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For what it's worth..... you're not far off base. Loe might be pulling the cart, but Jay is holding the reins🤣

That we do!

Seeing how you went there.... Disclaimer: Initial draft of this chapter had the wording as such; Average compared to what? A horse?” Brilliant editor that I am, I suggested 'Clydesdale'. Somewhat less brilliant author accepted suggestion.. So she would be wise to turn tail and run, not back away slowly. 🤣🤣🤣🤣

He leans in and kisses me. Soft and sweet. Unhurried. The best, purest first kiss you could ask for. 'BOUT DAMN TIME!!!🤣 Average compared to what? A Clydesdale?” Why do I love this line so much?? I so laughed out loud during editing 🤣 😂 🤣😆 Absolutely am thrilled they're finally moving things along. You go Jay!! (He's still totally in control of Loe's puppet strings)

Thanks @chris191070 for reviewing and recommending this story! It's the start of a new genre for me and I'm happy how it turned out.

At the gym this morning I hit a playlist I haven't listened to in a while. The first song? Cher- If I Could Turn Back Time 🤦‍♀️🤣 I don't usually mind the time change thing but I'm not liking losing an hour of my only day off. 😒 Have a good day and stay warm!

You're welcome! The next installment is coming along really well. I'm looking forward to how it turns out. Thanks for reading!

We have a new mid-month report at work. It's 24 pages. With the other documentation I have to add, this month's ended up being 46 pages with only one move in the past two weeks since the end of month report. They're trying to either kill us managers or all of the trees in North America. My new manager and the owner were here for two short days. My to-do list has grown to about 3 miles long. No wonder my blood pressure was sky high the past couple of days. I need to take a step back and chill. If I can find 5 minutes to do so. Hope everyone has a good day and a good weekend.

My first instinct would be to get a restraining order. Can we say stalker? I🤣🤣

Gah! I've been so busy at work today, I'm behind the 8 ball with this chapter!. Loren is so damn stubborn, he either needs a smack upside the back of the head or a spanking and pretty sure he wouldn't view the spanking as a reprimand. Jay.... sink your teeth in and hang on like a pit bull on a raw porterhouse! 🤣🤣

Everyone's favorite Schoolhouse Rock part of speech! 🎼🎵Conjunction Junction what's your function?🎶 🎼🎵Hooking up words and phrases ans clauses!🎶 That train conductor was badass😆 Another great part of speech, thanks Myr!

That is fan-freaking-tastic! So happy for you!

For the same reason call centers are located outside of the US. $$$

Comments are what I look forward to the most with my stories, especially from those two. Most authors who really engage their readers absolutely love the feedback.

Apple doesn't fall far from the tree with that one🤭

My husband sent me a text today as we were two ships passing in the night this morning. Last night I did cauliflower in the air fryer. Well, as you all know, that stuff stinks when it's cooked. Apparently the scent was still lingering when my husband and son came in from work. Upon entering the house my son turned to my husband and said: "What the hell did Mom do? Assassinate the entire cast of Veggie Tales in the air fryer?" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Sorry @Wayne Gray you can't have this one. I'm so using it in my story!

Smartest readers out there!

This photo has been making the rounds on social media in the Tampa area. A beautiful picture for sure. https://photos.app.goo.gl/FPTMm6L8Tph1wGyh6 How did it get to be Monday already? It was Friday two hours ago! Have a good week everyone!

I'm happy you disagree with me. My husband does it all the time too. 🤣 I guess as a newer author I can see both points. Somermtimes it's too complicated and mind numbing to try to leave a review while sorting out all the nuances of a particular writer. Are they new to writing? Do they respond to story comments without taking offense? Do they fix things that need to be fixed as far as technical things go? Everyone reacts differently to criticism. I, for one don't see the point of getting upset at it. 99% of the time readers use it constructively. For those who are being just plain mean or petty... screw 'em. Everyone is entitled to their opinion and unless the critiquer is violating the policies GA has established then the author can either love it or list it as they say on TV.

Oh Loe. Loe, Loe, Loe. You have no idea who you're up against. So blinded by bachelorhood you can't see a challenge to a duel if it smacked you upside the head. Jay? Nice bet you've put down. Now we wait to see if the gamble pays off and how long it takes before Loe throws down his own gauntlet.

I agree that a story can be less than stellar due to technical issues like grammar and spelling. However, those are most often found in stories by new authors and are able to be corrected with proper editing, which should be done via pm. I've had issues pointed out to me on every single one of my stories, both in the comments and via pm. I make sure the issue is addressed and always thank the reader for pointing it out. It helps me grow as an author. In those cases it should certainly be mentioned in the review. It's up to the author to decide if he/she/they will heed the advice. This has proven to be a great topic and the variety of opinions just goes to show the awesome diversity of the GA audience.

Mrs. G. makes some good points which I agree with. When it comes to reviews, especially on a site as unique as GA, I think most reviewers tend to lean toward the 5 stars for the sole reason of personal preference and they truly enjoyed the story. This site exists to promote all levels of writing. From the fledgling author to someone on the same level as Stephen King or Danielle Steele. Honestly, if a reader is inclined to leave less than 4 stars, they should perhaps consider PM-ing the author first and giving them some honest feedback on a less public format. At least give the author a chance to address any concerns in a less public manor. Especially if it is a new author who would benefit more from some constructive criticism rather than being torn apart over lack of writing skills, plot issues or whatever. If the answers are unsatisfactory or unanswered, then by all means leave a less than 4 star review. You have to keep in mind that the majority of authors post on this site for a variety of reasons and most are in it because it's something they enjoy doing, not because it's a career choice. Even though we think our stories might belong on the New York Times bestseller list, the reality is, writing and posting on GA is an outlet which we utilize for many reasons, but first and foremost to most authors, is to bring a little reading pleasure to the GA audience. Do I wish all of my stories get all 5 star reviews? Of course! Is it reality that they will appeal to everyone on that level? Of course not. But to leave less than 5 stars without validation does a disservice to both the author and the reader. It's not a true gauge for other readers if you leave 3 stars but say that you really enjoyed the story. If you thoroughly enjoy a story, but feel there are issues with pacing or characters by all means say so in your review. Just give it a fair star rating that reflects your enjoyment of the story rather than technical issues.

I've been okay, but not okay. Trying to come to grips with some news that eventually will be life-altering by trying to do normal things to take my mind off of it while some part of my brain tries to process it. My husband was diagnosed with macula degeneration. While not life threatening, eventually his sight will deteriorate to the point where his life will be drastically changed. Hopefully not for a while. It's only been a little over a year since his last exam so they caught it early. He has to test his vision every day and has added some recommended supplements and dietary changes to Hopefully stave off the progression for as long as possible. Who knows? Maybe in ten years there will be an effective treatment. For now we're just going to have to deal with however his body decides to deal with it. On a positive note, winter in Florida is over. Near record heat is in the forecast.

The nuns would be soooooo disappointed.