo will be addressed. As far as how much time they have together
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Don't let her fool you. She's one of THOSE morning people. Remember this from last chapter comments? : She's the white one.
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I hope you're right this time.
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You know I'm not commenting on what will happen. As for the sex, I'll make an exception.. of course Elijah and/or Kage is gonna get some! Now... back to your corner.
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My Korner Krew never lets me down.
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