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Chapter 4: The situation gets more complicated with the return of Bruce.
vanalas posted new chapter in Destined Hearts
Praveen was standing in the doorway still trying to understand what was going on. He had his eyes fixed on Antonio and the man he was holding as if his life depended on it. He expected Antonio to stop, maybe move away from the guy and then say something but he was still holding him. Praveen felt as if his breaths had just seized. He had no idea why he felt betrayed when he knew that he wasn't even close to Antonio. On the other hand, Antonio didn't give a hoot if the boy was hurt or not. He- 5 comments
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Chapter 2: The wedding and a new life.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: The wedding and a new life.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story -
I'm definitely hoping on this bus with you till the end. Great first chapter and i am thirsty for more.
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Chapter 3: The truth comes out. How will Praveen take it?
vanalas posted new chapter in Destined Hearts
Praveen slowly opened his eyes, realizing that it was already morning. He slowly moved his eyes to the other side of the bed and noticed that his husband wasn't there with him. He took a deep breath, getting up from the bed. He stretched his arms, yawned, and just smiled. It was his first day as a married man and he had no idea what to do but he was sure that he was gonna make everything perfect. He had no idea where his husband was and he honestly didn't wanna look for him. "Oh my God!" He- 2 comments
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It was early in the morning and Antonio was seated on his bed with his mind elsewhere. He wasn't himself. All he had been thinking about was his boyfriend, how much he loved him and how much he wanted him. He didn't even call him to say good morning to him and give him a kiss. He didn't sleep the entire night. He had been thinking about what his mother had done and how he regretted coming back home. The previous day morning he had been happy, he had been texting his boyfriend and he had been
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Chapter 1: Antonio and Praveen's lives are about to change.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Antonio and Praveen's lives are about to change.
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Chapter 1: Antonio and Praveen's lives are about to change.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Antonio and Praveen's lives are about to change.
And I'll deliver. It's a promise -
Chapter 1: Antonio and Praveen's lives are about to change.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Antonio and Praveen's lives are about to change.
Thanks @mayday -
Chapter 1: Antonio and Praveen's lives are about to change.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Antonio and Praveen's lives are about to change.
You're right.... This story might be like an opposite version of Cinderella but I can assure you that you'll enjoy it. But also one thing I can promise you is that this serial will surprise you in ways you won't even imagine. So hold on tightly to your seat 😁😁😁😁 -
Chapter 1: Antonio and Praveen's lives are about to change.
vanalas posted new chapter in Destined Hearts
PRESENT DAY It was a great day. The sun was almost setting and the wind was blowing lovingly, making it cool and wonderful. It was quiet... It was peaceful... it was amazing and the weather was just adorable. The cool breeze was making everything seem magical and the setting sun was amazing to see. It was setting the right mood for someone to have a wonderful day. "Hmm," A young man breathed in the wonderful breeze, letting it take him places he'd never been before. "This is wonderfu- 11 comments
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It was a great day at the temple. People from all walks of life were going in and out of the temple to praise and worship the almighty for what he had done for them. The temple was one of the biggest and most popular in the entire city. The people of Ashton, a country rich in culture knew exactly what they needed to do to please the Lord. Emilia Gonzalez and her husband Harvey were also at the temple. She had her hands held together, staring at the statue that was right in front of her. She
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Praveen is a starry-eyed young groom dreaming of a fairy tale life with his husband. But what happens when this fairy tale has no happily ever after? What happens when this new life he begins brings more than he had bargained for? Follow Praveen and Antonio's story as their lives dramatically change after a secret is revealed in this epic tale. Can a young boy survive in a world that is against him? What happens when fuel is added to a fire that's already ignited and what will happen to Bruce and Antonio's great love? Follow as Praveen deals with the disappoint of his broken dreams.
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The king and the queen came to the living room and sat on the couch silently. Both of them didn't look good. Granny and Hanna were already in the room and Henry was there with them. He was sitting with Hanna and both of them seemed quiet. "Where is Luis?" The queen asked. Hanna sighed. "Isn't it obvious?" She said softly. "I am sure he has gone to Aidan's castle. He has been going there every day. That has become his daily routine." "Yeah," Henry sat properly on the couch. "I don't e
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Aidan and granny appeared right in the castle living room, holding each other's hands. As soon as he appeared, Aidan quickly rubbed the tear which had fallen when he appeared. He let go of granny's hand and stood still, staring down at the floor. "Hey!" He heard Ethan's happy voice. Aidan quickly moved his eyes to the direction of the voice and got emotional when he saw Ethan and his baby rushing towards him. Even though he was happy seeing Ethan, his eyes were on his baby. He was lookin
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“What the fuck is this?” Wyatt panted, spitting out the food in his mouth. “What the hell did you serve me?” Hearing the angry voice from Wyatt, the maid trembled, throwing herself on the floor. “It is your food, my Lord.” She quavered, trembling like a leaf. “What?” Wyatt bellowed, throwing the plate of soup on the floor. It broke into pieces. “Is this food befitting of a god?” “I'm... I...” “Silence!” Wyatt raised his hand furiously. “You are all useless. You are as useless as.
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Angria, a thousand years ago before civilization... * A long time ago, before civilization and before man even knew the use of technology or any other modern equipment, people lived in fear as they were ruled by a ruthless and tyrant evil king who used his army to get whatever he wanted. People suffered at the hands of this ruthless and cruel leader. They couldn't do a thing without the knowledge of this cruel leader. He had conquered the small clan which was rich in gold and land. He us
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Chapter 15: The truth is out. Will Aidan return?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 15: The truth is out. Will Aidan return?
Well, we're gonna find out soon -
The elevator door opened wide and Luis came rushing out, stretching his arms. It was in the morning, 9.am to be precise and he had just woken up about half an hour ago. He had taken a quick shower and then rushed to the elevator. He felt as if hunger was about to kill him. He had woken up really hungry and it had never happened before. But what he needed was some real good food to feed his poor hungry stomach. Luis was putting on a beautiful yet simple cargo short, a deep yellow t-shirt and
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Luis came out of the bathroom with a towel wrapped around his waist and using another to towel his hair. Luis' room had been fully renovated and refurnished. The color of the room plus the design was now different. The bathroom though it was a three in one was replaced with different things. The Jacuzzi had been replaced by a bigger one and so did the hot tub. The multiple shower head system was now upgraded and it was really beautiful. In his room, the bed and everything including the couch
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Aidan came walking down the stairs slowly, taking step by step. He seemed really lost, thinking about everything that had been happening in his life. He was really confused and he failed to understand any of the things that had happened to him. His face was sweaty...his heart was pounding in his chest...his body was quivering. There was a powerful but small vibration that took control of his body. He couldn't understand a thing. He was really weak...he was vulnerable...he was frozen. “You ar
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Luis was seated in his room with his eyes on the huge TV which showed a beautiful action film which he was trying to concentrate on. He was still in the same room as his room was getting renovated and refurnished. He had got rid of all Aidan's belongings and didn't even bother to find out what really happened to them. Luis had always been staying in the palace after granny recovered. He used to stay with granny who had been recovering and they surely talked and did everything just to avoid t
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Chapter 11: Aidan let's go.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 11: Aidan let's go.
It's my pleasure... Thanks a lot for your love and support -
I just started the story but i am loving it. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story
